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Old 10-04-2008, 04:20 PM   #1
 
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All About Me

All About Me

Im the diamond in the durt, and a aint been crowned.
Im the one and only king, and a aint been crowned.
Im keepin' it real.
Now listen real close, cos am about to reveal, the secrets about my rap.
I aint doing any crap, jus make sure it rhyme.
And dont say its a crime, like robbin' a bank.
people say its just a prank, a say u get a life,
dont you got better to do, than takin' peoples money.
Your actin' like a dummy
Your actin' real damn stupid.
Im tellin' you am cupid, a got tha majic bow and arrow.
Your attitude is shallow.
Cos am the king, am the ruler, n it dosent make me cooler.
Its just they way i am.
I enjoy my life, i never carry a knife.
a think thats just daft.
thats all i got to say, Im done for today.
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Old 10-04-2008, 08:36 PM   #2
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im the diamond in the durt, and a aint been crowned.
Im the one and only king, and a aint been crowned.
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Old 10-04-2008, 09:01 PM   #3
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Old 10-04-2008, 10:15 PM   #4
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Old 10-05-2008, 08:17 AM   #5
 
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Old 10-05-2008, 09:12 AM   #6
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u bit that line from many men........so thats a fail

this drop as a whole is also a fail.....not because im hating.....

1. ur drop is basic
2. ur drop is filled with nursery rhymes
3. some lines are plain random
4. most of it doesnt make sense....
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Old 10-05-2008, 01:52 PM   #7
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^ Those 4 points seem to fit ur drops exactly :\
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Old 10-05-2008, 04:52 PM   #8
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^lmao...not only did he bite...he bit average lines lmao...from the most popular 50 song....
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Old 10-05-2008, 09:16 PM   #9
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on the real man,

quit.
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Old 10-06-2008, 03:58 AM   #10
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^ Those 4 points seem to fit ur drops exactly :\
so my drops have nursery rhymes and doesnt make sense????

son ur the fag that rhymed structure and culture together.....get some friends who can help u learn stupid one......
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Old 10-06-2008, 02:29 PM   #11
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so my drops have nursery rhymes and doesnt make sense????

son ur the fag that rhymed structure and culture together.....get some friends who can help u learn stupid one......
Lmao, it's alright Brizzle, Rebel's just mad that he has only one testicle which can't get him a bitch. J/K but on the real though, you children need to quit fighting on a message board; it's getting rediculous, lol.
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lmfao @ runnin of here to diss me after I caught u bitin but ignorin me in the thread
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