SouthernAnimal

Raps with a Unheard Of Style, N My Per-sona To Spooky
Crew On Some Foreign Shit, Like We Were On A Su-zuki
I Throw Spears Thru The Chest Of Who Im Better Than
Ill Put My Pears To Rest, Abuse A Veter-an
Reviews are better than, news on channel 10
You're Sperm couldn't poke "Walls" If You Was Cumin On Darts
Ya See Ya "Shits" Fake Like Under Arm Farts
i commend men buryin fools, we end men caryin tools
you spittin hard never happened like 1940 cen-ten-arian jews
(centenarian is sum1 who is 100 or over, 1940 is when the holocaust was)
rhymes too hard, spit my shit you'd break ya trach
couldn't be on top my rhymes if you was a paper weight
ill behead the fiens, fixen 2 get shot up like he near phetamines
men-warn-da-kid, start being in-form-a-tive
my pen-torch-da-shit, + my lens-sort-a-big
i mean kid-honest-ly, i hit-da hottest-keys
w/ cryp-toghra-phy that'll beat it like kid-saude-my
(Michael Jackson Beat It)
go on start-your-shit end our part-ner-ship
take off part-your-hip, they call me a dick
so i pop viagra and show em how hard i get
how hard i spit, its that cotton mouth cronik shit
you red meat? ya you real fresh
yet-
im fresha than a mutha fuka that aint been killed yet

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Baller

forcing ya multies and ya wordplay/punchlines were corny as shit....you needa practice ya shit more....and listen to some good artists...cuz weezy aint helpin ya out

SouthernAnimal

well if you wanna know the truth all this shit is recycled from a while ago there actually from different verses from another site over a year ago but you my friend can suck my dick ? :) okay.

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SouthernAnimal

and i appreciate criticism but do it to help somebody not to talk shit, thats real.

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Baller

I gave you the only advice that would actually make you "decent"...theres no way in hell I'ma explain shit to you when you got the thought weezy can spit lyrics....queer

SouthernAnimal

ight i aint gonna argue with you about wayne your fav rapper or what i dont give a fuck but i appreciate the crit but you aint gonna talk shit why doing it, like i said its salvaged and im an audio guy anyway but i aint arguing on the i net if you got a problem we can book a fight in the octagon i fight mma as well if its not a big deal im cool with you just give helpful crit id do same for one of yours

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