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Old 08-13-2008, 06:10 PM   #1
 
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Mr. JONEs...bootleg remix - TAmbo n PuncheZ

holla atcha boi w/ da bootleg remix.....i had to do it again on some cracc dat tambo dropped...about 2 ppl wont like wat im sayin..but who cares...

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I write so hard it hurt my like wrists double cuffs//
Thunder struck and my brain cells went haywire//
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Tough talk can it brono comedy//
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on top of things my words convey clever//
Mastered the punch line son I trained the Mayweathers//
So of course I get paid cheddar//
Money so old I sign my checks with a bottle of ink and a stray feather//

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Tambo said it best..But imma SAY~IT till u OBEY~IT/
'Unbreakable'?? imma BREAK~IT..CREATE~IT again then TAKE~IT/
who CLAIMIN they da BEST??? r u really? or do u just SAY~IT/
imma SAY~IT..u aint da BEST..so fucc da shit u be CLAIMIN/
my pUnChLiNeZ is UnBrEaKaBlE....so 'WHY~SO~SERIOUS'?/
"FUCC pUnChLiNeZ"??? aha...nicca WHY~SO~FURIOUS?../
U DELIRIOUS...FONY~FAKERS...yall work for me... u OWE~ME~LABOR/
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if u dont believe me..i got all da TECHS like a SONY~MAKER/
I got my SCOPE peakin out da WINDOW like a NOSEY~NEIGHBOR/
go ahead and rat to da JAKES..tell em i SMOKE~TREES/
tell em I WORK~KEYS....nicca....tell dem my COKE~SPREE/
TELL em I TOTE~Gs...try again.....cuhz if u WORK~Ds/
you will end up DEAD w/ da 'FISHES' if u get NO~SEA/NOSEY
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You serious dogg? If you wanna battle come at me, if not shut the fuck up.

Set up a battle. Less you got a legion of dick riders like komplex does, id expect an easy win


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who CLAIMIN they da BEST??? r u really? or do u just SAY~IT/
imma SAY~IT..u aint da BEST..so fucc da shit u be CLAIMIN/


LOL.. Alotta people go somethin 2 say bout dat crazy statement homie made..

on top of things my words convey clever//
Mastered the punch line son I trained the Mayweathers//
So of course I get paid cheddar//
Money so old I sign my checks with a bottle of ink and a stray feather//


Dat shit was clever as hell I wouldnta neva thought of dat Mayweather line..
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Old 08-13-2008, 09:34 PM   #4
 
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You serious dogg? If you wanna battle come at me, if not shut the fuck up.

Set up a battle. Less you got a legion of dick riders like komplex does, id expect an easy win


ayo......shut da fucc up ...aha
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who CLAIMIN they da BEST??? r u really? or do u just SAY~IT/
imma SAY~IT..u aint da BEST..so fucc da shit u be CLAIMIN/


LOL.. Alotta people go somethin 2 say bout dat crazy statement homie made..

on top of things my words convey clever//
Mastered the punch line son I trained the Mayweathers//
So of course I get paid cheddar//
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Dat shit was clever as hell I wouldnta neva thought of dat Mayweather line..
goodlookz w/ da feed
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Old 08-13-2008, 10:24 PM   #6
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You have no good punchlines, but this was good though. Unbreakable got shattered, but y'all are still garbage on here besides Famoz and Brizzle. They are the GOATs on this place.
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Old 08-13-2008, 10:27 PM   #7
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ill shit niggas
punchlines ya verse was on point fam
and tambo u had some ill multies and wordplay
8.5/10

and @ unbreakable all u been doin lately is bitchin nigga stfu and calm down its the net
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LoL @ your stupid fucking ass giving this shit a 8.5 and mah shit a 7. your a joke dunny
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Old 08-14-2008, 12:00 AM   #9
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lmaoooo ur shit was ight nigga stop cryin u act like u dropped a classic or sum shit
tambo and punches verse>>>>>>>ur verse
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Im not saying it was a classic. I just appreciate real feed, wit no bias. You grading this shit a 8.5 and mines a 7 just degrades any sense of intelligence
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Im not saying it was a classic. I just appreciate real feed, wit no bias. You grading this shit a 8.5 and mines a 7 just degrades any sense of intelligence
nigga ur shit was just decent thats why i gave it a 7 cause it could have been better ight.....
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My shit was just aight, but this was an 8.5. ALLRIGHT THEN MAN. Guess ima go and listen to Lil Wayne now...hes so lyrical. Id give him an 8.5, how bout yall?
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about 2 ppl wont like wat im sayin..but who cares...

