07/27/08 - "Straight Out of the East"

Inlightend · 07-28-2008, 12:04 AM

about something i feel passionately about...
feedback appreciated as always.

Straight out of the east, like helios on his chariot
You know, if this gram were a woman I would marry it
She aint a bitch, leave you snitches with a stitch
As you run laps to look like abercrombie and fitch
Models, and lose your minds in the bottles,
I keep shit rough, you know I don’t coddle
Tangle you up in the web of my mind
I aint No Child, youll get Left Behind
Ill bob and weave, weaving tapestries
Realistic, you know all they show is trees
I burn like bunson,call me forest fire
The Lorax would think me a thief and a liar
For burning up all of his beautiful shit
Not to mention what Smokey would think of it
I don’t grab no “swisher sweet and use my fingernail to cut”
But I love every strain, purebred or mutt
I know my triplets are hot like three tight girls
But pay attention, as the story unfurls
I was young and naïve, open to all kinds of shit
So eventually, you know I had to get lit
Like a firework, and you know I wasn’t quittin,
Carryin on a couple thousand year tradition
Using glass, ill I’ll fuck you up, en masse
Poetically emphatically flawless far from crass
Like these southern rappers snapping fingers like turtles
Im the sea monster, while yall niggas are Squirtles
Ill leave the water now, don’t wanna douse my flame,
Burning eternally like the torch of the olympic games
Too many prisoners, are incarcerated
For dried flowers, portrayed as a menace, paraded
Used by senators who call themselves crusaders
While they know they’re just fucking mercenaries and raiders

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-28-2008, 12:35 AM

Stopped Reading After Abercrombie And Fitch.

Inlightend · 07-28-2008, 12:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by *Pistol Banger*

Stopped Reading After Abercrombie And Fitch.

i know you think what you think, but its obvious im not promoting that shit at all
makin fun of it...

billgatz · 07-30-2008, 06:00 AM

I hope thats not your promo,cause you sound like an old school greek that likes to do the homo. your asshole is a inferno and taken my army down is a no no,so bro what you really sayin is the lion is in the cage and your waiting to slay him,than FUCK his dead remains...the stuff you flowing is really from the cain,after it hits your brain. I saw this shit and was like this dudes gone insane. I gotta bring the pain to soothe out your novacaine. come to my fortress,I am already the victor. so please try again to paint a bloody picture. freestyle

Inlightend · 07-30-2008, 10:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by billgatz

I hope thats not your promo,cause you sound like an old school greek that likes to do the homo. your asshole is a inferno and taken my army down is a no no,so bro what you really sayin is the lion is in the cage and your waiting to slay him,than FUCK his dead remains...the stuff you flowing is really from the cain,after it hits your brain. I saw this shit and was like this dudes gone insane. I gotta bring the pain to soothe out your novacaine. come to my fortress,I am already the victor. so please try again to paint a bloody picture. freestyle

I dont paint my pictures bloody I dont dig on menstruation
i paint em like i was monet, breeding captivation
as you sit in front of your computer trying to bust your rhymes
you cant escape the fact that it's all rust in your mind
i seen this shit on every thread you post similar
wack freestlyin, like you the deliverer
while i drop packaged shit like UPS
on the house, i deliver these dudes free stress.
Freestyle

Famoz · 07-30-2008, 09:25 PM

lmao damn he murks it

good shit keep up wit da fire, and dont think I aint read it I read and the shit was dope!

07-28-2008, 12:04 AM	#1
Inlightend The Pure Uncut Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: NC Posts: 60 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	07/27/08 - "Straight Out of the East" 07/27/08 - "Straight Out of the East" about something i feel passionately about... feedback appreciated as always. Straight out of the east, like helios on his chariot You know, if this gram were a woman I would marry it She aint a bitch, leave you snitches with a stitch As you run laps to look like abercrombie and fitch Models, and lose your minds in the bottles, I keep shit rough, you know I don’t coddle Tangle you up in the web of my mind I aint No Child, youll get Left Behind Ill bob and weave, weaving tapestries Realistic, you know all they show is trees I burn like bunson,call me forest fire The Lorax would think me a thief and a liar For burning up all of his beautiful shit Not to mention what Smokey would think of it I don’t grab no “swisher sweet and use my fingernail to cut” But I love every strain, purebred or mutt I know my triplets are hot like three tight girls But pay attention, as the story unfurls I was young and naïve, open to all kinds of shit So eventually, you know I had to get lit Like a firework, and you know I wasn’t quittin, Carryin on a couple thousand year tradition Using glass, ill I’ll fuck you up, en masse Poetically emphatically flawless far from crass Like these southern rappers snapping fingers like turtles Im the sea monster, while yall niggas are Squirtles Ill leave the water now, don’t wanna douse my flame, Burning eternally like the torch of the olympic games Too many prisoners, are incarcerated For dried flowers, portrayed as a menace, paraded Used by senators who call themselves crusaders While they know they’re just fucking mercenaries and raiders __________________ I'm in everything you see like cran.

07-28-2008, 12:35 AM	#2
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,907 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Stopped Reading After Abercrombie And Fitch. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

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07-30-2008, 06:00 AM	#4
billgatz Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Queens Bridge USA Posts: 31 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I hope thats not your promo,cause you sound like an old school greek that likes to do the homo. your asshole is a inferno and taken my army down is a no no,so bro what you really sayin is the lion is in the cage and your waiting to slay him,than FUCK his dead remains...the stuff you flowing is really from the cain,after it hits your brain. I saw this shit and was like this dudes gone insane. I gotta bring the pain to soothe out your novacaine. come to my fortress,I am already the victor. so please try again to paint a bloody picture. freestyle

07-30-2008, 09:25 PM	#6
Famoz Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 1,548 Repped: 126 Repped 391 Times in 210 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	lmao damn he murks it good shit keep up wit da fire, and dont think I aint read it I read and the shit was dope!