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Old 04-26-2009, 02:51 PM   #326
 
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Murders committed in the hood on the streets with the grime
Then at the top of the food chain they repeating the crime
Even the good-hearted politicians turn evil with time
Til they reach the point where they kill you just for speaking your mind
If you do it put away till life fade from your eyes and you rot
If they do it they get celebrated as they rise to top
This is the way life in the world works whether you like it or not
And with all the violence in the world the system's inviting a lot
Everyday the lower class' streets soaked with blood
And those above hold a grudge ask why we ain't holding up
Want me to eat the pavement, I tell em "See ya later"
I refused to be controlled by a 200-year old piece of paper
At the chance to see us suffer they're all salivating
That's the reason that I've chosen retaliation
Now I stand in the shadows unseen, observant and patient
Wait to strike back at all of these government agents
It's obvious that they got to be killed, no stopping me
But I'm forced to watch their atrocity-filled hypocrisy
Soon enough I'll aggressively move, nothing left to do
Since the definition of capitalism is "Shoot whose next to you"
But I'm not for socialism or Marxism, you still get froze or devoured
When anyone gets in a high position, they get bloated with power
Because they stay clever, ain't never debate whether
To create terror, escape better, create cheddar
Use any source they can just to keep you distracted
Turn the TV off so you can see through the madness
By now the majority of the greatest minds have all been polluted
It won't be long now until martial law's instituted
They already got prison camps on American soil
Where people like you and I will be sent in to boil
For now I'm cloaked and disguised, till hope has arrived
I'm evoking surprise since everything I've spoken is wise
These emotionless guys want you to choke on they lies
Until you croak and you die--unless you open your eyes
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Can't Stop Me (Freestyle)

Right now I feel it would be hard to stop me
From accomplishing my many goals, and doin it promptly
Girls by the dozen, they attack and swamp me
For Prom D, its evident that they all want me
I am not complaining, i love the summer breeze
Through my hair, in this weather, no need for dungarees
Riding with the top down, the blunt, Im smoking
Or If not in my vette, than the sunroof open
Driving, thinking how ill my life is
Striving, but realizing this still suffices
Since I'm on top, others will try n' knock me down
But consider this a warning that you can't stop me now
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Old 05-02-2009, 04:42 PM   #328
 
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Lyrical swords slay your faction, I make it happen
Write everyday cuz I'm being stalked by Mark David Chapman
The government is after me, I watch em employ their foes
Enjoy their woes when I easily destroy their probes
Beware I'm, not gonna share shine, instead I scare minds
Carve my name above their eyes but below their hairline
The alignment of my stars bizarre, plus the bars are hard
Run through the battlefield, destroying armored cars
So who are all of these cowards? I defeat em with ease
My name in their brain, shit repeats while they sleep

Quick keystyle to bring it back..
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Grab a handful of pills,to alter reality, I cough from my allergy
Assault than the battery, dead bodies in coffins surrounding me
In a hotel room with no windows, My sin knows no bound-a-ries
How the bodies, got in through the lobby, is astounding to me
Perhaps it was I, after I got high off my med cab-in-et
Than I come home all alone, and forgot what happened when
I left before, I unleashed death and gore, dead bodies galore
Sirens cant be ignored, check the clock, its quarter past four
Thoughts run through my mind, like how do I leave behind this mess
No ways, I can escape, Im pained, filled with all kinds of stress
Cops knocking on the door, saying Open up or your doomed
I panicked, climbled up through the attack, into another guys room
I spotted a window, and figured I would flee dawg
Jumped from four stories, landed on three police cars
Brought in for questioning, while they ran blood tests
Reached in my pocket, to see if I had any drugs left
Blood splatter analysis, links me to the four deaths
I dip, they run after me, but they slip because the floor's wet
Take the gun from my holster, come closer to your doorstep
I'll leave you with two words motherfucker: YOUR NEXT
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Old 05-03-2009, 03:35 AM   #330
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^^^^that reminded me of "3a.m."
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Old 05-12-2009, 11:01 PM   #331
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^^ thanks man, thats what i was going for.


