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Old 10-12-2008, 06:11 PM   #1
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a verse from a song im going to make, the song has three verses from where i rap from the perspective of a murderer, a slave, and a girl who has just been raped, here is the second verse. . =)


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Suppose to be a child of god, yet they still sin
Call me a n i g g e r... N they took my children
Hate is what they're filled with, guess faiths taken an ill twist
Yet rist is still slit, kids is still split/
While ive built an ill grip, mah back still feels whips
Mouth still spills spit.. see mah body is broken..
Throats use to tha rope kid, see its constantly chokin
While friends tellin me i should still keep hope lit/
Naw cant help but feel hopeless, so now i hope less
Jus pray ta gods chest i get out this hot mess
Dont know what of the plots left, what is not said
How much more pain can i take, can i stay in this shape/
Cant even stand the heat N im hungry N malnurished
So I just plant mah seeds N hope that they flourish
See I know life'll get better Its just startin' off track
Though the pain still lingers through the scars on my back/




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Old 10-13-2008, 03:56 AM   #5
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LoL@ the only people commenting happento be 3 of the most stupidest people on this board -_-
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the first line was best, but all of its dope. good, authentic spit (fuck them haters). 8.5/10
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Probably Worst Thing I ever Read.

3.8/10 Congrats You're Fucking Wack
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Old 10-14-2008, 01:21 AM   #8
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the first line was best, but all of its dope. good, authentic spit (fuck them haters). 8.5/10
chea homey, thanks for tha real feed
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Old 10-14-2008, 01:32 AM   #9
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stay out of mah threads you fat fugly motherfucker

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thats a coward move nigga pullin pics up n shit.
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stay out of mah threads you fat fugly motherfucker

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thats pistol..................wow..............

ps this is pretty good rhyme.....................7-10.............i liked it..........
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shut ya faggot ass up^

thanks to tha real feed above tho.
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Old 10-14-2008, 06:47 PM   #14
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lmaoooooooo

ima feed later though..*im high is a muthafucka*
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thanks For Promoting my Page Unbreakable U-Mad?
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LMAO!!!! Protege you faggot ass chubby chaser; gtfo.
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It's On My Myspace Page Myspace.com/pbthemastermind So You Lose, No One Exposed Anyone.

And hahahhhahahahaha At MM06 Dickriding For A Friend.. hahaahahaha


















































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i have no comment......u already skno wat ima say
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Prov!??!?!?! Where You been?!??!!? Lookin Like A Bum. . . Still. You <3 Me. Don't Front
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Werd^^^^ SMH @ PB. . Like Being White Is In Style
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