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Old 07-10-2008, 09:04 PM   #1
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Default 07/10/08 - rhymes- just looking for feedback

07/10/08 - rhymes- just looking for feedback

heres some rhyme i spit today

children of colorado and connecticut had a baby, it was I,
raised in Massachusetts, moved to the land of gravy,
racism, intolerance, good old time tradition
those archaic ideas man htey cant contain my ambition
cause i rip the mic like Jack ripped harlots
hotter than your dream girl all dressed up in scarlet
on christmas,
pay close attention or youll miss this,
runnin through ya city like hard times
im kickin the hard rhymes on every fucking block
twisted like 40 tops or a sociopathic killah
obsessed with madlib and J dilla,
move uncut through ya veins, every second 500 frames,
make feet shuffle like thrilla.
Straight from the womb i was fresh like Mos Def,
or baby breath, flexible i dont fracture when i get stressed.
I cop 20s of trees escape the maze with ease,
an easel painted with the art, of flows and raps
i bust lines not caps, keep my lyrics sharp and exact
like a knife, take years off your life like altria,
or the grim reaper, matter of fact theyre the same,
the top two players in the death game,
compared with cigarettes the holocaust was a threat
idle like bush when katrina rolled in,
and although this verse has been something of a medley
my rhymes are more deadly than any carcinogen.

feedback appreciated..
rest in peace Jay...
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