A little something

JR-One · 08-23-2008, 10:13 PM

I wrote this idk, a week or two ago. A literal keystyle, written in a notebook, 8 mile style. Here it goes:

friends and enemies; they're really the same people
they're all just trying to deceive you into thinkin' they ain't deceitful
I mean where do you draw the line between what's good and what's evil
when lives can be saved and ended within same needle
Well hell
Y'all can't blame an addict for bein' raised on a bottle
The same way you can't blame a turkey for sayin' gobble gobble
you don't blame an abused child for thinkin' their parents are awful
Nor can y'all blame a retard for not bein' too thoughtful
So please don't place blame on me for wantin' to say these words
cuz I don't blame God for fillin' a lovely sky with ugly birds
I'll quit ramblin': I miss you, you're not here and that hurts
you're the only thing in my life that works

I might write a more full-fledged free at some point or another, this was a half-assed sort of thing that I just wrote one day.

Lil Lay · 08-23-2008, 10:23 PM

first 4 lines are dope.

the first 2 especially

wtf at gobble gobble. NIGGA YOUR BETTER THAN THAT

J~Souljah · 08-23-2008, 11:39 PM

kinda horrible

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 08-24-2008, 02:34 AM

I Read This On MSN.. It Took Like 10 Minutes For Me To Figure Out How To Open It... But It Was Aightttt

~Menace~ · 08-24-2008, 01:32 PM

not "half-assed"....full-assed my friend

ThA ViiRu5 · 08-24-2008, 04:51 PM

twas a joke noobs. and dont front like it wasnt or i'll kick your ass @ ur favourite game on psn. yes, there is going to be the inevitable ninja............................................. ...

TheRealProtege · 08-24-2008, 05:11 PM

dont get why you would post this.. especially if you said it was half ass.

ITasteSandwich · 08-24-2008, 06:17 PM

he trying to express his real feelings, he must have no friends, cuz reel niggaz dont rap about tiz type shit

but fuck it i'ma murk you in your own thread
then hurt you with your own led
and curse you with you own bread
catch me in da air, like UPS over night day shipping
yall niggas martians in cacoons, we aliens space shipping

Jay-T · 08-24-2008, 06:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ITasteSandwich

he trying to express his real feelings, he must have no friends, cuz reel niggaz dont rap about tiz type shit

but fuck it i'ma murk you in your own thread
then hurt you with your own led
and curse you with you own bread
catch me in da air, like UPS over night day shipping
yall niggas martians in cacoons, we aliens space shipping

Im lost.. exactly wut da fuck are u doing.. tryin 2 get exposure..

JR-One · 08-24-2008, 07:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnBrEaKaBlE

dont get why you would post this.. especially if you said it was half ass.

idk, i do what i want.

Quote:

Originally Posted by BillyBobThorton

he trying to express his real feelings, he must have no friends, cuz reel niggaz dont rap about tiz type shit

Word dem reel niggaz too busy fishin. idfk what you're tryna say.

Nick_Kase · 08-24-2008, 07:15 PM

half assed yeh... i guess u didnt take too long to make it but watevz get urself back in the groove

ITasteSandwich · 08-24-2008, 09:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jay-T

Im lost.. exactly wut da fuck are u doing.. tryin 2 get exposure..

are you mad clown?

I think Jay T need to come up with something better than Bitiing Jay-Z
you'll never get better especially if u from texas, U not the best kid U just Crazy

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 08-24-2008, 09:25 PM

Komplex is From Texas^^ U Lose. Or Atleast i Remember Him Saying Sumthin bout Houston.

YoungGunna · 08-24-2008, 10:59 PM

^^lol how do dat plex cock taste

Jay-T · 08-24-2008, 11:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ITasteSandwich

are you mad clown?

I think Jay T need to come up with something better than Bitiing Jay-Z
you'll never get better especially if u from texas, U not the best kid U just Crazy

Set up a battle bitch

ThA ViiRu5 · 08-25-2008, 01:48 PM

^^ dont waste ur time. he ignored my callout like a bitch.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 08-25-2008, 03:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by .........