who CLAIMIN they da BEST??? r u really? or do u just SAY~IT/
imma SAY~IT..u aint da BEST..so fucc da shit u be CLAIMIN/
Overall I'd rate dis a 8/10...cuz ya punchline flow iz similar to mine...It had alot of creative linez in it like dat mayweather line...some linez were just "uh-uh" linez....but most of ya shit was hittin...keep it up wit da flamerz tho
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Seriously, what's the deal with you Lloyd Banks Stans on here? Everybody on here dickrides Lloyd, G Unit, and 50 a lot; it's really rediculous. And Unbreakable, quit crying like a bitch on her period. Your verse sucked, this was alright; go suck Eminems dick and quit arguing with peeps on here.
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My shit was just aight, but this was an 8.5. ALLRIGHT THEN MAN. Guess ima go and listen to Lil Wayne now...hes so lyrical. Id give him an 8.5, how bout yall?
lmaoooooo w/e nigga thats on u
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Seriously, what's the deal with you Lloyd Banks Stans on here? Everybody on here dickrides Lloyd, G Unit, and 50 a lot; it's really rediculous. And Unbreakable, quit crying like a bitch on her period. Your verse sucked, this was alright; go suck Eminems dick and quit arguing with peeps on here.
faggot stfu u dont even do audio in the first place.....

Lloyd Banks lyrics >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> u

50 Cents flow >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> u

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faggot stfu u dont even do audio in the first place.....

Lloyd Banks lyrics >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> u

50 Cents flow >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> u

get mad hater......
@ you. Go fuckin kill yourself and video tape it.
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@ you. Go fuckin kill yourself and video tape it.
ur mad......stop hating on gunit......ur idol eminem will turn ya back on u for such insults

then u can commit sucide like stan
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shit waz ill...krg..multies waz decent,still aint better den mine..lol sike naw
ya flow,lyrical content and all dat shit waz str8..
tambo..shit waz ill to,feelin punchlinez shit more,
but your verse waz solid..had some good lines..
overall...ima give it,8.4/10......much respect...

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ill shit niggas
punchlines ya verse was on point fam
and tambo u had some ill multies and wordplay
8.5/10

and @ unbreakable all u been doin lately is bitchin nigga stfu and calm down its the net
goodlookz w/ da feed

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My shit was just aight, but this was an 8.5. ALLRIGHT THEN MAN. Guess ima go and listen to Lil Wayne now...hes so lyrical. Id give him an 8.5, how bout yall?
shut da fucc up pussy

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Im not saying it was a classic. I just appreciate real feed, wit no bias. You grading this shit a 8.5 and mines a 7 just degrades any sense of intelligence
fucc up faggit

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Overall I'd rate dis a 8/10...cuz ya punchline flow iz similar to mine...It had alot of creative linez in it like dat mayweather line...some linez were just "uh-uh" linez....but most of ya shit was hittin...keep it up wit da flamerz tho
lol u got issues

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Seriously, what's the deal with you Lloyd Banks Stans on here? Everybody on here dickrides Lloyd, G Unit, and 50 a lot; it's really rediculous. And Unbreakable, quit crying like a bitch on her period. Your verse sucked, this was alright; go suck Eminems dick and quit arguing with peeps on here.
shut da fucc up bitch

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faggot stfu u dont even do audio in the first place.....

Lloyd Banks lyrics >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> u

50 Cents flow >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> u

get mad hater......
shut yo gay ass up

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@ you. Go fuckin kill yourself and video tape it.
shut up pussy

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ur mad......stop hating on gunit......ur idol eminem will turn ya back on u for such insults

then u can commit sucide like stan
shut your faggit ass up

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shit waz ill...krg..multies waz decent,still aint better den mine..lol sike naw
ya flow,lyrical content and all dat shit waz str8..
tambo..shit waz ill to,feelin punchlinez shit more,
but your verse waz solid..had some good lines..
overall...ima give it,8.4/10......much respect...

@punchlinez,TEAM PISTOL ROCKZ,WE THE BEST!!!!!!

AND TRUTH WAT UP MY NIGG
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STFU pussy



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shut da fucc up pussy



fucc up faggit



lol u got issues



shut da fucc up bitch



shut yo gay ass up



shut up pussy



shut your faggit ass up



goodlookz /....team pistol all day cuh cuh lol
someone mad big time
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Lol.

You ass, went from Punches to hanging with Pistol , to Plex, you bitch//
And, Tambo murdered you on your own shit//
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