DX - Political Deception (Freestyle)

DXavier23 · 08-25-2008, 09:45 AM

Nobody is as hot as me ,when the subject is philosophy
Acknowledge me, on top of my words like an apostrophe
Stay strapped with knowledge B, raps defy logic see
They say life is a bitch, so I don't use misogyny
I told em to stop jockin me, but they do it constantly
If life is a movie, then Bennie Blanco from the Bronx is me
Express myself pompously, but also do it consciously
Every rap superlative, always corresponds with me
Write to my President, but he doesnt respond to me
Maybe cause I wrote FUCK U, but atleast Im speakin honestly
He made you leave your home, foreclosures on your property
Its like we stuck in a democracy, which favors aristocracy
The Fed bails out companies, which fade off the market
But dont give a shit if you get laid off from Target
All the pain, all the suffer, wish his father had worn a rubber
Or never had fucked his mother, or put him in the dumpster
Gave us all false promises in his two terms of incompetence
Fucked up the country, but he's firm with his accomplishments
Iraq accomplishes nothing, why the fuck are we still there
'Terrorists' is not an enemy, so we dont know who to kill there
Its like we're rats in a maze, with no cheese in sight
But although we went in wrong, we must leave it right
But what is right? its a civil war, so they'll continue to fight
Sunni verse Shiite, no peaceful route in sight
Soldiers, I salute your life and appreciate your service
But we must leave this war that deviates from purpose
Think about what we could do with all that money we saved
Feed children, build schools, instead of funding grenades
I support medicine, but for money, it has simple aspirations
So instead of curing whats wrong, they relieve symptoms of patients
More than a hint of frustration, Im sick of this nation
Obama's our last chance to bring it to salvation

xDizzex · 08-25-2008, 06:43 PM

get the fuck outta of here with this garbage nigga

Tha Truth · 08-25-2008, 06:44 PM

ppl sleepin on this

this was a good drop tho fam
u can with good punches & multies
ur vocab was ill to and content was str8
8.6/10

Jay-T · 08-25-2008, 07:05 PM

Quote:

Nobody is as hot as me ,when the subject is philosophy
Acknowledge me, on top of my words like an apostrophe
Stay strapped with knowledge B, raps defy logic see
They say life is a bitch, so I don't use misogyny

Quote:

I support medicine, but for money, it has simple aspirations
So instead of curing whats wrong, they relieve symptoms of patients

^^^ My fav lines..^^

Good shit..
Vocab:10/10
Multies:9/10...only one forced multie..
everything else was straight..

Overall: 9.3/10

TheRealProtege · 08-25-2008, 07:11 PM

i liked it. multies on point but da flow kind of stayed the same and dragged the first half, the first four bars were fire but i dont know i usually change rhymes every 2, 4 bars max or else it starts sounding kind of repetitive, but thats just me. either way i liked this piece.

8/10

Blizzy · 08-26-2008, 01:34 PM

people don't understand the agenda's behind wars, medicine and media so dickheads like Dizze make stupid comments...another good verse...multi's were good, subject was hot and alot of good lines to...stay up...Peace

DXavier23 · 08-30-2008, 03:01 AM

appreciate all the feed fam

DXavier23 · 09-07-2008, 12:11 AM

bump for feed

J~Souljah · 09-07-2008, 01:07 AM

ok 1st off...apostrophes don't go on top of words....

that's a long ass verse.....i'll edit this post with longer feed later this week...i dont feel like readin

Threyev · 09-14-2008, 01:34 AM

i dont get all these 8 outta tens and shit. i saw one line that was forced for this which makes it silk to 99.99999 others dudes on this site, and the content of course is exactly what people need to hear. so yeah i give it a 10/10. keep up fam, tho i obviously dont need to tell you that lol.

youngking187 · 09-14-2008, 04:18 AM

drop waz good my nigg..
the lyrical content waz excellent..
ima get into detail wit it a lil later..
but....9/10.....drop my new joint...
mustve 4got

DXavier23 · 09-15-2008, 05:39 PM

-iite man ill check that out

Threyev · 09-15-2008, 06:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

ok 1st off...apostrophes don't go on top of words....

how do you sound?

DXavier23 · 09-25-2008, 08:33 PM

new shit comin soon

J~Souljah · 09-25-2008, 10:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by khoop07

how do you sound?

i sound like u should get off my dick

don't<<<<<it's BESIDE the word...

but that's beside the point...fuck

yo ima leave feed later lol...

