First 16 bar!

Rabbit93 · 11-18-2008, 08:27 PM

Yo, Im new here and I just wanted to drop a quick something. If you liked it, just give me alittle rep points. Here we go:

Ritz · 11-18-2008, 08:30 PM

props its pretty good you should record it to see how good it will sound

Bunny_Rabbit · 11-18-2008, 08:34 PM

Pretty decent.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 11-18-2008, 08:40 PM

Hmmm Looks Like MM06 Has An Alias

Rabbit93 · 11-18-2008, 08:54 PM

Thank you Ritz for the feedback.

Rabbit93 · 11-19-2008, 01:48 AM

Im uppin this.........

avPro · 11-19-2008, 02:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rabbit93

Yo, Im new here and I just wanted to drop a quick something. If you liked it, just give me alittle rep points. Here we go:

I like to stay neutral with less confortation//
but won't hesitate to give the rest complications//
give your slutty ass bitch a chest operation//
and let the Smith and Wes' hang out like breast augmentations//
cuz see my shit is polished and glowed with an astonishin' flow//
fuck the chronic and dough, I've come to get demonic below//
in the Underground circuit, cuz you know my brain's races//
your CD's a waste of tracks like a closed down train station//
my style is perpetual to vile intellectuals//
and piles in a vesicle of wild shit effectable//
to leave any boy in silence cuz I annoy the nicest//
I'll set your body on fire and destroy the hydrant//
since I bring the noise and violence really sick and raw//
cuz my personality's always quick to brawl//
so If you don't like any of my shit at all//
then you all can blow me till I start to see my dick dissolve//

feeling most of it, the bolded part just threw me off tho

Rebel INS {CF} · 11-19-2008, 03:57 AM

Waste of tracks like a closed down train station ? Definatly seen that before

Rabbit93 · 11-19-2008, 06:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by avPro

feeling most of it, the bolded part just threw me off tho

Lol, alright. Thanks for the feedback though. But what's up Rebel?

GILoTINE · 11-19-2008, 07:11 PM

yo man maybe im just dumb, but i didn'te realize about the reppin, in my first post, so your either quick or not new here. anyways man. I would give that a 7 outa 10 nothing over the top, good use of vocabulary. but thats about all. yo man you wont get no reppin from me askin for it lol. gona have to write somthing special in order to wooow me. peace

Rabbit93 · 11-19-2008, 07:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GILoTINE

yo man maybe im just dumb, but i didn'te realize about the reppin, in my first post, so your either quick or not new here. anyways man. I would give that a 7 outa 10 nothing over the top, good use of vocabulary. but thats about all. yo man you wont get no reppin from me askin for it lol. gona have to write somthing special in order to wooow me. peace

It's all good, I was just posting something quick; nothing that good. And yes, I have been lurking here for a while, checking out all the drama that's been going down on here, and all the verses y'all drop. I just decided to make an account and drop stuff since I love writing lyrics. Anyway, thanks for the feed.

TheRealProtege · 11-21-2008, 03:28 PM

eminem, royce... vakill?? hmmm you have their flow...

Rabbit93 · 11-21-2008, 03:46 PM

Is that suppose to be a compliment???

Blizzy · 11-21-2008, 04:07 PM

isn't MM06 suddenly obsessed with rep points and now rabbit joins and he's demandin rep points for his 1st drop!!! when i joined i aint have a fuckin clue what rep and shit was....

Rabbit93 · 11-21-2008, 04:11 PM

Did you not read one of my posts.......I said I've been lurking around here for sometime; and I seem to recall stumbling upon a thread where you and some other people were talking about how y'all had 58000 rep points or something, and I noticed every time someone would make a thread, they would say "rep me" So I just thought I could get as much rep points as the other people on here; no harm in that.

