07/28/08 - Intruder Alert-BoRn

Projec F2D · 07-28-2008, 07:50 PM

So This Is An Audio Verse

Explanation Behind It....Recently There Was A Killing In Pittsburgh That Touched Me Deeply Some Dude I Knew Was Slained & That Same Day There Were 8 Other Murders Later In The Verse I Talk About My Relationship With A Female I Was Seeing I Actually Fell In Love For The First Time But As Of Yesterday We Are No Longer Seeing Each Other & I Dont Know Where It Went Wrong So Aside From All This Here's The Verse

I've Witnessed Alot, Traveled Over The Blocks
Too Many Shot, Fishscale Niggas Dabblin Rocks
Steady Plot, The World Is Sufficient To Me
Now You Got To Have Reputition To Breathe
Believe No One, Not Leroy Green They Show Guns
Sho'Nuff Niggas Will, Kill Individuals
And Maintain Invinsible
Knew The Streetz We're Wicked, Hells Ticket
Just A Snippet Painted Picture Thats So Vivid
I Cant Live It, Too Much Animosity
Possibly Because Of This Reccession
Its Drepressing & The Reason I Keep Stressin
A Pool Of Emotions Swimming In Deep Lessons
God Knows I'm With Him
But All Of A Sudden I Feel Like The Victim
Lost One Cant Get It Out My System
Lacked Wisdom, Tryna Move On
Even Your Bestfriend Said We Didnt Belong
But I Aint Think It Was True
In My Heart I Kept Thinking Of You
Never Official But My Heart You Rock It Like A Missle
I'd Be Lying If I Said I Didnt Miss You
So Long Mrs. 50/50, Its Still Hits Me
Now I'm Chasing Bottles Fuckin Up My Kidneys
Heartbroken So I Put It Back Together
Forever Gotta Go Through Hell Before It Gets Betters
Whether I'm Right Or Wrong
I'm Strong Even Tho The Reason I Smile Is Gone
Ron What Would You Do
Keep It True If You Were Put In My Shoes
Steppin In The Name Of Love, When Love Dont Want You

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-28-2008, 08:21 PM

Well That's Crazy About The Murders And Shit.

The Falling In <3 Part, You Should Know Better.

As For The Verse, I Think It's iLL, Definitely Worth Recording..

Projec F2D · 07-28-2008, 08:21 PM

get on aim

Lil Brizzle · 07-29-2008, 08:03 AM

its funny how u made a diss about me only cause i said nigga 3 or 4 times.....espacially when white faggots like famoz say it a thousand times in both his posts and his raps......

but as for the verse.....good concept.....flow was good.....but u lacked multies.....

TheRealProtege · 07-31-2008, 04:49 PM

this drop is nice, way better then other ones ive seen from you.

yeah it didnt really have multis but thats not all these is to songs, this one was intended for a message he wanted to get across.

reminded me of a nas?gza type flow

step your pen game up and add multis, take some of the corny love lines out (missle line was horrible) and this would be a dope ass piece

07-28-2008, 07:50 PM	#1
Projec F2D TheTributeToUs.Blogspot.C Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: TheTributeToUs.Blogspot.Com my blog Posts: 674 Repped: 53 Repped 217 Times in 79 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	07/28/08 - Intruder Alert-BoRn 07/28/08 - Intruder Alert-BoRn So This Is An Audio Verse Explanation Behind It....Recently There Was A Killing In Pittsburgh That Touched Me Deeply Some Dude I Knew Was Slained & That Same Day There Were 8 Other Murders Later In The Verse I Talk About My Relationship With A Female I Was Seeing I Actually Fell In Love For The First Time But As Of Yesterday We Are No Longer Seeing Each Other & I Dont Know Where It Went Wrong So Aside From All This Here's The Verse I've Witnessed Alot, Traveled Over The Blocks Too Many Shot, Fishscale Niggas Dabblin Rocks Steady Plot, The World Is Sufficient To Me Now You Got To Have Reputition To Breathe Believe No One, Not Leroy Green They Show Guns Sho'Nuff Niggas Will, Kill Individuals And Maintain Invinsible Knew The Streetz We're Wicked, Hells Ticket Just A Snippet Painted Picture Thats So Vivid I Cant Live It, Too Much Animosity Possibly Because Of This Reccession Its Drepressing & The Reason I Keep Stressin A Pool Of Emotions Swimming In Deep Lessons God Knows I'm With Him But All Of A Sudden I Feel Like The Victim Lost One Cant Get It Out My System Lacked Wisdom, Tryna Move On Even Your Bestfriend Said We Didnt Belong But I Aint Think It Was True In My Heart I Kept Thinking Of You Never Official But My Heart You Rock It Like A Missle I'd Be Lying If I Said I Didnt Miss You So Long Mrs. 50/50, Its Still Hits Me Now I'm Chasing Bottles Fuckin Up My Kidneys Heartbroken So I Put It Back Together Forever Gotta Go Through Hell Before It Gets Betters Whether I'm Right Or Wrong I'm Strong Even Tho The Reason I Smile Is Gone Ron What Would You Do Keep It True If You Were Put In My Shoes Steppin In The Name Of Love, When Love Dont Want You __________________ The Team Is GT Only Niggas I'm Cool Wit On My XI Bred Jordan, Ya Know Original Bull Shit- ++BoRn++

07-28-2008, 08:21 PM	#2
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,907 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Well That's Crazy About The Murders And Shit. The Falling In <3 Part, You Should Know Better. As For The Verse, I Think It's iLL, Definitely Worth Recording.. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-28-2008, 08:21 PM	#3
Projec F2D TheTributeToUs.Blogspot.C Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: TheTributeToUs.Blogspot.Com my blog Posts: 674 Repped: 53 Repped 217 Times in 79 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	get on aim __________________ The Team Is GT Only Niggas I'm Cool Wit On My XI Bred Jordan, Ya Know Original Bull Shit- ++BoRn++

07-29-2008, 08:03 AM	#4
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,852 Repped: 88 Repped 132 Times in 74 Posts Neg Reps: 126 Neg Repped at 148 Times in 85 Posts	its funny how u made a diss about me only cause i said nigga 3 or 4 times.....espacially when white faggots like famoz say it a thousand times in both his posts and his raps...... but as for the verse.....good concept.....flow was good.....but u lacked multies..... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

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07-31-2008, 04:49 PM	#5
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,037 Repped: 169 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 151 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	this drop is nice, way better then other ones ive seen from you. yeah it didnt really have multis but thats not all these is to songs, this one was intended for a message he wanted to get across. reminded me of a nas?gza type flow step your pen game up and add multis, take some of the corny love lines out (missle line was horrible) and this would be a dope ass piece