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Old 09-06-2008, 06:21 AM   #1
 
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If victorys a bitch ima fuck it and propose
but those who appose get turned into stone
madoosa with the chrome proof im in zone
u aint got shit but a computer u a looser in ya home
i dont trust a dude n they shudnt trust me
cuz i can ball on ma lone like bugsy
anit police rapper till the reaper gets me
im food to the worm and the people forget me
look its gonna take more then a line
g5 flow wtahc evrybody glide
get high on my rhymes bars r white lines
there aint no wrong for me its allways the right time
u gonna have to bribe cuz u a liar man
thug nar u on the web more then spiderman
anti gay rap stand with me in the shutters
cuz ima expose the pussy like britney n the others
the worlds tough u bluff take it with a pill
cuz it seems like evryday somebody gettin killed
ill be the victor one way or the other
cuz my flow hot like bomboay in the summer stunner
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Old 09-06-2008, 04:27 PM   #2
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decent, incorporate some sort of multies or fresh punches and itd be better
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Old 09-06-2008, 06:04 PM   #3
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I couldn't read the wackness cleary....too many typos
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