TheMadWriter

In this day in time you can't ressurect love again/
Now you got deception, like a group of damn republicans/
Why would I vote Bush again?/
He wants to prolong this war/
So much turmoil he shook this country down to it's core/
As I think about it i'm walkin down the liberty corridor/
Starin at this white house and it's million dollar floors/
Wonderin why we got Bush when we coulda had Al Gore/
Maybe stopped Global Warmin maybe-economies restored/
Why would I vote Bush when he can't even see me/
He ain't helpin us he's puttin dead kids on TV (referencing Saddam's sons(/
He's the one that's sendin us there/
It's basically oil for stacks/
I vote barrack becauses he wants to take us out the barracks/
So we can see our families, no more police grabbin me/
No descrmination no more overseas monopoly/
They made me a bad image, i'm a movie they overcroppin me/
RZA had to bring us all back sayin 'ya'll ain't stoppin me'/
And while he's bringin us back their peepin and they're droppin me/
50 cals on roofs for speakin the truth, adoptin me/
It's all relevent, because Bush is what's knockin me/
Man I can't no longer drive down the block bumpin a beat/
Cuz if I ever play Nas I got bugs in my car seat/
Man it's a damn shame how inferior the government feels/
Hidin their interior, and their back door deals/
Like it's never obvious, that's why I dropped this sentiment/
Because I feel if we elect Obama then change is eminent/
I don't vote him because he's black, that's somethin that I detest/
BET can suck a fat P-E-N-I-S/
Do you hate me, I hope not but man -I- Guess-/
I can't change your opinion cuz I - don't - infest/
Man I don't invade, despite my crazed cherades/
Because I saw the government and their frag grenades/
Now -they invade- they don't wanna see Barrack/
Because they know barrack wants to bring us back
But you know it's all good cuz in spite of their attacks/
They can never fuck history they can never change that/
We still know about Malcom, but they put out King/
Martin got a holiday, he was for peaceful things/
I hope the government doesn't try to change Obama/
They've got rednecks sayin he knew Osama/
And what the fuck is with this thing about 'Odrama'/
We gotta distort history, takin our own dignity/
I AM LEGEND mixtapes and Odrama in the vicinity/
Fuck that shit, fuck your feminine masculinity/
That shit is so gay it takes gay up to the infinity/
You want the truth like Obama's crazy preacher from Trinity?/
I'ma give it to you, and it might make me an enemy/
McCain's policy has no difference from that of Bush/
And I acknowledge that he's another government crook/
He put Palin out there to leave Hilary shook/
Attacked Obama for his supporters, that's us in his book/
And I drop this so hard cuz I can never get weak/
I can't suppress this man I only get once a damn week/
And this week was serious, the truth became my objective/
Don't hate me, rate me, and respect the perspective.

Ha ha ha, submit this to as many hip hop sites as ya can man..why we hate where's my cane McCain, make him dissapear like David Blaine..haha...

PBMaSteRMiNdiN

Didn't Read It All.. But From What i Read It Was DOpe

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TheMadWriter

Thanks for the criticism man, much appreciated. I'd also like everyone to disreguard the first version of this, the site froze up and it got submitted twice. Apologies, anyways, lemme hear some more opinions from ya'll.

Baller

this is corny as shit....you seem emo as fuck whining about political issues....ya lacked rhyme schemes, knowledge on what your writing about, and just writing in general....

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TheMadWriter

Alright, that's cool. Thanks for the criticism.

TheRealProtege

the flow was very choppy through out, and you didnt use no real rhyme scheme going on so that didnt help. but you did have some facts in there which made it seem like you actual had SOME idea what you were talking about. it was okay.

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