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Old 07-27-2008, 11:37 PM   #1
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Kamikaze pilot, flying right through to your exact position//
graphic and vivid intuitions point to drastic decisions//
heart smaller than my fist in a ball//
cause I'm not dismissing the chance to risk it all//
mysterious call on your mobile phone//
text message displaying, saying we know there's no one home//
imagine your handful son held for ransom//
then put the receiver to your ear and decide to try and answer//
dial tone on your still brand new style phone//
out too far where you're not allowed to roam//
though I've got you in close on the retina-radar//
pressuring down and there's no damn way you're getting up//
I'll put the feds on a long ass wild goose chase//
and by the time they discover you, it's already too late//
all the evidence clues state, he was in a blues state//
and look at how his two bottles of booze are placed//
crooked, so it appears the victim was plastered//
driving while intoxicated is against the law you stupid bastard//
from the impact, he was moving faster//
as if pre-occupied with a whole other mind-boggling matter//
feel so freely as if nothing can touch you//
but don't know how to act when being stared in the back//
coming through, crashing from the sky, up high//
ripping you like the wings of a butterfly//
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Old 07-28-2008, 02:29 PM   #2
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haha all i hear is fucking crickets.
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Old 07-28-2008, 03:16 PM   #3
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haha all i hear is fucking crickets.

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Old 07-28-2008, 07:31 PM   #4
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funny how ur style changes all da time
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Old 07-28-2008, 07:37 PM   #5
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Lol, did any of y'all like it? And Inlightend........SMH @ you. Go drop some more of your "32 bar" poems and leave me alone.
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Old 07-28-2008, 08:22 PM   #6
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Floppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp!
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Old 07-29-2008, 01:27 AM   #7
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hmmmmm flopppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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Old 07-29-2008, 04:39 AM   #8
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this was good MMO6.....ur multies are spot on.....

i also like the concept of each punch u use man....stay up

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Old 07-29-2008, 02:08 PM   #9
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Propz for the feedback Brizzle. Uppin this
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Old 07-30-2008, 01:43 AM   #10
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Brizzle that's bullshit and you know it.
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Old 07-30-2008, 03:01 AM   #11
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Why is it bullshit? Did you even read this?
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Old 07-30-2008, 06:36 AM   #12
 
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wow your a stan stalker,this is coming from a native New Yorker. sounds like you wrote this crap behind a porker.geez look at your a.k.a. right off da bat your kinda fazed,by a generation of brain washed baybays. get of emz fuzzy nuts,the stuff you wrote is really butt.I bet you wish to crawlin ems butt and watch his nutz sway when he gets some butt. but um but you say your a commy, oh please and go try me. N I will really tear off your silk wings. I bet you never bein to the bings. oh you wanna hear a caliber gun that will make your ears ring son.
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Old 07-31-2008, 04:52 PM   #13
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why is the flow in this song look like a total 360 from your other flows. fucking biter
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Old 07-31-2008, 06:59 PM   #14
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Why don't you point out were I bit. And, lol, it's funny how y'all are giving me shit for every verse I drop, but if Komplex or DXavier dropped this verse, y'all would be riding their fucking dicks saying "damn, deep shit 10/10" y'all are some dickriding faggots on this place.
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Old 08-01-2008, 04:52 PM   #15
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i leave the dickriding to fags dawg. im just pointing out the truth, you are a lame. and proven biter.
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Old 08-03-2008, 08:59 AM   #16
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10/10 again...your to ILL...
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Old 08-03-2008, 03:10 PM   #17
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This Made Me Throw Away Illmatic.


Classiccccccc 11/10
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Old 08-03-2008, 05:12 PM   #18
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I really don't see why none of y'all can be serious.
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Old 08-03-2008, 07:09 PM   #19
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because your raps aren't serious....your a gimmick, a phony, a stan....
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Classiccccccc 11/10
throw away Illmatic...omg lmao.......repped...
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