Written to the Pastor troy-This the City

*~Tambo~* · 08-19-2008, 02:23 AM

Will someone anyone please come help me...I can only play the cards that the slums dealt me//
Outta all CG aint none wealthy..but I promise my flow is so unhealthy//
In other words sick, I move down the strip so so quick, wit somethin tucked in my old kicks//
Tryna knock off these slow slow nicks till I run outta time and the clock don't tick//
But I won't slip...thoughts zonin, brain stormin, formin the nicest plan//
Puffin on somethin wit red hair, you probably thought it belonged to an Irish man//
Never fought crime but they call me iron man, everyone's a target headed for the unknown danger//
...On my come up wit a six shooter, silver slugs, and a mask, I'm the new Lone ranger//
...Got chrome for a hater...been too loyal to give my throne to a traitor//
thats why I'm the best surprise since Jesus got thrown in the manger//
Lyrically mame ya, all yall ass on the wax, I'm trashin ya raps, than after the fact//
I laugh at ya ass, cuz my sixteens a full brick of heron they make the nastiest tracks//
Slash and attack, stackin the stacks...all that cash report to me//
Kill count longer than war and peace...movin dust like I had chores for weeks//
Let them all snore and sleep but my inner vision is clear//
I shine hard you must squint to get near//

*~Tambo~* · 08-20-2008, 01:46 AM

uppin for feed

*~Tambo~* · 08-20-2008, 02:39 AM

uppin again?

young trey · 08-20-2008, 02:47 AM

let them all snore and sleep but my inner vision is clear//
i shine hard u must squint to get near//

~that waz good rite there fam anyway stay up -1- 8/10

*~Tambo~* · 08-21-2008, 12:21 PM

good looks on the feed can I get some more

TheRealProtege · 08-21-2008, 07:04 PM

your multies r nice

but you might want to reduce the length of your bars if you plan to spit on a beat

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 08-21-2008, 07:20 PM

Tambo's Been Spittin On Beats So Obviously You Have No idea What You're Talking About. ^^

As For The Piece.

Multies Were On Point Like Always.
Punches Were Hittin As Always.

You Know Tambo, You Always On Point.

But I won't slip...thoughts zonin, brain stormin, formin the nicest plan//
Puffin on somethin wit red hair, you probably thought it belonged to an Irish man//
Never fought crime but they call me iron man, everyone's a target headed for the unknown danger//
...On my come up wit a six shooter, silver slugs, and a mask, I'm the new Lone ranger//
...Got chrome for a hater...been too loyal to give my throne to a traitor//
thats why I'm the best surprise since Jesus got thrown in the manger//

Let them all snore and sleep but my inner vision is clear//
I shine hard you must squint to get near//

Shogun · 08-21-2008, 11:56 PM

Take it to the audio section. I'd give you feed but it'd be almost unjustifiably brutal, given that I know you write as an audio head, rather than just for the written word.

It would also be interesting to hear the background effects on your tracks. Namely the gunshots that sound "too realistic", the chopper sounds, & the screams of poor Middle Eastern children.

TheRealProtege · 08-22-2008, 10:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by *Pistol Banger*

Tambo's Been Spittin On Beats So Obviously You Have No idea What You're Talking About. ^^

As For The Piece.

Multies Were On Point Like Always.
Punches Were Hittin As Always.

You Know Tambo, You Always On Point.

But I won't slip...thoughts zonin, brain stormin, formin the nicest plan//
Puffin on somethin wit red hair, you probably thought it belonged to an Irish man//
Never fought crime but they call me iron man, everyone's a target headed for the unknown danger//
...On my come up wit a six shooter, silver slugs, and a mask, I'm the new Lone ranger//
...Got chrome for a hater...been too loyal to give my throne to a traitor//
thats why I'm the best surprise since Jesus got thrown in the manger//

Let them all snore and sleep but my inner vision is clear//
I shine hard you must squint to get near//

dude shut the fuck up

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 08-23-2008, 12:29 AM

You Upset????

