anyone cop that new jedi mind?

TheRealProtege · 11-11-2008, 07:00 PM

had me in mah myrical lyrical mode, penned this shit quick

ladies extorted, babies aborted..
as they slept in tha womb, threatened 2 soon
even before birth they were destined for doom
tha innocent givin poison.. fed from tha spoon
except for tha goons..
..ethics upturned, lessons are learned
the Heavens are spurned while tha Other Seven still burn
fuel to Hell’s added, in the form of human souls
good deeds subtracted, of evil people wit inhumane goals
everybodys sold for the right price
as vision gets cloudy livin the night life
tha tongue sparks.. as young hearts turn metallic
tha sun’s blocked N gunshots r emphatic
but tha media mutes tha sounds
cuz when ya blown to a 1000 pieces tell me WHO COULD TELL?

Witty Qwan · 11-11-2008, 08:02 PM

pretty good...u bring a poetic vibe to ur drops

stay up fam^

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 11-11-2008, 08:14 PM

The Only Song I Fucked wITH Is Death Messiah... Other Than That.. Naw

TheRealProtege · 11-12-2008, 01:36 AM

ugh i been listening to there old tracks gettin ready for this one, now i heard the cd.. ughh.. dissapointed (-_-)

Shogun · 11-12-2008, 08:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnBrEaKaBlE

had me in mah myrical lyrical mode, penned this shit quick

And "human" & "inhumane" don't rhyme. You could have just used "inhuman".

GILoTINE · 11-12-2008, 01:43 PM

poetic, nice though, I dont like to hear songs complied of those kinda lyrics, but just readin um they were good. nice man that was killa. id give it a 8.9 outa 10

Blizzy · 11-12-2008, 01:45 PM

good quick drop...good multi's...flow was abit short but overall good drop....stay up

TheRealProtege · 11-12-2008, 02:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shogun

And "human" & "inhumane" don't rhyme. You could have just used "inhuman".

you so to0o0ough

Shogun · 11-12-2008, 05:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnBrEaKaBlE

you so to0o0ough

Yeah, my penchant for correct English is actually part of my pursuit of a "tough" image online.

Great logic.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 11-12-2008, 05:16 PM

Is It Your Job To Daily/Consistently Style On Rappers???^^^

11-11-2008, 07:00 PM	#1
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 1,597 Repped: 64 Repped 472 Times in 123 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 38 Posts	anyone cop that new jedi mind? anyone cop that new jedi mind? had me in mah myrical lyrical mode, penned this shit quick ladies extorted, babies aborted.. as they slept in tha womb, threatened 2 soon even before birth they were destined for doom tha innocent givin poison.. fed from tha spoon except for tha goons.. ..ethics upturned, lessons are learned the Heavens are spurned while tha Other Seven still burn fuel to Hell’s added, in the form of human souls good deeds subtracted, of evil people wit inhumane goals everybodys sold for the right price as vision gets cloudy livin the night life tha tongue sparks.. as young hearts turn metallic tha sun’s blocked N gunshots r emphatic but tha media mutes tha sounds cuz when ya blown to a 1000 pieces tell me WHO COULD TELL? __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

11-11-2008, 08:14 PM	#3
PBMaSteRMiNdiN Sex, Money & Drugs Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,729 Repped: 78 Repped 249 Times in 107 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 17 Posts	The Only Song I Fucked wITH Is Death Messiah... Other Than That.. Naw __________________ \|_\|-\|Myspace.com/pbthemastermind\|-\|_\| AZ- Legendary>>

11-12-2008, 01:36 AM	#4
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 1,597 Repped: 64 Repped 472 Times in 123 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 38 Posts	ugh i been listening to there old tracks gettin ready for this one, now i heard the cd.. ughh.. dissapointed (-_-) __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

11-12-2008, 01:43 PM	#6
GILoTINE Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: utah Posts: 161 Repped: 14 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	re poetic, nice though, I dont like to hear songs complied of those kinda lyrics, but just readin um they were good. nice man that was killa. id give it a 8.9 outa 10

11-12-2008, 01:45 PM	#7
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,178 Repped: 609 Repped 318 Times in 140 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 21 Posts	good quick drop...good multi's...flow was abit short but overall good drop....stay up __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

11-11-2008, 08:02 PM	#2
Witty Qwan R.I.P. King Of Pop Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 2,548 Repped: 79 Repped 315 Times in 208 Posts Neg Reps: 18 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	pretty good...u bring a poetic vibe to ur drops stay up fam^

11-12-2008, 05:16 PM	#10
PBMaSteRMiNdiN Sex, Money & Drugs Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,729 Repped: 78 Repped 249 Times in 107 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 17 Posts	Is It Your Job To Daily/Consistently Style On Rappers???^^^ __________________ \|_\|-\|Myspace.com/pbthemastermind\|-\|_\| AZ- Legendary>>

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