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Old 08-05-2008, 12:51 AM   #1
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nothing really seemed to beat my heart
before hip hop hit me like a jump-start
electric particles and articles of speech
only one as righteous as I could preach
not to sound self centered or come off as a zealot
but if your jam was a sub you know I'd have to propel it
cause you couldn't rock a mic, Im a geolo-gist
i take the paddle to kids while you just slap wrists

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Old 08-05-2008, 10:26 PM   #2
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keep droppin, make this site notice you and the way you do that is to flow topical and not retoricle ya dig!

ONE!

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Old 08-06-2008, 12:24 AM   #3
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keep droppin, make this site notice you and the way you do that is to flow topical and not retoricle ya dig!

ONE!

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with all due respect, i would very much like to flow rhetorically, "using language effectively and persuasively"
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Old 08-06-2008, 12:43 AM   #4
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its way too short.....and everythings really basic.......add multies and punches.....3/10
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