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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
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I've come armed with verses, ready to bomb with curses
To avoid any damage or harm, cowards disperse quick I deliver naturally, no need to rehearse shit My style is a labor of love, nigga I birthed it My mind's agility gives me great rhyme ability I view battles and freestyles like crimes and killing sprees Solo assassin, I'll ride alone and still crush squads Only conversation occuring is me screamin "fuck yall" I'm the illest lyricist to hold the crown thus far I'm Tiger you John Daly, consistently sub-par When enemies talk shit, I only laugh cause I've learned Niggas who act wreckless eventually crash and burn When I arrive, alertness levels tend to rise past concern Go toe to toe with foes then put the ashes in urns Sharp words create deep wounds and serious scabs Leave challengers punch-drunk from vicious lyrical jabs My rhymes live in ya mind, don't hesitate to acknowledge this Saying I'm the best basically states the obvious I'm dwelling on a level where some of the greatest held court It'd be a tall order for me to just sell myself short Some words ain't in my vocab like "impossible", "defeat" Any thoughts of such things illogical and obsolete Numerous advantages serve as infinite protection If knowing is beautiful, then I'm the image of perfection
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz Last edited by Komplex; 12-18-2008 at 02:59 AM. |
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AkA Sur-Vis-U-All
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: pittsburgh
Posts: 11,277
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your a toyota to my lambo...............or your batman.....i'm rambo
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myspace.com/ObeythePen
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: In ThA NotePaD
Posts: 4,901
Repped: 79
Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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Whenever you Leave feed On My drop.. I Shall Return the Favor.
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Providence RI
Posts: 3,003
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Nice work..shit's solid. On Point
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
Repped: 117
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no doubt. good looks fam.
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 718
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Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
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I'm the illest lyricist to hold the crown thus far
I'm Tiger you John Daly, consistently sub-par -Definitely not sub-par material here. Entertaining drop with a smooth flow.
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So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in |
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Wordsmith
Join Date: May 2008
Location: In Battlefield's
Posts: 3,359
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dope drop as per usual....multi's and meta's were strong and had alot of good one-liners....stay up....
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MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot |
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myspace.com/ObeythePen
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: In ThA NotePaD
Posts: 4,901
Repped: 79
Repped 310 Times in 146 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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Ill Drop.
Multies are Strong. Flow Is Impeccable, Wordplay is Dope.. you already Know.. I'm dwelling on a level where some of the greatest held court It'd be a tall order for me to just sell myself short Fuckin Ill^^ I'm the illest lyricist to hold the crown thus far I'm Tiger you John Daly, consistently sub-par Wowwww.. Lol @ Tambo thinking We have Beef ![]()
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
Repped: 117
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indeed. thanks people
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
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up...........
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Washington D.C
Posts: 2,517
Repped: 305
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Neg Reps: 1
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drop waz incredible...
flow waz good..lyrical content waz good.. overall...nice drop my nigga.. keep that fire coming..holla at me bout a collab.. and feed my new track..Constantly striving.. I'm dwelling on a level where some of the greatest held court It'd be a tall order for me to just sell myself short. shit is amazing...lol..also the tiger and daly.. line waz good..
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![]() I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz Last edited by youngking187; 12-26-2008 at 11:41 PM. |
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
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good looks King.
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
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^^^^^^^^^^^
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: In the Dungeons of Rap
Posts: 38
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smooth multies and wordplay
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
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good looks fam.
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz Last edited by Komplex; 01-06-2009 at 07:04 AM. |
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
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up....................
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
Repped: 192
Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts
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yo plex - i already told you man, this shit is definitely smooth. great flow and you are very consistent.
--If you got a min, leave some feed on my new drop--
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So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in |
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Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: Waynes World
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haha this was dope
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
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thanks fam.
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
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up.............
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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