Go Back   Hip Hop Board > Rhymes > Freestyles
Connect with Facebook

Freestyles Spit some hot flows in here...show all the other members what you are made of!


Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 03-12-2009, 10:34 PM   #301
***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
 
youngking187's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Washington D.C
Posts: 2,517
Repped: 305
Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts
youngking187 has untouchable platinum swaggeryoungking187 has untouchable platinum swaggeryoungking187 has untouchable platinum swaggeryoungking187 has untouchable platinum swaggeryoungking187 has untouchable platinum swaggeryoungking187 has untouchable platinum swaggeryoungking187 has untouchable platinum swaggeryoungking187 has untouchable platinum swaggeryoungking187 has untouchable platinum swaggeryoungking187 has untouchable platinum swaggeryoungking187 has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

^^usually dont feed in the freestyle thread..
but once again..one word.."ill"..lol
__________________

I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz
youngking187 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-14-2009, 02:23 PM   #302
#
 
Witty Qwan's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: My crib
Posts: 3,049
Repped: 155
Repped 482 Times in 310 Posts
Neg Reps: 21
Neg Repped at 81 Times in 75 Posts
Witty Qwan has untouchable platinum swaggerWitty Qwan has untouchable platinum swaggerWitty Qwan has untouchable platinum swaggerWitty Qwan has untouchable platinum swaggerWitty Qwan has untouchable platinum swaggerWitty Qwan has untouchable platinum swaggerWitty Qwan has untouchable platinum swaggerWitty Qwan has untouchable platinum swaggerWitty Qwan has untouchable platinum swaggerWitty Qwan has untouchable platinum swaggerWitty Qwan has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

U hear da Crowd Chantin, Reddi Ree Da Champyin
Hall a Fame, dey betta call ma name, out in Canton
Ohio, but fuck it, grab da checkz in start stampin
Before I leave a nigga out in da wild like he campin

lmaooooooo
Witty Qwan is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-17-2009, 12:37 AM   #303
----------DX-------------
 
DXavier23's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
Repped: 192
Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post
DXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

I spent a couple hours just reading my old rhymes
Reminiscing back, just thinking bout old times
Couple of my bars said that I used to hold nines
But thats almost as uncommon as finding a goldmine
Most of the time I address what I see
And how I fail to live up to the best I can be
Others say I am the best rapper of the century
And that me and this rap thing, were flat out meant to be
I read my lyrics criticizing Bush intensively
Other lines talked about how friends turned into enemies
Some of em address girls, some situations hypothetical
Call it a cliche subject, but what I write's incredible
Politics as usual, living in a world so inscrutable
But through its imperfections, i still find it beautiful
Failure can be amusing if you've achieved what your pursuing
Think about what then was I thinking, what then was I doing
Read violent stories that I am the author of
Or about bad decisions, that I made when I caught a buzz
I like thinking back in times when things were different B
Its like going in your textbook, reading through chapters of history
After the misery, theirs a ladder to victory
I find hope in my drops, when I was sad, thats what lifted me
Im gifted B, I don't care about the haters that I exist
Im gunna keep writing down my life, than, later I will sit
Down, re-examine my work, see if i've improved or lowered
My lyrics are the guide that perpetually moves me forward
__________________
So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army
Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in
DXavier23 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-21-2009, 03:57 PM   #304
----------DX-------------
 
DXavier23's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
Repped: 192
Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post
DXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

Remember me back in the day with my fake ID
Asking the teachers in my school, may I pee?
Im gettin money now, thats just the way I be
And I aint askin for no bonuses like A.I.G.
Im just hustlin, I can sell Islam to Christians
Anything to benefit from this econom-ic system
Look at the sign, it never says he has gone fishing
No time for vacations, no San Juan visits
No foregone wishes, from foregone riches
No attention paid to these mor-on gimmicks
To truly make it, you have to stay seeking
Success, which u celebrate on a sat-ur-day evening
So when you peak in, your sons room and hes sleeping
You know your the reason, that he can live his dreams n'
All this I thought about, while listenin to some Slaughterhouse,
Smokin up a quarter ounce, while slicin up my porterhouse,
With a steak knife, I figured what a great life is all about
Striving for yourself, but putting food in your daughters mouth
My enemies, I called em out, but they havent responded
Im talking bout our government, i aint touchin their bonds kid
Imma keep my money tucked under my arm, with a sig
The sole reason I don't need an alarm in my crib
Call security, they should be alarmed of the kid
Call my gun Margaret Mitchell, make you gone with the wind
Im just warmin up, blastin Jay, as I swerve through traffic
Check the standings, I got close to a perfect bracket
Life is looking up now, so I can move from Uptown
I do this for alcoholics, tell em to put their cup down
After you read my shit, you'll say it sounded tough
I dont know any Danish people, but I stay around the dutch
Lifes a play-ground that is rough, no need to explain this metaphor
So now Im gunna peace , and forget the pain of every war
Wait, one more line, theres something I shoulda said before
This aint a rap, this is just a letter for
My people who are facing hardships, but cannot cope
Let me reel you back in to the ship that is hope
Take a tight grip of the rope, lyrics rescue you from the abyss
And refuel your despair, with a hunger to live
__________________
So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army
Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

