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Old 09-30-2009, 12:09 AM   #401
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The power, the power of music
Music, I find myself through it
Through it, Im fluent, I knew it
That Id be forever its student
The effect that it has on me, has on me
Is magic see
One touch of the piano keys, piano keys
And I lose touch with reality
How can we, measure its effect you see
We must have a telepathy
Cant you see its affectin me
Especially, mentally

Dopamine, hope just gleams, when the music notes dance
I hold the keys, upload my dreams, and let loose in romance
I tried to find, the proper words to give a description
But musics not discursive, you must give it a listen.
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Old 10-02-2009, 06:05 PM   #402
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Got a mic, but here have some text..
Need a break.. then ill come tuh snap yuh neck
Got any talent? naw dont have 2 check
Feel it in the air.. the vibe is strong
East Vs West.. fuck the side Im on
Swear some of yall post havin me shake my head
Startin ta think yall need to be takin meds
Think b4 u type, rather watcha say instead..
Think im feedin birds the way Im breakin bread
Fuck your oppinion.. too late to save yourself
So take your 2 cents, here go and play yourself
Serious son, no way you can hurt me slim..
Im raw, beastin on yall like a turkey limb

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Old 10-02-2009, 07:33 PM   #403
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This nigga Protege is sweeter then a sugar cookie//
this fags been through more dicks then a hookers pussy//
he's just an elitist, and a fuckin' rookie stan//
you been in the 'closet' so long, Im a call you the 'Bogeyman'//
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No-one gives a fuck about your verse Bunny_Rabbit, you're a biter, end of, you fail, you'll never be a famous rapper, quit trying, give up.
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Old 10-02-2009, 09:05 PM   #405
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^^^you fail for constantly replying to my every post; good job, you're now a stalker.
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It's the other way around, you're replying to my every post, look how much you post on the IMDB boards, haha, don't kid yourself.
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is it just me or has this homiewell kat joined this site just to chase the rabbit? lol
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you been in the 'closet' so long, Im a call you the 'Bogeyman'//
*sighs* another fucking bite, reddy ree. ugh just fucking stop already
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Toast to the blank page
Im so ahead of my time
But what determines rank? age
I spit intelligent sentences, but thats irrelevant, entrances
Only appear in hallways, of developments, tenaments
My sentiments about the rap game seem to change
Should I leave the game, or should I steer the plane
Cause we used to be fly, but now we've landed
And rappers put out albums that increase our bandwith
But dont decrease the space in our wallets
They stay broke, but atleast they can relate to the projects
What I say, I acknowledge aint always the truth
I be embellishing things, and withdrawing some too
Im drawing the roof, of my potential that ill soon reach
Write my goals on looseleaf, I walk on souls, like two feet
I be talking slow, when you eat, so you can digest it
Your not suited for the club, while we show up double breasted
My troubles, stresses, tribulations, obsessions
Could be resolved if was more impatient, aggressive
My minds infested, my rhymes selected to get a reaction
My times invested, finding the exit, but the club is too packed shit
How do I escape here, my fates near, but I break fear
I say cheers, the aggregate of everything equals a great year.
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Just a page out the notebook