-Heres a couple new frees . Just having fun


Can I, hit you with lyrics, that split you to pieces
This shit, when you hear it, you'll think that Im Jesus
My bitch give me clearance, she knows that its tight
The music or her pussy, both of em right
Vague pronouns, double entendres ,the whole deal
She moved up from her old ass Honda to Rolls, wheels
That dont stop spinning, I'm only sinning in my cerebrum
Theres a lyrical devil inside me,, when its dinner, I must feed em
Give em some old school Eminem and some perverted shit
Talkin bout murder, itch-ing of the finger, i know every word of it
Not consistent with my personality, maybe im bipolar son
They say you wanta be a gangsta? First try holdin one
Take that same weapon, hold it to your beating heart
Than foresee the counterstrike if you were to be the part
Of Deniro, or Pesci, in Casino, they impressed me
Just the way they were and how they commanded respect B
Or in Goodfellas, when Pesci took the knife from the kitchen,
That was cool, but Im aware that real life is much different,
Reality is russian roulette, they say not to fuck with the deck
Your bluffin, I bet, you got nothing, so check
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Its time to make a transistion from that new up and commer
To a force in the game, plan to do it by the summer
Getting dumber, smoking weed, seven days a week
Who cares if the group shares,,i get all my haze for cheap
Call my friend Jeff and we're blazing in his jeep
My flow causes ruckus like a grenade thrown into the street
The throne I will keep, right under my ass, im comin up fast
Gun will go blast, I'm the president of the number one class
Through my meaningless bars, I reach for the stars
I speak without pause, antique are my cars
I drive into the sunset, with the iPod in the tapedeck
Buy a couple latex, pick up my girl, and practice safesex
Light up another one, than air out the fragrance of the car, throw
The blunt out the window, n' tell my girl, same time tomorrow
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Too much swag to concentrate, have bills like obama makes
Not stressing all the drama mates, like what prom-ma date
And who I'm gunna take, they know Im the leader of my conglomerate
Take a marijuana hit, and If ya mama's fit, im go n' fondle tits
Make a pledge to kill these rappers, make sure Ill honor it
Yonder is, a place where my mind wanders quick
I think of things, that I quickly forget, than regret in time mayne
Not remembering the brilliance that my mind made
Test tomorrow, I bust congest my hollow knowledge
To get some credit for my college, and so I can feel accomplished
Distractions my accomplice, like rapping in a contest
Where I know Im the hardest, most honest working artist
But still I compete with people, who try to run with me
They'll soon discover Im Forrest, jogging the whole count-er-y
Fuck with me, Ill fuck you back, harder than you tried to fuck me
I may say wats up B? But Im just sizing you up , see
Im a man of scarce talents, I bark the loudest when Im provoked
The fire stoked, you'll be in dire straights if you dont retire folks
Desire creates purpose, but my verses create wisdom
Translated into contradictions, but yet you still listen
As do I, read my words, thinking how fly I am
Captain sully, rapping gully, here to supply the fans
With ill rhymes, I fill minds, and soon I'll replace
Lil Wayne on your iPod, when my food for thought is embraced
No need to say grace, you can just feast son
Im finished Mr. DJ, but you can let the beat run ....
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Old 05-14-2009, 12:35 AM   #333
 
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Your crew can get ripped, since my music is sick
Fucking losers and shit, call yall pussies the uterus click
You spit, well that was great, now pass the blade and watch me lacerate
You met your match and fate, as I eradicate this rapper's face
You're no match kid.. ain't a booth that I'm lost In,
Move with caution or rep the underground till your roof is a coffin
This news is bad, but I feel like I have to break it
Cause being conceived through a gangbang doesn’t make you gang-related
I don't got a lot in the bank, so I'm stopping to shank
Any motherfucker who leaving breathing is using an oxygen tank
I'm the freshest starter putting holes in your flesh and armor
You gonna end up 'screwed and chopped' like goin on a date with Jeffrey Dahmer
Luckily, you gonna be stuck to see me bust the beat
Fuck this short ass keystyle, I'm going the fuck asleep

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Recalling memories, analyzing the past
I'm reminded of laughs, but also the winds in my path
I'm capitalizing at last, my confidence is at its peak
Don't even think of the consequences when I speak
Still haven't gotten the honor mentions that I seek
But I know my potential, with full extension I can reach
For goals, that previously seemed unattainable to me
If you let me explain it, than you'll see, what Im capable of being
Weakness is only mental, if others perceptions is your worry
Tell your testimony, only to a select jury
Than use the jurors, to spread around the decision
Use this idealized persona, and be what you envision
Now in every court, you have a man's respect n'
You don't have to prove your self every damn second
Complications can arise, like getting too comfortable
You can't spend too much time smiling at whose under you
Than you can't rise to the level of contentment
That I've been referring to in every single sentence
Unspoken knowledge of future successes
Im the top stockholder, and I am the investment
There may be doubt, but I'm more than certain B
That I'll find meaning in my life, along with the currency
Not everything has gone perfectly, and I wont expect it too
My stress is through, but still must strive to be impeccable
Some may see the sky, as depressing and ominous
On my quest for success, my direction is positive
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Old 05-26-2009, 03:38 PM   #336
 