Last edited by DXavier23; 03-21-2009 at 08:06 PM.
DXavier23 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-23-2009, 04:44 PM   #305
 
Threyev's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2006
Location: The Bronx
Posts: 553
Repped: 82
Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts
Neg Reps: 3
Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts
Threyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

Damn DX. Going off.

Everybody trying to step to me but I'm pushing em back
But they don't wanna fuck with me like a puss with the clap
So when I come through then you got to be running boy
Because I got less patients/patience than a doctor that's unemployed
Label execs can bring the pressure but as hot as they bring
This is a movement right here and I ain't stopping this thing
And it don't matter if I'm the only rapper left that is not gonna sing
Because you still can't see me like a hobbit rocking the ring
The verbal weapons that I unleash on you will crease your features
Every word sicker than salmonella in Reese's Pieces
Don't try to put us in the same sentence--I spit the iller shit
That's like comparing Kobe Bryant to Darko Milicic
Threyev is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-23-2009, 06:37 PM   #306
----------DX-------------
 
DXavier23's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
Repped: 192
Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post
DXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

Lately, its like something just got into me
Like a teenage girl who just lost her virginity
Lyrics are the byproduct of a witty brain racin
I got a 'terminal pen', like I owned the city's train stations
I absorb the suns rays, now Im loaded with energy
Hope to one day, be quoted like Kennedy
Its not what the rap game can do for you. fuck that mayne
Its about what you as rapper can do for the rap game
Fuck the fake rappers and the music that they make for children
Who leave the real niggas with no cake like Milton
I'm deaf to death threats, but i see their hates established
But their guns remain blank like my facebook status
We know DX is the best like we know the clergy prays
U aint a gangsta, just exposed to movies at an early age
The same people who claim that they're employed by the black market
Are those called to clean up aisle five, at target
Imma askin yawl questions, ill tell you if that is correct
You are solely contestants and I'm Alex Trebek
All the answers I could want, are somewhere in my head
Buried within my bars, in one of these threads
I dont need someone to provide me with guidance
I'll just head straight to the cypher, to decipher my writing
__________________
So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army
Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in
DXavier23 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 03-23-2009, 07:00 PM   #307
 
Threyev's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2006
Location: The Bronx
Posts: 553
Repped: 82
Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts
Neg Reps: 3
Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts
Threyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

I feel you and I guess I'm gonna drop the back and forth
Shit is easy, we dropping straight crack for sport
Gotta keep this thing going without disruption
The country's obsessed with consumption, ignoring corruption
Masses of sheeple don't know the government's true function
So they walk around, operating on false assumptions
I shit on cowards, their spit's devoured
They watching talking heads as they sit for hours
The bull's shit we been fed was flipped and soured
To the point where you don't consider there was reason for them to hit the towers
But if you go against the grain in this regard they laugh and call you lunatic
You're lost and alone till you don't know where the movement is
I speak, write and rap; try to present myself lyrically
But I'm ridiculed for trying to expose the conspiracy
Yet the flame has been lit and there's no way they can extinguish me
I say what I feel-- fuck em if they call it mental deficiency
Threyev is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-01-2009, 02:04 PM   #308
9 Elements
 
Young Mic's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Tbilisi
Posts: 1,091
Repped: 181
Repped 175 Times in 84 Posts
Neg Reps: 19
Neg Repped at 23 Times in 15 Posts
Young Mic is a motherfuckin boss ya heardYoung Mic is a motherfuckin boss ya heardYoung Mic is a motherfuckin boss ya heardYoung Mic is a motherfuckin boss ya heardYoung Mic is a motherfuckin boss ya heardYoung Mic is a motherfuckin boss ya heardYoung Mic is a motherfuckin boss ya heardYoung Mic is a motherfuckin boss ya heardYoung Mic is a motherfuckin boss ya heardYoung Mic is a motherfuckin boss ya heardYoung Mic is a motherfuckin boss ya heard
Default

Yo Yo Yo, It's Pistol, Ya'll Know This Dudes IllA.
Sparxxxxx, WTF Man, Clean My Shoes Nigga.

