anyone cop that new jedi mind?

TheRealProtege · 11-11-2008, 08:00 PM

had me in mah myrical lyrical mode, penned this shit quick

ladies extorted, babies aborted..
as they slept in tha womb, threatened 2 soon
even before birth they were destined for doom
tha innocent givin poison.. fed from tha spoon
except for tha goons..
..ethics upturned, lessons are learned
the Heavens are spurned while tha Other Seven still burn
fuel to Hell’s added, in the form of human souls
good deeds subtracted, of evil people wit inhumane goals
everybodys sold for the right price
as vision gets cloudy livin the night life
tha tongue sparks.. as young hearts turn metallic
tha sun’s blocked N gunshots r emphatic
but tha media mutes tha sounds
cuz when ya blown to a 1000 pieces tell me WHO COULD TELL?

Witty Qwan · 11-11-2008, 09:02 PM

pretty good...u bring a poetic vibe to ur drops

stay up fam^

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 11-11-2008, 09:14 PM

The Only Song I Fucked wITH Is Death Messiah... Other Than That.. Naw

TheRealProtege · 11-12-2008, 02:36 AM

ugh i been listening to there old tracks gettin ready for this one, now i heard the cd.. ughh.. dissapointed (-_-)

Shogun · 11-12-2008, 09:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnBrEaKaBlE

had me in mah myrical lyrical mode, penned this shit quick

And "human" & "inhumane" don't rhyme. You could have just used "inhuman".

GILoTINE · 11-12-2008, 02:43 PM

poetic, nice though, I dont like to hear songs complied of those kinda lyrics, but just readin um they were good. nice man that was killa. id give it a 8.9 outa 10

Blizzy · 11-12-2008, 02:45 PM

good quick drop...good multi's...flow was abit short but overall good drop....stay up

TheRealProtege · 11-12-2008, 03:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shogun

And "human" & "inhumane" don't rhyme. You could have just used "inhuman".

you so to0o0ough

Shogun · 11-12-2008, 06:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnBrEaKaBlE

you so to0o0ough

Yeah, my penchant for correct English is actually part of my pursuit of a "tough" image online.

Great logic.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 11-12-2008, 06:16 PM

Is It Your Job To Daily/Consistently Style On Rappers???^^^

11-11-2008, 08:00 PM	#1
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,026 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	anyone cop that new jedi mind? anyone cop that new jedi mind? had me in mah myrical lyrical mode, penned this shit quick ladies extorted, babies aborted.. as they slept in tha womb, threatened 2 soon even before birth they were destined for doom tha innocent givin poison.. fed from tha spoon except for tha goons.. ..ethics upturned, lessons are learned the Heavens are spurned while tha Other Seven still burn fuel to Hell’s added, in the form of human souls good deeds subtracted, of evil people wit inhumane goals everybodys sold for the right price as vision gets cloudy livin the night life tha tongue sparks.. as young hearts turn metallic tha sun’s blocked N gunshots r emphatic but tha media mutes tha sounds cuz when ya blown to a 1000 pieces tell me WHO COULD TELL? __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

11-11-2008, 09:02 PM	#2
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	pretty good...u bring a poetic vibe to ur drops stay up fam^ __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

11-11-2008, 09:14 PM	#3
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	The Only Song I Fucked wITH Is Death Messiah... Other Than That.. Naw __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

11-12-2008, 02:36 AM	#4
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,026 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	ugh i been listening to there old tracks gettin ready for this one, now i heard the cd.. ughh.. dissapointed (-_-) __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

11-12-2008, 02:43 PM	#6
GILoTINE Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: utah Posts: 162 Repped: 14 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	re poetic, nice though, I dont like to hear songs complied of those kinda lyrics, but just readin um they were good. nice man that was killa. id give it a 8.9 outa 10

11-12-2008, 02:45 PM	#7
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	good quick drop...good multi's...flow was abit short but overall good drop....stay up __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

11-12-2008, 06:16 PM	#10
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Is It Your Job To Daily/Consistently Style On Rappers???^^^ __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

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