VJay In Da Buildin'

Vjay88 · 07-24-2006, 08:11 PM

yo sup, here's a couple of bars for yall

Jam clots of blood givin' 'em out like// 'Condoms'
Like in 'Afrika' where that 'AIDs campagne's' gone// all wrong
Long 'for The V came to the Freestyle room
Pussy's where feelin Gangster shootin shit up in 'Doom'
Not 'Bulletproof' at all but lil' G feels 'Invinceble'
Like 'MJ flopped' homey// thats what you gon do

'Tips' 'll rush through makin your bones feel 'hollow'
Leakin so much blood even my bitch can't swallow
Oh No//I don't sneak in with the fo-fo
I'm come flashdancin on the floor-floor
See my enemy's walkin and explode-loads
Oh No[..]

tell 's what you think
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dtale253 · 07-24-2006, 08:13 PM

michael jackson didnt flop
and this is just alright

Vjay88 · 07-24-2006, 08:14 PM

compared to his earlier attempts he did but past that
props on the post

dtale253 · 07-24-2006, 08:16 PM

yea no prob just keep at it
but michael jackson is hard
tell me this isnt fly

Vjay88 · 07-24-2006, 08:19 PM

who doper than Michael in the zone
shit no one can touch him doin' his thing
Don't call him the King for nuffin'
(in his genre)
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.. LaDy HOVa .. · 07-24-2006, 08:21 PM

Umm ..
This Key Could Use Some Work ..
U Can Actually Rhyme & Tha`s Always Good ..
ya Struture is Confusin` ..
it Was Hard To Catch Tha Flow `cos U Had Slashes in Tha Wrong Places ..
But Umm .. U Can improve ya Lyrics ..
Try Uppin` ya Multi Usage ..
Throw a Couple Of Punches ..
Matter Fact U Don`t Even Need Punches ..
U Juss Needa Have Some Lines That`ll Make People Go "Damn Tha`s Hot" ..

Juss Step it Up a Bit .. U`ll Be Koo` ..

Vjay88 · 07-24-2006, 08:31 PM

yeah good lookin on the advice props
gotta step up the game
I'mma do that shit

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07-24-2006, 08:11 PM	#1
Vjay88 VJay - TakeOver Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: NL/UK Posts: 2,396 Repped: 210 Repped 306 Times in 46 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	VJay In Da Buildin' VJay In Da Buildin' yo sup, here's a couple of bars for yall Jam clots of blood givin' 'em out like// 'Condoms' Like in 'Afrika' where that 'AIDs campagne's' gone// all wrong Long 'for The V came to the Freestyle room Pussy's where feelin Gangster shootin shit up in 'Doom' Not 'Bulletproof' at all but lil' G feels 'Invinceble' Like 'MJ flopped' homey// thats what you gon do 'Tips' 'll rush through makin your bones feel 'hollow' Leakin so much blood even my bitch can't swallow Oh No//I don't sneak in with the fo-fo I'm come flashdancin on the floor-floor See my enemy's walkin and explode-loads Oh No[..] tell 's what you think 1.

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07-24-2006, 08:13 PM	#2
dtale253 Veteran Join Date: May 2006 Location: washington Posts: 4,765 Repped: 35 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	michael jackson didnt flop and this is just alright

07-24-2006, 08:14 PM	#3
Vjay88 VJay - TakeOver Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: NL/UK Posts: 2,396 Repped: 210 Repped 306 Times in 46 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	compared to his earlier attempts he did but past that props on the post

07-24-2006, 08:16 PM	#4
dtale253 Veteran Join Date: May 2006 Location: washington Posts: 4,765 Repped: 35 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yea no prob just keep at it but michael jackson is hard tell me this isnt fly

07-24-2006, 08:19 PM	#5
Vjay88 VJay - TakeOver Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: NL/UK Posts: 2,396 Repped: 210 Repped 306 Times in 46 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	who doper than Michael in the zone shit no one can touch him doin' his thing Don't call him the King for nuffin' (in his genre) 1.

07-24-2006, 08:21 PM	#6
.. LaDy HOVa .. STUD P.H.a.M.O.U.S Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: .. CiTy OF SiN .. Posts: 945 Repped: 3 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Umm .. This Key Could Use Some Work .. U Can Actually Rhyme & Tha`s Always Good .. ya Struture is Confusin` .. it Was Hard To Catch Tha Flow `cos U Had Slashes in Tha Wrong Places .. But Umm .. U Can improve ya Lyrics .. Try Uppin` ya Multi Usage .. Throw a Couple Of Punches .. Matter Fact U Don`t Even Need Punches .. U Juss Needa Have Some Lines That`ll Make People Go "Damn Tha`s Hot" .. Juss Step it Up a Bit .. U`ll Be Koo` ..

07-24-2006, 08:31 PM	#7
Vjay88 VJay - TakeOver Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: NL/UK Posts: 2,396 Repped: 210 Repped 306 Times in 46 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah good lookin on the advice props gotta step up the game I'mma do that shit 1.