^^ Lmfao
__________________
myspace.com/youngmiconline
Young Mic is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-05-2009, 08:18 PM   #309
Fly $ociety.
 
DAT BOI TREY's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: the studio
Posts: 745
Repped: 401
Repped 72 Times in 55 Posts
Neg Reps: 70
Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts
DAT BOI TREY has untouchable platinum swaggerDAT BOI TREY has untouchable platinum swaggerDAT BOI TREY has untouchable platinum swaggerDAT BOI TREY has untouchable platinum swaggerDAT BOI TREY has untouchable platinum swaggerDAT BOI TREY has untouchable platinum swaggerDAT BOI TREY has untouchable platinum swaggerDAT BOI TREY has untouchable platinum swaggerDAT BOI TREY has untouchable platinum swaggerDAT BOI TREY has untouchable platinum swaggerDAT BOI TREY has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

I Don't Spit Bout Bustin Shots Cuz Niggaz Ain't Buyin It//
But My Punches'LL pUT A Patch On Ya Eye Like A Pir-A-Te//
Crack Is H"armful"~That's The Only Time You "Punch-Lines"//
I'm Tha "Captain" of Lyrical "Hannibals" So I Call It "Crunch Time"//
Yall Wanna Look UP 2 Me Once Ya Favorite Rapper Album Flops//
Spit Texts(techs) Below Ya Waist Make Ya Legs Fold As If His Scrotum Drops//
__________________

FIU 09/10 Sunbelt Champions.
DAT BOI TREY is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-07-2009, 02:59 PM   #310
----------DX-------------
 
DXavier23's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
Repped: 192
Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post
DXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

He goes to sleep and wakes up in a distant land
Involuntary embarks on a trip, that he wished he planned
He sees white sand, umbrellas, fine girls, and tequilla shots
He wonders where he was, and if its real or not
Hears spanish guitars playing The Eagles and Marley
Takes a Bacardi, and decides he's gunna join the party
A blond, with sunglasses, asks if, hes having fun, Matches
light the blunt, pass it, girl climbs on him, unflaccid
Feels high off medicine but thinks hes gunna get it in
She seductively grabs his hand, and walks slightly ahead of him
He looks back, and all he sees is darkness
He asks no questions, she starts signing 'Heartless'
She says she loves Kanye, and thats her anthem
She starts talking sexy, calling him handsome
He can barely stand up, without her assistance
His eyes close shut, but his ears can still listen
All he hears is footsteps, no additional sounds
Becomes nearly impossible to lift his feet off the ground
He falls asleep, and hes found, on the street the next morning
3 miles away from the beach he was exploring
His pockets empty, his face swollen and red
Wanders what happened to that girl, and did they roll into bed?
He realizes he had no clue where he was headin
So he goes up to a truck to ask for directions
The driver was a man, next to him was a blond
She said we're done doing business, its time to move on
__________________
__________________
So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army
Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in
DXavier23 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-07-2009, 04:46 PM   #311
 
Threyev's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2006
Location: The Bronx
Posts: 553
Repped: 82
Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts
Neg Reps: 3
Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts
Threyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

Apparently if he's socialist that's enough reason to arrest a dude
Even though capitalism is shoot the guy next to you
We get everything from four or five corporate powers
Then we try to start a company for the people and they slaughter ours'
This shit is real and it's here and it isn't funny anymore
Obama's for Afghanistan because those who made him get money off the war
So we're stuck there for another four years at least and it's a damn shame
But Obama can't pull out--he needs money for the 2012 campaign
Threyev is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-09-2009, 01:15 PM   #312
----------DX-------------
 
DXavier23's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
Repped: 192
Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post
DXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