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They call me Threyev watch me unsheath the sword
I creep through streets and wards
And always beat weak emcees with cords
Member of an elite corps that breaches doors
Freak teen beach-goers scream and weep when bloated corpses sweep the shore
Leave speechless hordes of evil heathens on steel boards beneath sheets in morgues
Sweetly stroke these PC keys like cathedral organ chords
Keep Jesus pieces clean, legal cream creased in jeans and feet in Jordan IVs
Pores seep unique spoken heat 'til each poor and scorned feels his soul restored
Theives explore reefs, sea floors and moors where reservoirs leak towards scenic fjords
Unappreciative sneaks hoping to hoard my gold
Ceaselessly seeking to cheaply receive more and more
But my scope grows increasingly cold
See, Threyev believes he who sows seeds of greed will reap the least reward
I implore, meet and greet the Sifu with no equal who teaches scores
The old priest's glorious thesis reached a holy zenith when the phoenix soared



I'm pretty sure anybody can tell that I wrote this without a beat.
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From inside of the womb 'til the time of my doom
When I lie in a tomb in the light of the moon,
No motives, no ambition, my only mission
Is to move the crowd and I ain't talking about position.
...When the moon is full, I grab human skulls
Filled with fluid, pull 'til my doom is nulled
Vampiric, army of unholy spirits
Who rose as mystics with scrolls of lyrics
Behold the scriptures as the torch is lit
Swords gore your wrists until you're forced to quit
Threyev, I walk with the heathens and cretins
I left God bleeding in the Garden of Eden
Flames in the eyes of the shameless and wise
Unsheathe my blade as blood rains from the skies
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Old 06-04-2009, 04:52 PM   #338
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damn Threyev. Had no idea you was that nice.
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^^good looks.

tried switching up my flow a bit on this next one. tell me what you all think.



I got more cold cuts than delicatessens, teach you a helluva lesson/
The majority of cyphers is simply celibate sessions selling digression/
A literal circle of lyrical virgins attemptin to sell an impression/
Me? I would rather accelerate affection or just tell of my blessings/
Use my bars to ask relevant questions that develop progression/
Rip fellas in sections wit a vocabulary deeper than pelicans resting/
Now I’ve finally found shelter from hell and the devils' tempest/
When the tempter attempts to tempt this I turn to my squad for defenses/
Diablo’s defenseless against this intense prayer warrior’s senses/
My message is inexpensive if only you would just pay attention/
Stay attentive as jury benches cuz the truth gets buried in trenches/
This utter violence is endless, the church’s silence is senseless/
Celebrities smile for lenses, paparazzi pry in private parties for pensions/
Drugs delve deadbeat daddies down demented devilish dimensions/
Drunk drivers in S10s bring station wagons down deadly dead ends/
Dead friends is what tends to send men to follow suicidal trends/
Jumping street medians, the media’s teaching us to be greedy and tedious/
Our TV is misleading us, mistreating us, our seeds are whose needing us/
I’m at peace whenever pens and pads are my needed ingredients/
My mic is my medium, your attention is what’s needed immediate/
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Literal personification of her mom's insulation
is non integrated with my cock since I'm hangin
I'm off in a space ship past God n' his angels
to shoot cum missles at the comets of danger
Often a stranger to the stages I address
playing mics like it's chess, always changing what comes next
When I flow I let the cord dangle from my neck
to show pain of all who wept for those slain for secrets kept
I lay it down in lessons of lyrical slanderism
chemical aneurisms cause minimal damage to him
Give em' a path, a vision of spiritual class and wisdom
to hear in a flash a minute cuz here with this gasp I'm winded