^^lol how do dat plex cock taste

no homo?

Tom Chambers · 08-25-2008, 07:02 PM

rofl......and you use to break noob's confidense down....

...wtf @ the gobble gobble line........

Baller · 08-25-2008, 11:34 PM

he knows how to goggle a penis pretty good...dont hate

LethalIsILL · 08-31-2008, 06:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by T0M CH4MBERS

rofl......and you use to break noob's confidense down....

...wtf @ the gobble gobble line........

^ wat my son said

08-23-2008, 10:13 PM	#1
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,021 Repped: 19 Repped 52 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	A little something A little something I wrote this idk, a week or two ago. A literal keystyle, written in a notebook, 8 mile style. Here it goes: friends and enemies; they're really the same people they're all just trying to deceive you into thinkin' they ain't deceitful I mean where do you draw the line between what's good and what's evil when lives can be saved and ended within same needle Well hell Y'all can't blame an addict for bein' raised on a bottle The same way you can't blame a turkey for sayin' gobble gobble you don't blame an abused child for thinkin' their parents are awful Nor can y'all blame a retard for not bein' too thoughtful So please don't place blame on me for wantin' to say these words cuz I don't blame God for fillin' a lovely sky with ugly birds I'll quit ramblin': I miss you, you're not here and that hurts you're the only thing in my life that works I might write a more full-fledged free at some point or another, this was a half-assed sort of thing that I just wrote one day. __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

08-24-2008, 02:34 AM	#4
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	I Read This On MSN.. It Took Like 10 Minutes For Me To Figure Out How To Open It... But It Was Aightttt __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

08-24-2008, 01:32 PM	#5
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,753 Repped: 116 Repped 38 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	not "half-assed"....full-assed my friend __________________ William Shaftner

08-24-2008, 04:51 PM	#6
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	twas a joke noobs. and dont front like it wasnt or i'll kick your ass @ ur favourite game on psn. yes, there is going to be the inevitable ninja............................................. ... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

08-24-2008, 05:11 PM	#7
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,029 Repped: 166 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	dont get why you would post this.. especially if you said it was half ass. __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

08-23-2008, 10:23 PM	#2
Lil Lay Fallen Angel Join Date: May 2005 Location: Homer Posts: 3,897 Repped: 1 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	first 4 lines are dope. the first 2 especially wtf at gobble gobble. NIGGA YOUR BETTER THAN THAT

08-23-2008, 11:39 PM	#3
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	kinda horrible

08-24-2008, 06:17 PM	#8
ITasteSandwich Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Minnesota Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	he trying to express his real feelings, he must have no friends, cuz reel niggaz dont rap about tiz type shit but fuck it i'ma murk you in your own thread then hurt you with your own led and curse you with you own bread catch me in da air, like UPS over night day shipping yall niggas martians in cacoons, we aliens space shipping

08-24-2008, 07:15 PM	#11
Nick_Kase T T T TOTALLY DOOD! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Inside Your Girlfriend Posts: 999 Repped: 207 Repped 152 Times in 72 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 15 Times in 12 Posts	half assed yeh... i guess u didnt take too long to make it but watevz get urself back in the groove __________________ www.myspace.com/nickkasemusic http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7452843

08-24-2008, 09:25 PM	#13
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Komplex is From Texas^^ U Lose. Or Atleast i Remember Him Saying Sumthin bout Houston. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

08-24-2008, 10:59 PM	#14
YoungGunna Young Gunna Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: T Dot Posts: 11,079 Repped: 348 Repped 128 Times in 87 Posts Neg Reps: 33 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	^^lol how do dat plex cock taste __________________

08-25-2008, 01:48 PM	#16
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ dont waste ur time. he ignored my callout like a bitch. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

08-25-2008, 07:02 PM	#18
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	rofl......and you use to break noob's confidense down.......wtf @ the gobble gobble line........

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Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,097 Repped: 111 Repped 254 Times in 149 Posts Neg Reps: 95 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	he knows how to goggle a penis pretty good...dont hate __________________

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