The Drought

Blizzy · 08-17-2008, 04:01 PM

this sections dryin' up so here I go...whoooo...

I'm the 'One'...you forgotten-the-number?
I wonder? HOT...have you sweatin like a goth-in-the-summer,
Drop thunder...directin' clashin-clouds,
Collectin' cash-n-pounds...Clowns be acceptin' rapid-rounds,
To the upper-torso..."fuckin'-thought-so",
No closet leave em stuck-in-wardrobes...bleedin' cuts-on-you're-clothes,
I Mike-Laury-Whors...I might-carry-swords, COZ...
Life ain't worth 'Jack' so I killed Jill like-Barry-George,
This dick gets fucked in the ass like a transvestite...man's-dressed-right,
His plan's-get-spiked...and get raped with his hands-and-legs-tied...
You a 'Puff'/'Poof'...ain't no Bad-Boy-I-promise,
In battles with Blizzy you gotta duck asteroids-and-comets...

quick drop...let us know what you think...Peace

ITasteSandwich · 08-17-2008, 04:02 PM

ok ok. 8/10

TheRealProtege · 08-17-2008, 05:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blizzy

this sections dryin' up so here I go...whoooo...

I'm the 'One'...you forgotten-the-number?

You a 'Puff'/'Poof'...ain't no Bad-Boy-I-promise,
In battles with Blizzy you gotta duck asteroids-and-comets...

quick drop...let us know what you think...Peace

It was cool, cept for those lines. the first line needs to be reworded with better grammar. and the bad boy line dont really make sense and the bad boy/puffy concept lines have been played as fuck.

but yourmulties through out most of the verse was cool and kept the flow easy to read.

100

Blizzy · 08-18-2008, 07:46 AM

^props^uppin and bumpin...

Pineapple · 08-18-2008, 11:18 AM

good flow...good use of multies...sum good lines...7/10

billgatz · 08-19-2008, 12:07 AM

this shit made me vomit my dinner and drink. so what you think, after I read this blah blah I had to appoint a shrink. cause man this shit made me have to think. talkin homo crap, your rymes gave me a queer wink eww. if this is your solution for a drought, I feel bad for you wow. mad dudes probably takin turns in your mouth yikes. no pun son but you aint throwing no asteroids,its more like you throw your back out till you develop hemorriods. then u sweat it out with goths shootin steroids in grandmas basement. face it that shit was flagrant. freestyle

Nanse · 08-19-2008, 01:40 AM

Make it rain

YoungGunna · 08-19-2008, 02:24 AM

team gunna ftw

ReFleXiOn · 08-19-2008, 06:56 AM

this piece was indirect and made me think...which i like from time to time...don't know who u are but ur lyricism is definitely not indoubt...i guess if i "rated" it i'd say 8-8.5...nicely put together piece...1

Lil Brizzle · 08-19-2008, 08:47 AM

this was good.....flow stood out and multies was probably the best thing about this drop.....its also what ur best at.....the wordplay was also good and i liked how u connected each of ur lines together......stay up......peace....

8.5/10

Blizzy · 08-19-2008, 02:00 PM

props to those givin feed and not tryna diss lol...Peace

Blizzy · 08-23-2008, 04:05 PM

uppin....POW

08-17-2008, 04:01 PM	#1
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,362 Repped: 689 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	The Drought The Drought this sections dryin' up so here I go...whoooo... I'm the 'One'...you forgotten-the-number? I wonder? HOT...have you sweatin like a goth-in-the-summer, Drop thunder...directin' clashin-clouds, Collectin' cash-n-pounds...Clowns be acceptin' rapid-rounds, To the upper-torso..."fuckin'-thought-so", No closet leave em stuck-in-wardrobes...bleedin' cuts-on-you're-clothes, I Mike-Laury-Whors...I might-carry-swords, COZ... Life ain't worth 'Jack' so I killed Jill like-Barry-George, This dick gets fucked in the ass like a transvestite...man's-dressed-right, His plan's-get-spiked...and get raped with his hands-and-legs-tied... You a 'Puff'/'Poof'...ain't no Bad-Boy-I-promise, In battles with Blizzy you gotta duck asteroids-and-comets... quick drop...let us know what you think...Peace __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

08-18-2008, 07:46 AM	#4
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,362 Repped: 689 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	^props^uppin and bumpin... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

08-18-2008, 11:18 AM	#5
Pineapple Complex Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 2,938 Repped: 1,221 Repped 2,319 Times in 707 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 3 Posts	good flow...good use of multies...sum good lines...7/10 __________________ YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!:supersh ocked: Back before they turned hip-hop to rap It was always a place to party at, remember that?- Rakim

08-19-2008, 01:40 AM	#7
Nanse Da Purple Pimp Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: I'm from N-E-W Jerz., where plenty murders occurz Posts: 3,131 Repped: 692 Repped 376 Times in 236 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 75 Times in 74 Posts	Make it rain __________________ I'm the M.B.P., Most Ballin-ist Player Make my own rules, bitch call me the mayor

08-19-2008, 02:24 AM	#8
YoungGunna Young Gunna Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: T Dot Posts: 11,079 Repped: 348 Repped 128 Times in 87 Posts Neg Reps: 33 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	team gunna ftw __________________

08-17-2008, 04:02 PM	#2
ITasteSandwich Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Minnesota Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ok ok. 8/10

08-19-2008, 12:07 AM	#6
billgatz Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Queens Bridge USA Posts: 31 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this shit made me vomit my dinner and drink. so what you think, after I read this blah blah I had to appoint a shrink. cause man this shit made me have to think. talkin homo crap, your rymes gave me a queer wink eww. if this is your solution for a drought, I feel bad for you wow. mad dudes probably takin turns in your mouth yikes. no pun son but you aint throwing no asteroids,its more like you throw your back out till you develop hemorriods. then u sweat it out with goths shootin steroids in grandmas basement. face it that shit was flagrant. freestyle

08-19-2008, 06:56 AM	#9
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	this piece was indirect and made me think...which i like from time to time...don't know who u are but ur lyricism is definitely not indoubt...i guess if i "rated" it i'd say 8-8.5...nicely put together piece...1 __________________ Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1

08-19-2008, 08:47 AM	#10
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,829 Repped: 82 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 120 Neg Repped at 146 Times in 85 Posts	this was good.....flow stood out and multies was probably the best thing about this drop.....its also what ur best at.....the wordplay was also good and i liked how u connected each of ur lines together......stay up......peace.... 8.5/10 __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

08-19-2008, 02:00 PM	#11
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,362 Repped: 689 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	props to those givin feed and not tryna diss lol...Peace __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

08-23-2008, 04:05 PM	#12
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,362 Repped: 689 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	uppin....POW __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

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