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My pain--migrates--like migraine aches
My strain’s--wide placed--like five great lakes
Touching a number of states, confusion included
Secluded in a dungeon til someone intruded
Imputed purity to my ventricles from verticals
Surged verges of vertigo since I burst from the cervical
Like spiritual surgicals, had emergency transplants
Flashbacks of urgency was purgin me past that
Pack rats ain’t concernin me, burnin up Black packs
These wack cats in backpacks ain’t half as abstract
Can you match that classic rap amidst pop singles
Pockets of hot nickels, cold as popsicles wit block lingo
The single king of neo-soul wit sprinkles of rhyme
I’m not tryna put a hot iron to this wrinkle in time
No regrets, holding vets to they bets, child support debts
It’s treacherous but yet I gets naughty by nature on the set
That ain’t even my best lest distress dares me to stop
Midwest declare me the best, this sess compares me to Pac
Every single compliment boosts my confidence
I abhor cockiness, I stay abstinent from obstinates
I’m a optimist, positive I won’t be stopped by obstacles
Clear cataracts in my opticals wit a whole box of Optimos
Threyev is better than ever, never ever under the weather
Sever the feather soft, yes, the successor of Nebuchadnezzar
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What does it take to be ill, creatively skilled
How do you become famous, appeal
To a wide range of people, who respect what you do
On the stage, Im not equal, Im lesser than you
Oppressed, yes its true, a slave and an artist
And If they forget about you, than you fade in the darkness
Delayed, cause the market, isn't correct for profit
Afraid, that my targets, wont collect the product
My objective is to direct this film, starring me
My friends and my family, are at the heart of me
My father is successful, and that catapulted me
To realize that the apple doesn't fall far from the tree
These bars in my free, reflect my unseen potential B
It remains a secret, but I'll come clean eventually
Mentally, my capacity and drive, will grow larger
No loss is drastic B, just strive, and go harder
As long as Im alive, no flow can outmatch me
Critics are like bees in a hive, just waiting to attack me
They perish when they sting, while I'm unaffected
They should cherish what I bring, rather than try to perfect it
This thread was blessed without a pastor or priest
Im from New York where we stood tall after defeat
I hear rappers talkin bout how they mastered the streets
But they couldn't record a message after the beep
I hope you learned your lesson, that you have to retreat
No one believes your stories, bout how you combat the police
In ac-tu-al-it-y, your a little kid in Budapest
But you claim your 'round a ratchet, like Nicholson in Cuckoos Nest
Theres a little bit of buddha left, who wants a hit?
I don't just light up the darkness with my marijuana spliff
I do it with my honestness, my integrity, and dedication
A legend in the making, supplying medication to several patients
Everyday is a day, where I can improve on the past
I here a lotta people saying, "you shouldn't rap"
Maybe thats true, that there won't be any fan mail
But when I start typing, I believe that I can't fail
Cocky maybe, but I call it a quiet confidence
That destroys competition and thus strikes incompetence
My goal is to find a way to live my life the way I like
And not have to worry about what my friends' wives might..
Think of me, what interests me is music, this is my craft
And if you don't like that, start kissing my ass
Its time to chill, got a stocked fridge, and the bong filled too
Let me enter the theatre of the mind, fuck John Wilkes Booth
As I get into the zone, whether its all alone or with family
I think its only you who can really understand me
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You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

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been listening to a lot of aes rock lately... maybe it shows

Damn it folks, peep the anecdote that your man just spoke
Demand his quotes that handle folks who get ate up like cantaloupe
This diatribe define the lines inside your mind till final times
I try to find the finest rhymes behind the times of mindless kinds
So clear the fracture, I rock a sentence hop some fences
No fear of capture, not to mention consequences
Inside my skull there's a thousand tomes that allow the poems
To come outta my mouth and roam to enlighten on sound alone
I don't own no kicks but my flow's so sick
Even though it's this backpack homo shit
Asking "Whose promo's this?" you best notice it
So hip and with more hop than pogo sticks
This freaking preacher unleashing ether through screeching speakers
Repeat the leader who keep the fever yet even sweeter
Till the sword is gone take a helping of hell and pour it on
You're in my mind now so welcome to Coruscant
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hey yo this shit goes to all you motherfuckin wannabe g's yall my think you hard you don't know shit try live half your life without a father being raised by one person and not knowing right shit just livin every day like it was your last make all the with punk ass police going think are law of everyone i say fuck those pig stay out my way you fag
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You probably see me as the nice guy in interviews
I can understand your in business, cause ur witt is crude
I know you dont care, and the critics applaud you
I also know that all those addictions will haunt you
Maybe not directly, but fast forward a little bit
Look at your daughter and try to find her innocence
Then realize its gone, and rightfully dawg
But also realize your the reason that her psyche is flawed
Your too much of a coward, to summon the power
When your situation is dour, you run to the powder
Now all the depression you have, you down right deserve it
For her sake, its too late, since you can't find the courage
I respect you on wax, theres nobody like you
Theres no doubt , your an emcee who I can't hold a mic to
But lets step out of the rap game, and into real life dude
Your scum, look what youve become, im not tryna ignite you
Your the one who started this, I didnt wanta any part of this
But your life is something you need to harness quick
How can you look at your fucking reflection and smile
When your Ambien addiction is affecting your child
Homophobic bastard, lying, drug addict
U coming to terms with your past or just defying what happened?
MY sole goal is simply to relay this advice
That everyone you care bout is paying the price
You can respond to me, and slaughter my name
Just dont expect the scars you left on your daughter to fade
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^^damn that was deep. good shit d..

