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*Complex*
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 2,938
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my mindstate is zoned out
cuz of the chron that waz inhaled n smoked out brain damaged from liqour...hopin ill die quiker verse full of emotion like a shot u gotta feel it nigga used to b ahead of THE GAME now im way back like lloyd banks feeling like niggas r duckin my sharp bars they tryna avoid shanks actin like im not ill...like i had no healthcare a mind like mine can't b bought nigga my wealths rare zonin out feelin like jay -z in a beach chair or on reasonable doubt when he waz feelin it drugs are almost gone do u kno how it feels to b feindin shit? gotta b worse then feelin sick..i cant evn breathe i quit i stopped smokin for about two months now but im feelin like i need a blunt right now thats why i write now... just to keep me away from drugs now... ...but im still zoned the fuck out...
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Vulture
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: NM
Posts: 3,088
Repped: 110
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Neg Reps: 94
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ya shits decent bro....but try to use ya grammar better....you had some misused words....kinda forced to rhyme....think out ya shit a lil more but make it natural n dont force it...i'll show examples if yu feel the need for em
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Wordsmith
Join Date: May 2008
Location: In Battlefield's
Posts: 3,359
Repped: 687
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Neg Reps: 25
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^like Baller said it wasn't to bad...flow was OK...had multi's and a deep side to it...stay up...
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