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Old 12-10-2008, 05:37 AM   #1
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*~Gun Shop~*

I'm on point, eyes open, at the edge of my seat//
Metaphorically on my toes, you could check on my sneaks//
Too much heart, grab a stethescope, check on my beat//
Lyrically god, jesus forwards your confessions to me//
I'll give a lesson for free, outline rap in black and white//
Cuz I developed flows mo nasty than hermaphadites//
Dudes aint even half as nice, and I got a late start//
Bet money I'm at the finish line soon as the race start//
Give up tryna be me I'm trade marked//
Ready for battle wit bag pipes and war paint, I'm a brave heart//
Raps better to me than what the slaves bought//
So needless to say I flow like I got Kunta Kentay's heart//
...And a slave mark under my heal//
But its just coincidince that my hands stuck to the steel//
...I'm on a roll like a tumblin wheel//
A pain in your neck like swallowin hundreds of pills//
Swag got that fuck it appeal...duck, my hands heavy//
Get caught slippin and they'll break you like the damn leavys//
I land plenty punches hittin harder than grand slams//
Kickin it nicer than Tekken Eddy on a hand stand//
I'm the damn man...don't wish death on any men//
But test me and you die much faster than kenny can//
Think Eminem, I'm as grimey as stan//
Drivin off cliffs, bodys all tied in a van//
Ya cross that line in the sand, and dissapear like the top of that//
Thing that be measurin the time wit the sand//
I could go way harder than this//
I wrote out my competition...your not part of the list//
And let not an artist forget, me and my team strong//
Even though they play the background like a theme song//
I understand you tired but sleep on?//
and take a long nap like you counted till all of the sheep gone//
I get my "now now" and my "heem" on//
Rappers like, "I need to get a hold of what he's on"//
My cheese long enough that it could prolly keep me stuck in a suite//
The game got dudes chained but they aint fuckin wit me//
Be grateful I gave you somethin for free//
I got the controll like watchin TV from a comfortable seat//
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Old 12-10-2008, 07:41 PM   #2
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It's beast but...why is it called gun shop?
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Old 12-11-2008, 04:00 PM   #3
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thats just the name of the beat that it goes wit...so if niggas wanna see ti next to a beat they can you tube that shit
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Old 12-11-2008, 06:13 PM   #4
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Feelin The Flow/Mutlies/Punches.

Dope Shit.. I'm Sure You Already Knew..

Raps better to me than what the slaves bought//
So needless to say I flow like I got Kunta Kentay's heart//

And let not an artist forget, me and my team strong//
Even though they play the background like a theme song//
I understand you tired but sleep on?//
and take a long nap like you counted till all of the sheep gone//

...And a slave mark under my heal//
But its just coincidince that my hands stuck to the steel//

Hmm ima Give It a Strong 8..
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Old 12-12-2008, 03:58 AM   #5
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good looks on the feed ma niggs...good to see a couple familiar faces around here
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Old 12-12-2008, 09:25 AM   #6
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flow was sharp....multi's were tight and had a few good one liners...

I could go way harder than this//
I wrote out my competition...your not part of the list//

fav line^overall good drop...stay up....
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Old 12-13-2008, 07:25 AM   #7
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good lookin on the feed ma niggs...keep that shit comin
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Old 12-15-2008, 04:42 PM   #8
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uppin this shit
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Old 12-19-2008, 10:40 AM   #9
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still bumpin
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Old 12-19-2008, 03:00 PM   #10
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Some good shit. Looking forward to seeing you go harder in the follow up
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Old 12-25-2008, 01:40 PM   #11
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uppin this shit
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that shits real tight!!
dope man
and your flow stays heavy
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