this is from a wip:

Can Reality Evolve Around Money?
Shit, I think it must even though that sound funny
Just like they told you as a child, you can place the opposite of last
As long as you believe, work hard, and have a pocket full of cash
This is the way things go, and damn it it's tragic
They don't care where you got the money they just ask if you have it
If you down on the ground they all hate with a funny smile
But when you got the gwap the gravitate towards the money piles
How can you try to remain a scholar still
When you see that if you just talking bout Impala grills
And how you popping steel, crack-spot chopping meals, taking lots of pills
Will give you pots of thrills, shopping spills from them dollar bills
That are just rolling in, got you higher than life in a cloud of indo
What can you do but watch artistic merit fly out the window
Might be strong against the pressure now, but you bound to collapse
Life is all about money, a principle, our country was founded on that
The pursuit of happiness? Founding fathers wrote that with a wink and a grin
That's why every time you get any money at all you thinking of them
'There are some things money can't buy' what a damn lie
You can stand by with a model in a place where you'll always have a tan line
Meanwhile whoever broke got a sidewalk for a mattress
You got the cash and smile on the red carpet while you talk to an actress
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D.O.A.
Let me first begin this correct
This aint a record for my sins and regrets
This is something analyzing a trend
In the hopes to make it finally end
Ive been here for years now
Lifes a highway, not gunna steer out
Yea Ive hit some deers, doubts
But when your aiming for the sky, you shouldnt fear clouds
If its all sunshine, and no rain now
I guess I would have nothing to complain bout
I hear others dumbing down the flow
Why should they stop, if we crown them, so
Its up to me to waterboard em, drown em slow
You think after all these years, their sound would grow
Uhh, I guess we were all wrong
Luckily, we have someone to fall on
All hope isnt necessarily all gone
Cause Im coming back home, call mom
I mean rap, spitting mean facts
You say your the best - you really mean that?
Your records are trite and your free's wack
I guess all that bravado is for some feedback
Be that, as it may, rap needs a change
After this, it will not be the same
This aint the death of auto-tune, its of wack shit
If our songs had a baby, it would be average
Yours sucks, mines a classic
Your level of expectations, Im way past it
We need to stop, before the results are too drastic
Before I get fed up, and become the Hulk on these bastards
Sorry yawl, this is your last night
I think you all fought your last fight
So sit back, contemplate your past life
Tomorrow's the funeral, bring on the bagpipes
I guess you could consider this a eulogy
The final extinction of a foolish breed


Na-na-na-na, na-na-na-na , hey, hey, hey, goodbye
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quick ass keystyle below (check my new drop "Candid Soldier")

The gentle brush strokes on the painter's canvas
Light in the room is shed by bloody candles
It was reflected by the bronze snatch of his sandals
Jesters of the hall court in The Macedonia Castle
Apocalypse of the mental hemisphere
The end is near, the Black Mace engineer
Write horror novels on the wall of the Asylum
Kids playing outside thinking it's kindergarten
Corporate comitee with their cigars large
Eviscerate you to show you who's in charge
The powers of a word include both mend and hurt
Cuss on you to leave your face eating the dirt
The hierarchy of evolution is extremely unfair
Before humans, trees were for millions of years there
Now we cut them and we just don't care
We in a way slaughter our own fathers
When we eat fishes,and toss their bones to garbage
The Nords discovered America half a century before Columbus
Leif wasn't interested to what will be now among us
That isn't what stunned us... It was the Indians
The kings wanted to make them their minions
There was the origin of racism, and the wicked image
Crooked minds ready to rape and pillage
Only a small conquistador percentage
Came there for knowledge, and to learn the mysteries
We didn't make this shit up, this is history

pretty sure most of this didn't rhyme
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Old 06-19-2009, 08:38 PM   #349
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damn khoop and DX killin it....
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Old 06-20-2009, 02:20 AM   #350
 
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haha good looking blizz...

The sound of a fool makes me pop a vein, leave their fathers slain
Leave their daughters maimed, in the forest under autumn rains
I will not refrain from leaving their petty God in flames
Make their sons flee the country like Malcolm and Donalbain
Question my motives, and Death will answer with necromancers
Holding heads and lanterns gathered in a hidden western cavern
Tortured on a leather canvas, you hear their evil lyrics
Once your life is gone they keep torturing your feeble spirit
Every wack emcee should fear it, no chance for ressurection
Demonic intervention, with style harder than last night erection*

*I know this is from the Tribe Called Quest song...
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