Still fighting Deebo in front of Craig house, my usual Friday
Orchestrating chaos, I conduct every musical I lay
God knows the stupidness I pray, I know my soul is in pain
On a bridge to success, but I pay a toll in this lane
But I'm too old to complain and I have no place for reason
I keep a mirror in front of me just to face my demons
Im your basic heathen, so I have no remorse for my sins
I'm drunk with power and I always reinforce it with gin
September predator, I prey on teams in the hunt for October
What can you snakes do, when your in front of a cobra?
The lunch in is over, so now I'm eating off of anyone's plate
And I'm the answer to the question, is anyone great?
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im allways thinkn DX isnt consistent enough to be best on this site seeing he never drops songs...... then i come in here... n he posts like twice a week... hot shit bruv... keep it up
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They say I aint active enough
You claim ya real, say u deal, but u be trafficin bluffs
I spaz with the ratchet, blow caps out the calico
I can make a rapper levitate, and this is my magic show
You notice me, I close, on any bitch within a week
I can tell she likes me, even before we begin to speak
Lets just go inside, have sex, Ill blow your mind
Im blessed with cleverness, if checked, I override
By now, they've come to expect, a flow designed
To be fresh, and somehow connect with older minds
Im young , but wisdom still runs through me
No one gave me a shot, they just threw the gun to me
Its better to be feared, for me, that rung truly
I keep my subjects in line, but subject those that are unruly
I rhyme in color, my mind just hovers, from reality, Im de-tached
I kill rappers in battles, so you'll need a seance for the rematch
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im allways thinkn DX isnt consistent enough to be best on this site seeing he never drops songs...... then i come in here... n he posts like twice a week... hot shit bruv... keep it up
appreciate that man
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When consequences come haunting
You wish you could go back and limit your flaunting
When karma comes seeking
You wish you picked a different way, to have finished the evening
I gotta problem, i cant abandon my vices
Now I must see, if I can get expansion from crisis
The problem when you roll the dice is
That your chancing shit, that may not turn out as you like it
Dawg I aint a psychic, can't predict the future
I just hope the victims can forgive the shooter
Playing girls aint even me bro
Although I play my cards, bankrolled in the casino
I must be fiend yo, I just cant stop
From doing stupid things, just so my pants drop
This is something I really might regret
I keep taking the pill, but forgetting bout its side effects
What am I to do here?
I just repented for my sins, it was just new years
Tried to enter a new tier, play a new a position
Grabbed heavier weights, but I couldnt lift em
So I lie about the work out
Got the perks out, but Im facing the worst now
I guess Ill apologize
And change my mindset, that these girls are not a prize
Im still insecure and have a fear to grow
After all, I fucked my first girl just a year ago
I take a deep breath, its not a defeat yet
In this marathon, Im allowed to take a weak step
I aint gunna leave yet, this the weekend
Before I start to panic, I need to see them
So I can judge if they mad at me
And if they are, Ill put on a performance, the academy
Will award me, my story will have a good ending
And if it doesn't, I guess its back to pretending.
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I'm braidz I thought ya knew me I get more then head then backseats at a movie
matter fact im bigger than 'family guy' getting more head than 'stewie'
the promoters ran me by now im getting more 'dates' than 'roofies'
im getting more bread than you is "but your forehead look stupid"

thats what they telling me so i point them in the right direction like cupid
on mic im bestest to do this got more investments than movies
'hot since 97','105's' my win percentage, ima shining intelectual
when my rhymes come hit the records, im leaving you 'clue less'

