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Just something I wrote a while back. It's about 9/11 so just drop alittle feed, please.
***VERSE 1*** Never will forget that memorable Tuesday// started out just like any other new day// business as usual, jobs to get to// and I woke up at noon needing some food to make// who would think that tragedy would strike the nation// haven't thought like that it seems like for ages// it's insanity, the perps would be quite mistaking// but it did happen and many innocent lives were taken// an act of war by dispicable cowards// hijacked two airplanes and crashed them into the Towers// World Trade Center instantly devoured// by debris, fire, white smoke and intentions of the sick cowards// mad power is the posession// wanting to exterminate the US in sections// within hours, total chaos befell resulting from hate and agression// so many lessons, messes and books of pages containing questions// ***VERSE 2*** Nothing was accidental that day and the minutes went on// screwing with my mental and my vision of God// sentimental feelings, but we listened on// to hear a plane trasnformed missile has just crashed into the Pentagon// listen ya'll, pinch me, I'm not feeling hot// wanted to go drifting off to churches and synagogues// it's just hard with the events and all// turned to the screen just in time to see one of the buildings fall// by now, my brain was clanking extraneous// cause they just flashed up another plane crashed in Shanksville, Pennsylvania// madness mania, sadness, I'm drained of// tears every single time I decide to bring it up// then the other bulidings fell, felt like armageddeon// the end was nigh and I said to myself, are you ready// no more plates at mom's of warm spaghetti// cause your world has been invaded by a common enemy, they're swarming deadly// Strange, heart-breaking day that I will never forget// everyone lending hands to help their fellow Americans// I swear again, some of these men and women were Heaven sent// we were all relatives living at one residence// the president vowed to seek out the attackers// using government intelligence to try and out smart minds of the masters// since then, the world has gone into undenying disaster// and the meaning of life seems to just be unraveling faster// ask myself, was I meant to live// life hasn't gone anywhere so it's argumentative// I could have a wife and some little kids// but I could lose it all in minutes like those innocent people on that day in September did// like soldiers in the bush sharing guns// no unfairness, we loved, helped and cared for everyone// that's what you're supposed to do whenever terror comes// on that day, there were no races, just Americans//
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Itz decent
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- iLLuminati ~ Rapsody -
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son, u were like 5, stfu and keep movin
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Rorshak
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Why do you people on here always hate on me. Why can't y'all just read the verses and drop some feedback. Oh and Rebel, you claim i'm a wigger just cuz i'm white, but why not call Baller and Eminem wiggers? Ballers a faggot, but wasn't eminem the same person to say "nigga" on one of his older songs? Yeah, do your research fuck ass. Uppin this.
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hrmmm lets see i dont call Baller a wigger cus he doesnt run around a message board callin people "nigga", that would be the main point, and y does everything ALWAYS come back to eminem ? u jock him so hard its fuckin ridiculous
ps - loggin out and sittin clockin ur own threads as a guest is some real faggot shit !
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This Was By far One Of The Wackest Things I've Almost Read.
You Were Probably Like 8 At The Time. STFU. Give Up Already.
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***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
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^^^^^^^^^^^^lmao......
he probly waz 3...
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it don't matter the age tbh............tho it would effect how his views about it...but...this wasn't that hot....you need to sit down...and listen to a wide array of artists to build a style and become better.....
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10/10 again man...you on fire lately...you're up there with Immortal Technique...
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Lmao, I knew it. if someone other than me would've dropped these verses, y'all would be dick riding the fuck out of them, but if it's me then it's suddenly one of the wackest things you've ever read?!!! And no faggots, I was 14 when it happened. So how about you G Unit, lil Weezy, Vakill, and Lloyd Banks Stans on here just eat a dick; in the words of the great Tracey Marrow himself, lol. Oh, and Youngking........aren't you the same Lloyd Banks dickrider on here dropping repetitive punchlines? Cuz you obviously must be a G Unit fan. And Tom Chambers......it's not because they're bad asses. lol, Baller will never be a good emcee; he'll never blow up like Em did, maybe he'll blow up like Paul wall, but Baller sucks horse cock anyway; fucking Vakill Stan, lol. Yeah Baller, your a Vakill Stan, don't lie. And Em said "nigga" but that doesn't give him a right to, so suck a fat, hairy cunt.
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didn't paul wall go platinum...............literally?
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damnnn..i waz only playin marshall... dont take it so serious bruh..// and banks is my fave rapper..no doubt.. but dickrydin???false statement.. dont be mad cuz im ill... ask about me.../// ps..its just the net.../// im just messin wit u cuz.. i dont mean no harm../// u shouldnt let text get to u bruh..// real talk homie..... i just said u waz 3...lmao u know u wasnt 3 so y should u get mad????
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Alright then man, it's all good. No disrespect homie.
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1 YASELF. In here You Said You Was "15" So I Guess 9/11 Happened Last Year. You Fail Once Again.. ![]()
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^^^^^^^^......lmao...
marshal got me by 5 years... so much for him being 3.. he waz older than me at the time..lolol
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Dudes A Fuckin Clown.
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lmao...marshall marshall marshall... Wowwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!! What can u Say About that one?????
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why do we all enjoy beatin on a dead dog?
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Cuz It's Fun As FUCKKKKKKKKKKKK^^^
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^do you think MM06 realises there's pussy in the world?
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Well, In His Case, Only On The Internet^^^^
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He'll never blow up like Em did. Just remember that, so quit dickriding that Vakill dickrider.
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