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Rorshak
Join Date: Apr 2008
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Im just playing HHboard, you know I love you....................
I bet your achin' to boycott me just cuz I bring noise to the world//
and effect the young minds of the boys and the girls// with all the controverse and violence to launch a verse and silence// every person with the common words of spineless// human beings that are conservative pricks// who tries to bash someone that deserves to be sick// but Im not giving into it, they need to learn it and quick// that I was born with a fuckin' curse to just spit// makin' fluent decisions for this music and business// leave y'all toothless in ditches tryin' to come through the position// reload with another clip and let the rubber slip// then pull out and bust my sperm on your mothers lip// And all you half ass rappers ain't nothin' but groupy faggots// gettin' aimed with more 'comebacks' than a pornographic movie actress// equipped with a double barrel twelve gauge and hollows to shoot// and a dick that never lies, so open your mouth and 'swallow the truth'// Spewin' fantastic expression with catastrophic essence// Of some graphic collections of violent action in presence// My ratchet is wreckless cuz one blast and your headless// Tote the fuckin' hatchet and slice a faggot in sections// and if I see this verse messed up, I'm a stretch the editor// last time you 'fucked with a sixteen' was on 'How To Catch a Predator'// cuz Im the type to catch fags and smack 'em hard// and knock so many teeth out, the toothfairy'll have to leave platinum cards//
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Dr. Pussy
Join Date: Jul 2007
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sniff my hairy glock
fore i shoot you with my cock drag yo ass around the block wearing only a vest top your flow a big flop my toe reach the mop SPILL THAT SHIT ON YO ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tight rhymes though mayne aw hell yeah :)
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Wordsmith
Join Date: May 2008
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MM06 i usually hate but this was sick....a breathe of fresh air to the board....stay up
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***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
Join Date: Dec 2006
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This Was decent..
Keep doin you nigga.. feed my drop..constantly striving
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Rorshak
Join Date: Apr 2008
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Props for the feed y'all......uppin this
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This idiot already posted this, got negative feed, removed it, & re-posted it in a new thread.
And despite what other people have said, this is not good. It's awkward & uncreative. Its' overall tone reads like the bastard child of a few rappers' styles - after strokes & mass genetic regression. Last edited by Shogun; 01-03-2009 at 07:13 PM. Reason: Oxford comma nigga |
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Rorshak
Join Date: Apr 2008
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Lol, whatever you say friendo. We can't all be completely original and complex veterans like you Shogun.
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S.F.S. Coming!
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hmm nothing bitten at all....pretty good.....well u had 2 or 3 lines which contained forced multies and maybe u couldve used more wordplay + punches.....but there was enough in it i guess......stay up....7.5/10
PS: do u like my red hair????
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Join Date: Dec 2008
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the comeback line was really good, rest was average
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Rorshak
Join Date: Apr 2008
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Could you please inform me on the 2 or 3 lines that were forced cuz I'd really like to know.
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S.F.S. Coming!
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with all the controverse and violence to launch a verse and silence//
every person with the common words of spineless// unless u can explain this sentence properly....the second line didnt really make sense to me.....its like u havent completed the sentence..... makin' fluent decisions for this music and business// leave y'all toothless in ditches tryin' to come through the position// the delivery was not that good....the second line was pretty random coming after the first....and it didnt really seem to rhyme either....business and position dont rhyme......
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Wordsmith
Join Date: May 2008
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y'all know i was jokin yeah? his shit is full of bitten and recycled lines lmao.....
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THA NINJA CLIQUE GENERAL
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cuz Im the type to catch fags and smack 'em hard//
and knock so many teeth out, the toothfairy'll have to leave platinum cards// big l recycling
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Join Date: Oct 2008
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don't bite G.
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Rorshak
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with all the controverse and violence to launch a verse and silence//
every person with the common words of spineless// The next bar after the second line was supposed to connect........
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myspace.com/ObeythePen
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I always wonder why you never leave Feed on my shit^^
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Rorshak
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You have got to be one of the dumbest faggots to ever walk the earth.
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u just played off it dont front just try and write something ur own son dont get mad cuz u have no talent
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The alias is Protege
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how many times u going 2 post this verse?
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Rorshak
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I haven't friendo, so feed this drop or I'll open up a can of whoop ass.
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I Dont Think You Can Open Up A Can
Cuz Whoop Ass Requires the Use Of a Can Opener Not None Of That Retard-esq Pop Tab Bullshit Iont Think Your Surrogate Mother Would Allow You To Use Such A Devise In Fear Of Your Own Safety...
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