like i walked on stage and 'smacked ye' i knocked these white sunglasses off
whateva, call me a dick im something that can go hard or soft
see just coz your in a gang does not make you gangsta bruh
to prove my point look how many net gangs there are
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Hold up... check the prophecy
Let ya honesty come out of hiding
This is dope Im supplying
Cause hope is subsiding
You cant cope with the tyrant
Im firin, shots at your dome
For sendin cops to my home
If you associate with the sirens (get violent)
Im the star player, while your ignored on the bench
Fuck Thomas Paine, im not out for common cents
I tax my subjects, with-out givin rep
Im ballin, you see the bounce in my step
Too many of yawl content, raise the bar son
You wanna be on Wall Street, or stay in Harlem
I play my cards son, dont you try to bluff
Rappers sayin they aliens, but I dont give a flying fuck
The capacity of my brain, employs, maintains
Everything Ive experienced, joy and pain
That shall remain, in snow or in rain
My flow is insane, sneak blow on the plane
Call me George Jung, routine four-somes
And I aint gunna stop, until all four cum
My lyrics dwell on a higher plane than others
I smoke a bowl, light a J than hover
Chillin', smoking ounces of kush
I never knew Kid Cudi sounded this good
Out of bounds thinking, now its typed up
Directing music videos in my head, gettin hyped up
Creativity in my mind, holds no boundaries
I wasn't searching for hip hop but it somehow found me.
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Although Im sinful, I get religious in the bed G
Call me Moses, I split her lips like the Red Sea
My raps sting like going in the Dead Sea (with ya eyes open)
It takes a village, so the world preps me (cause Im chosen)
God talks to me, without the burning bush
But he occasionally gets a word in when Im burning kush
My goal is to set free all thee oppressed
So I put in hours, some might call me obsessed
If my readers aren't enthralled and impressed
That means ive hit the wall n', a stall in my quest
So than I start over, regroup, recoup, get my shit together
You'd here more beeps than a heart machine, if my wit was censored
I predict, whatever happens, has a meaning
I just wish fake rappers were banished like a heathen
Who told OJ the Juice Man and Mane they're accepted?
How come these dudes are on major records?
But we play the records, during pregames and such
Its like we used to play tackle, now we playin touch
Insurance policies are rough, care bout nothin but the coin
Thinkin if they try to sprint, they'll start fuckin up their groin
But listen, we are now in position
To take a different route, and sprout from the system
And if things dont change and the drought is persistent
Than ill start an inquisition, im devout like a Christian
What I envision, is met with doubt, indecision
I dont need to make the climb, the mount-ain is missin
Instead I stay landlocked, makin all my fans rock
Raps a warzone, my food for thought is being can dropped
I can't stop,..... you hear the heavy breathing
But to keep running, I have every reason
My heart beating faster, since theres no disaster to elude
Ill continue on my path up ,up to the moon.
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(SO AMBITIOUS)
I look at life so simplistically
A roller coaster without the admission fee
A marathon, for which I'm conditioning
With each stride , I'm makin history
Sometimes I celebrate victory
Prematurely, when I havent achieved shit for me
Fuck the grievances, tryna be the best I can
I've gotten here, but still have the rest to plan
I hope one day I can find the path
Its ironic, cause I designed the map
Why is that , I can't find it than
I put thought in rap, yawl nevermind the pen
My clever mind, must be divine , I think
I see God, every single time I blink
I lay down high, not with two sluts
But by myself, I guess I smoke too much
I guess that wasnt my intention
But lifes all about amendments. So Change Up...


THE MOTIVATION IN ME, was you telling me what I could not be....
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Bored as fuck, time to do a real freestyle.....

Fuck amendments, I don't fuck around with that pretend shit,
I represent this which is highly spoken of and contended.
Amen bitch! This catastrophy will now be your reality,
Simple analogy...My heart can only be opened with a shallow key.
My soul is deep yet I still always proceed to grab the ledge,
I've been on the corner this whole time, I'd say I had the edge.
You must have an abandonned head, thoughts begin to stir,
My shit is pure, so tight you might call it the bitter cure.
Vision blurred, don't get it twisted I got you bitches heard,
Riches earned, you vs. the othrer guy, someones gettin' burned.
Give me a minute sir, I'll tackle the jury simply to get adjourned,
Your rhymes are like butter, next to me they gettin' triple churned.

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(BET Cypher Verse)

Vacillation between different flows, different shows, different hoes
Whistle blows, its official bro, that the kitchens closed
I still serve food for thought in the waning hours
On the mic, remain in power, even when my brains devoured
With thoughts insane as Sparrow, I remain a shadow, but still shine
I spit ill lines, like the wait outside a hospital
To be great isnt optional, I profit but still grind , Even when illogical,
Its possible in due time, Ill be penning for legends
Channeling Biggie's astute mind, as he descends from the heavens
To inspire me, finally, my spine will tingle
When I record my bars, and rewind it, simple
And plane, my style shall remain true
My father said , son the lord has praised you
With a gift that keeps givin, its super-nat-ur-al
Rhyming skills continually raise my human capital
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So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army
Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in
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