J~Souljah · 09-25-2008, 10:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DXavier23

Nobody is as hot as me ,when the subject is philosophy
Acknowledge me, on top of my words like an apostrophe
Stay strapped with knowledge B, raps defy logic see
They say life is a bitch, so I don't use misogyny
I told em to stop jockin me, but they do it constantly
If life is a movie, then Bennie Blanco from the Bronx is me
Express myself pompously, but also do it consciously
Every rap superlative, always corresponds with me
Write to my President, but he doesnt respond to me
Maybe cause I wrote FUCK U, but atleast Im speakin honestly
He made you leave your home, foreclosures on your property
Its like we stuck in a democracy, which favors aristocracy
The Fed bails out companies, which fade off the market
But dont give a shit if you get laid off from Target
All the pain, all the suffer, wish his father had worn a rubber
Or never had fucked his mother, or put him in the dumpster
Gave us all false promises in his two terms of incompetence
Fucked up the country, but he's firm with his accomplishments
Iraq accomplishes nothing, why the fuck are we still there
'Terrorists' is not an enemy, so we dont know who to kill there
Its like we're rats in a maze, with no cheese in sight
But although we went in wrong, we must leave it right
But what is right? its a civil war, so they'll continue to fight
Sunni verse Shiite, no peaceful route in sight
Soldiers, I salute your life and appreciate your service
But we must leave this war that deviates from purpose
Think about what we could do with all that money we saved
Feed children, build schools, instead of funding grenades
I support medicine, but for money, it has simple aspirations
So instead of curing whats wrong, they relieve symptoms of patients
More than a hint of frustration, Im sick of this nation
Obama's our last chance to bring it to salvation

ehhh....flow was good in the beginning but then it started to get redundant....and it got simplistic....vocab was advanced...but my only real problem is the content....i hate political pieces...cause it seems everyone who does them end up saying "it's all the presidents fault...THE END"...that's a bit annoying mainly because it's partially/mostly inaccurate and because it's used sooo much...the obama part killed it for me (in a bad way)...mainly because theres nothing revolutionary about what he proposes or what he believes in....only "revolutionary" thing about him is the color of his skin...at any rate....the beginning was a bit off topic....so this could have been much shorter...but ehh....good drop...i just dont agree with the content....keep it up

08-25-2008, 09:45 AM	#1
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	DX - Political Deception (Freestyle) DX - Political Deception (Freestyle) Nobody is as hot as me ,when the subject is philosophy Acknowledge me, on top of my words like an apostrophe Stay strapped with knowledge B, raps defy logic see They say life is a bitch, so I don't use misogyny I told em to stop jockin me, but they do it constantly If life is a movie, then Bennie Blanco from the Bronx is me Express myself pompously, but also do it consciously Every rap superlative, always corresponds with me Write to my President, but he doesnt respond to me Maybe cause I wrote FUCK U, but atleast Im speakin honestly He made you leave your home, foreclosures on your property Its like we stuck in a democracy, which favors aristocracy The Fed bails out companies, which fade off the market But dont give a shit if you get laid off from Target All the pain, all the suffer, wish his father had worn a rubber Or never had fucked his mother, or put him in the dumpster Gave us all false promises in his two terms of incompetence Fucked up the country, but he's firm with his accomplishments Iraq accomplishes nothing, why the fuck are we still there 'Terrorists' is not an enemy, so we dont know who to kill there Its like we're rats in a maze, with no cheese in sight But although we went in wrong, we must leave it right But what is right? its a civil war, so they'll continue to fight Sunni verse Shiite, no peaceful route in sight Soldiers, I salute your life and appreciate your service But we must leave this war that deviates from purpose Think about what we could do with all that money we saved Feed children, build schools, instead of funding grenades I support medicine, but for money, it has simple aspirations So instead of curing whats wrong, they relieve symptoms of patients More than a hint of frustration, Im sick of this nation Obama's our last chance to bring it to salvation __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

08-25-2008, 06:44 PM	#3
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	ppl sleepin on this this was a good drop tho fam u can with good punches & multies ur vocab was ill to and content was str8 8.6/10 __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

08-25-2008, 07:11 PM	#5
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,029 Repped: 166 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	i liked it. multies on point but da flow kind of stayed the same and dragged the first half, the first four bars were fire but i dont know i usually change rhymes every 2, 4 bars max or else it starts sounding kind of repetitive, but thats just me. either way i liked this piece. 8/10 __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

08-26-2008, 01:34 PM	#6
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	people don't understand the agenda's behind wars, medicine and media so dickheads like Dizze make stupid comments...another good verse...multi's were good, subject was hot and alot of good lines to...stay up...Peace __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

08-30-2008, 03:01 AM	#7
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	appreciate all the feed fam __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

08-25-2008, 06:43 PM	#2
xDizzex Banned Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: OWWW! Posts: 2,135 Repped: 153 Repped 292 Times in 130 Posts Neg Reps: 28 Neg Repped at 128 Times in 101 Posts	get the fuck outta of here with this garbage nigga

09-07-2008, 12:11 AM	#8
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	bump for feed __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

09-07-2008, 01:07 AM	#9
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	ok 1st off...apostrophes don't go on top of words.... that's a long ass verse.....i'll edit this post with longer feed later this week...i dont feel like readin

09-14-2008, 01:34 AM	#10
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	i dont get all these 8 outta tens and shit. i saw one line that was forced for this which makes it silk to 99.99999 others dudes on this site, and the content of course is exactly what people need to hear. so yeah i give it a 10/10. keep up fam, tho i obviously dont need to tell you that lol.

09-14-2008, 04:18 AM	#11
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	drop waz good my nigg.. the lyrical content waz excellent.. ima get into detail wit it a lil later.. but....9/10.....drop my new joint... mustve 4got __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

09-15-2008, 05:39 PM	#12
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	-iite man ill check that out __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

09-25-2008, 08:33 PM	#14
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	new shit comin soon __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

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