First Aid: Remove tha Tumour

Rizource · 12-16-2008, 04:49 AM

It's the incredible, indespensable Harsh Serenity Again,
Looks like things'll probably never be the same,
Y'all look at me scared like i'ma bring too much change,
If Hip Hop's Dying then i'ma resuscitate the Game,
That'll be the only change that I bring around here,
Injecting life into something that we all hold dear,
But get this clear,
If Hip Hop was my house I would kick your Ass out,
If we go toe to toe all I need is one round,
Expose you as an imposter, let people know what you're about,
(where as)I'm the Hottest thing on the street since the wild fires burnt out,
It's my duty as a Rider to expose the pussy inside ya
Listen to me, you're better off being a fashion designer,
Give you a hysterectomy and Take the bitch from inside ya,
sick of your love shit, sing something relevant old timer
And that's for real man, You ain't welcome no more,
I've packed up all your things, Now it's time to oust your ass out the Door,
Go west big homie, Where the grass is green
Hang up the A.T and the old ass Drum Machine,
My style so clean,
It's fresher than all y'all
In todays marketplace,
there's only room for one stall,
I walk tall, I see over the trees
No green in my lungs, only breath the fresh breeze
And if you test me,
It's my mission to finish ya,
I'll Squeeze, pop and Diminish ya,
I'm in the definition of Fire,
My style will give you a blister,
I send my words at ya like a twister
Topple you down in a whisper

RodKnee · 12-16-2008, 11:14 AM

Oh no. This guy thinks he's dean martin or some shit

Tom Chambers · 12-16-2008, 11:28 AM

this wasn't actually that bad...........you either have a decent grasp of actual flow or you actually record............

Rizource · 12-18-2008, 09:32 AM

Thanks alot for the feedback man. Are you still looking for beats to rap over?

Tom Chambers · 12-18-2008, 11:39 AM

yea......you produce too?

Rizource · 12-18-2008, 01:17 PM

Yeah. Just having to start again with my beats though because my old laptop broke. I'll upload some this weekend though if you're still looking for some to rap over. Cheers bro.

12-16-2008, 04:49 AM	#1
Rizource Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Liberty City Posts: 160 Repped: 33 Repped 21 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	First Aid: Remove tha Tumour First Aid: Remove tha Tumour It's the incredible, indespensable Harsh Serenity Again, Looks like things'll probably never be the same, Y'all look at me scared like i'ma bring too much change, If Hip Hop's Dying then i'ma resuscitate the Game, That'll be the only change that I bring around here, Injecting life into something that we all hold dear, But get this clear, If Hip Hop was my house I would kick your Ass out, If we go toe to toe all I need is one round, Expose you as an imposter, let people know what you're about, (where as)I'm the Hottest thing on the street since the wild fires burnt out, It's my duty as a Rider to expose the pussy inside ya Listen to me, you're better off being a fashion designer, Give you a hysterectomy and Take the bitch from inside ya, sick of your love shit, sing something relevant old timer And that's for real man, You ain't welcome no more, I've packed up all your things, Now it's time to oust your ass out the Door, Go west big homie, Where the grass is green Hang up the A.T and the old ass Drum Machine, My style so clean, It's fresher than all y'all In todays marketplace, there's only room for one stall, I walk tall, I see over the trees No green in my lungs, only breath the fresh breeze And if you test me, It's my mission to finish ya, I'll Squeeze, pop and Diminish ya, I'm in the definition of Fire, My style will give you a blister, I send my words at ya like a twister Topple you down in a whisper __________________ Confusion occurs comin' up in a cold world

12-16-2008, 11:28 AM	#3
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,381 Repped: 134 Repped 510 Times in 316 Posts Neg Reps: 20 Neg Repped at 71 Times in 56 Posts	this wasn't actually that bad...........you either have a decent grasp of actual flow or you actually record............ __________________ http://www.datpiff.com/Tom_Chambers_Official_Jae_Rock_Tash_Stack_B-d.m104300.html NEW TAPE!

12-18-2008, 09:32 AM	#4
Rizource Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Liberty City Posts: 160 Repped: 33 Repped 21 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Thanks alot for the feedback man. Are you still looking for beats to rap over? __________________ Confusion occurs comin' up in a cold world

12-18-2008, 11:39 AM	#5
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,381 Repped: 134 Repped 510 Times in 316 Posts Neg Reps: 20 Neg Repped at 71 Times in 56 Posts	yea......you produce too? __________________ http://www.datpiff.com/Tom_Chambers_Official_Jae_Rock_Tash_Stack_B-d.m104300.html NEW TAPE!

12-18-2008, 01:17 PM	#6
Rizource Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Liberty City Posts: 160 Repped: 33 Repped 21 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Yeah. Just having to start again with my beats though because my old laptop broke. I'll upload some this weekend though if you're still looking for some to rap over. Cheers bro. __________________ Confusion occurs comin' up in a cold world

12-16-2008, 11:14 AM	#2
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,362 Repped: 817 Repped 446 Times in 245 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 32 Times in 28 Posts	Oh no. This guy thinks he's dean martin or some shit

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