TheRealProtege · 11-21-2008, 10:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rabbit93

Yo, Im new here and I just wanted to drop a quick something. If you liked it, just give me alittle rep points. Here we go:

I like to stay neutral with less confortation//
but won't hesitate to give the rest complications//
give your slutty ass bitch a chest operation//
and let the Smith and Wes' hang out like breast augmentations//
cuz see my shit is polished and glowed with an astonishin' flow//
fuck the chronic and dough, I've come to get demonic below//
in the Underground circuit, cuz you know my brain's races//
your CD's a waste of tracks like a closed down train station//
my style is perpetual to vile intellectuals//
and piles in a vesicle of wild shit effectable//
to leave any boy in silence cuz I annoy the nicest//
I'll set your body on fire and destroy the hydrant//
since I bring the noise and violence really sick and raw//
cuz my personality's always quick to brawl//
so If you don't like any of my shit at all//
then you all can blow me till I start to see my dick dissolve//

just seen ur rep points n mm06 repped ya.. lmao u r him

negged ya into the RED ZONE

Rabbit93 · 11-22-2008, 03:15 AM

No I'm not; why do you keep accusing me? And why do I have have -114 reputation? I mean, come on.

Haterz · 11-22-2008, 10:40 AM

lmaooooooooooooooo

exposed...most credit goes to rebel for his detective work n other thread

11-18-2008, 08:27 PM	#1
Rabbit93 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Out of this world Posts: 18 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	First 16 bar! First 16 bar! Yo, Im new here and I just wanted to drop a quick something. If you liked it, just give me alittle rep points. Here we go: Last edited by Rabbit93; 11-26-2008 at 04:01 AM.

11-18-2008, 08:34 PM	#3
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 118 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	Pretty decent. __________________

11-18-2008, 08:40 PM	#4
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,907 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Hmmm Looks Like MM06 Has An Alias __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

11-19-2008, 03:57 AM	#8
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,454 Repped: 151 Repped 646 Times in 303 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	Waste of tracks like a closed down train station ? Definatly seen that before __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

11-19-2008, 07:11 PM	#10
GILoTINE Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: utah Posts: 162 Repped: 14 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	re yo man maybe im just dumb, but i didn'te realize about the reppin, in my first post, so your either quick or not new here. anyways man. I would give that a 7 outa 10 nothing over the top, good use of vocabulary. but thats about all. yo man you wont get no reppin from me askin for it lol. gona have to write somthing special in order to wooow me. peace

11-18-2008, 08:30 PM	#2
Ritz Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 631 Repped: 78 Repped 47 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 39 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	props its pretty good you should record it to see how good it will sound

11-18-2008, 08:54 PM	#5
Rabbit93 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Out of this world Posts: 18 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thank you Ritz for the feedback.

11-19-2008, 01:48 AM	#6
Rabbit93 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Out of this world Posts: 18 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Im uppin this.........

11-21-2008, 03:28 PM	#12
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,029 Repped: 166 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	eminem, royce... vakill?? hmmm you have their flow... __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

11-21-2008, 03:46 PM	#13
Rabbit93 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Out of this world Posts: 18 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Is that suppose to be a compliment???

11-21-2008, 04:07 PM	#14
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,369 Repped: 691 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	isn't MM06 suddenly obsessed with rep points and now rabbit joins and he's demandin rep points for his 1st drop!!! when i joined i aint have a fuckin clue what rep and shit was.... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

11-21-2008, 04:11 PM	#15
Rabbit93 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Out of this world Posts: 18 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Did you not read one of my posts.......I said I've been lurking around here for sometime; and I seem to recall stumbling upon a thread where you and some other people were talking about how y'all had 58000 rep points or something, and I noticed every time someone would make a thread, they would say "rep me" So I just thought I could get as much rep points as the other people on here; no harm in that.

11-22-2008, 03:15 AM	#17
Rabbit93 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Out of this world Posts: 18 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	No I'm not; why do you keep accusing me? And why do I have have -114 reputation? I mean, come on.

11-22-2008, 10:40 AM	#18
Haterz Join Date: May 2007 Location: NY/NC Posts: 729 Repped: 24 Repped 68 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 11 Times in 10 Posts	lmaooooooooooooooo exposed...most credit goes to rebel for his detective work n other thread

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