*~Tambo~* · 08-24-2008, 03:02 AM

good looks on the feed unbreakable...good looks on the feed pistol...and yall can keep arguin as long as it keeps my thread alive lol...and unbreakable, if you look at most of my shit my lines are alot shorter cuz the beats usually medium tempo but the pastor troy this the city beat is extra slow and I spit a little fast to it...if you hear the beat you'll be able to catch my flow easily...and the battle been set up na mean...i dont know if you writin or you just don't wanna battle but if you dont then let a mod know so they can close it down ya digg

TheRealProtege · 08-24-2008, 06:29 PM

yeah i forgot all about that. i seen it today. ima post tonight

08-19-2008, 02:23 AM	#1
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Written to the Pastor troy-This the City Written to the Pastor troy-This the City Will someone anyone please come help me...I can only play the cards that the slums dealt me// Outta all CG aint none wealthy..but I promise my flow is so unhealthy// In other words sick, I move down the strip so so quick, wit somethin tucked in my old kicks// Tryna knock off these slow slow nicks till I run outta time and the clock don't tick// But I won't slip...thoughts zonin, brain stormin, formin the nicest plan// Puffin on somethin wit red hair, you probably thought it belonged to an Irish man// Never fought crime but they call me iron man, everyone's a target headed for the unknown danger// ...On my come up wit a six shooter, silver slugs, and a mask, I'm the new Lone ranger// ...Got chrome for a hater...been too loyal to give my throne to a traitor// thats why I'm the best surprise since Jesus got thrown in the manger// Lyrically mame ya, all yall ass on the wax, I'm trashin ya raps, than after the fact// I laugh at ya ass, cuz my sixteens a full brick of heron they make the nastiest tracks// Slash and attack, stackin the stacks...all that cash report to me// Kill count longer than war and peace...movin dust like I had chores for weeks// Let them all snore and sleep but my inner vision is clear// I shine hard you must squint to get near//

08-21-2008, 07:04 PM	#6
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,027 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	your multies r nice but you might want to reduce the length of your bars if you plan to spit on a beat __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

08-21-2008, 07:20 PM	#7
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Tambo's Been Spittin On Beats So Obviously You Have No idea What You're Talking About. ^^ As For The Piece. Multies Were On Point Like Always. Punches Were Hittin As Always. You Know Tambo, You Always On Point. But I won't slip...thoughts zonin, brain stormin, formin the nicest plan// Puffin on somethin wit red hair, you probably thought it belonged to an Irish man// Never fought crime but they call me iron man, everyone's a target headed for the unknown danger// ...On my come up wit a six shooter, silver slugs, and a mask, I'm the new Lone ranger// ...Got chrome for a hater...been too loyal to give my throne to a traitor// thats why I'm the best surprise since Jesus got thrown in the manger// Let them all snore and sleep but my inner vision is clear// I shine hard you must squint to get near// __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

08-23-2008, 12:29 AM	#10
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	You Upset???? __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

08-24-2008, 06:29 PM	#12
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,027 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	yeah i forgot all about that. i seen it today. ima post tonight __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

08-20-2008, 01:46 AM	#2
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin for feed

08-20-2008, 02:39 AM	#3
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin again?

08-20-2008, 02:47 AM	#4
young trey Banned Join Date: May 2008 Location: MIAMI Posts: 517 Repped: 1 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	let them all snore and sleep but my inner vision is clear// i shine hard u must squint to get near// ~that waz good rite there fam anyway stay up -1- 8/10

08-21-2008, 12:21 PM	#5
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good looks on the feed can I get some more

08-21-2008, 11:56 PM	#8
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Take it to the audio section. I'd give you feed but it'd be almost unjustifiably brutal, given that I know you write as an audio head, rather than just for the written word. It would also be interesting to hear the background effects on your tracks. Namely the gunshots that sound "too realistic", the chopper sounds, & the screams of poor Middle Eastern children.

08-24-2008, 03:02 AM	#11
~Tambo~ The Beast Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Jersey You Bitch Ass Nigga Posts: 2,700 Repped: 3 Repped 15 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good looks on the feed unbreakable...good looks on the feed pistol...and yall can keep arguin as long as it keeps my thread alive lol...and unbreakable, if you look at most of my shit my lines are alot shorter cuz the beats usually medium tempo but the pastor troy this the city beat is extra slow and I spit a little fast to it...if you hear the beat you'll be able to catch my flow easily...and the battle been set up na mean...i dont know if you writin or you just don't wanna battle but if you dont then let a mod know so they can close it down ya digg

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