Creativity flourishes inside my mind kid
Searching for inspiration wherever I can find it
Listening to soul hits, wishin I could sample this old shit
Send me the instrumentals, ill dismantle the whole disc
Im so sick, focused on making wishes reality
Haters all around , make the biggest bow down to me
See the world profoundly, but cannabis isn't vital
Spew my lyrics, and wait for Anabis's arrival
Only then can I be judged and properly critiqued
Spit the mellow truth, yawl sound obnoxious when you speak
Its been weeks, but my gifts go unthanked
But fuck sitting here, waiting to shift through the ranks
Proverbial logic, basis of choices, Ive taken the poison
But Im immune to it, im late to appointments, I zoom to em
My tomb, you in, so when Im laid to rest in time
Ill have an opportunity to kill you for a second time
I don't say Im the best to rhyme, cause that would be false
But I have to say, most these rappers wasting my time like Default
My watch equals power, if time equals currency
I stay inwardly focused, I dont care how many people heard of me
Word to B, if he was still here, he'd by my LP's only feature
Show the world how the student eventually outflows the teacher
No need to look at the periodic table, you already know its ether
Even tho Im not even on a label, my music bumps out your speakers
Listen to me, I am here all alone
Bonding with my keyboard, punching keys in my home
I dont believe Im a clone, that great men looked up to
Im my own individual, whos just looking for some love too
Trust me, Ill trust you, some of yawl are suspicious
Let my music be the vessel that brings more than riches
Im finished
__________________
So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army
Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in
DXavier23 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-09-2009, 01:25 PM   #313
Wordsmith
 
Blizzy's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2008
Location: In Battlefield's
Posts: 3,359
Repped: 687
Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts
Neg Reps: 25
Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts
Blizzy has untouchable platinum swaggerBlizzy has untouchable platinum swaggerBlizzy has untouchable platinum swaggerBlizzy has untouchable platinum swaggerBlizzy has untouchable platinum swaggerBlizzy has untouchable platinum swaggerBlizzy has untouchable platinum swaggerBlizzy has untouchable platinum swaggerBlizzy has untouchable platinum swaggerBlizzy has untouchable platinum swaggerBlizzy has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

^ILL....you got verses for days
__________________
MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT

myspace.com/ttpbloodshot
Blizzy is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-09-2009, 02:34 PM   #314
Young J
 
YoungJ's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Providence RI
Posts: 3,003
Repped: 203
Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts
Neg Reps: 5
Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts
YoungJ has untouchable platinum swaggerYoungJ has untouchable platinum swaggerYoungJ has untouchable platinum swaggerYoungJ has untouchable platinum swaggerYoungJ has untouchable platinum swaggerYoungJ has untouchable platinum swaggerYoungJ has untouchable platinum swaggerYoungJ has untouchable platinum swaggerYoungJ has untouchable platinum swaggerYoungJ has untouchable platinum swaggerYoungJ has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

yeah DX is my dude...i been reading your verses son..you always been nice but you came along way..
YoungJ is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-10-2009, 05:22 PM   #315
 
Threyev's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2006
Location: The Bronx
Posts: 553
Repped: 82
Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts
Neg Reps: 3
Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts
Threyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

(I'm listening to Necro right now for what it's worth)

You get torn from a distance with swords in an instance
The horsemen have entered with horns and a vengeance
To storm Mount Olympus, sprayin' the tecks.
They aimed at your chest; it's aimless if you're aimin' to test
Angels of Death, feedin' on your danglin' flesh
Manglin' Michael until his Halo strangles his neck
Creatin' a mess, of blood, feathers, halos and heads
Satan's impressed. Don't matter 'cause we're slayin' him next
So pay your respects, or shots hit you ankles to chest
Khoop* motherfuckers, not a name to forget.

*I need to get a new name lol
Threyev is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-16-2009, 11:08 PM   #316
Everybody'z Favorite
 
Reddi Ree's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey
Posts: 1,000
Repped: 230
Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts
Neg Reps: 3
Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts
Reddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

bring it back
__________________
myspace.com/reeyaboy
Reddi Ree is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 02:54 AM   #317
----------DX-------------
 
DXavier23's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
Repped: 192
Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post
DXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

No extended metaphors, this is just a letter for
A girl Imma bout to meet up with on the eleventh floor
You knew I was fond of you, but I didnt come on to you
Your the one responsible, you made the moves, that I responded to
Talkin bout our past history, I knew she was diggin me
Sayin that she wishes I was the one who took her virginity
She wrapped her legs around me, and I stare in between
Wonder how it would feel, if I got in them jeans
Talking in the day, sippin drinks, discussing life
Then we got drunk and start touchin in the night
Mutual attraction, playing wit me in the taxi
Talking dirty in my ear, sayin i bet they gunna catch me
She makes me happy, but it's complicated son
She likes many boys, but says I'm her favorite one
Should I pretend not to care where she sticks her tongue
Its like every single night she has a different one
She tells me shit thats intimate, like who shes with n shit
Than tells me im the one she wants to be hittin it
While she gettin me hard, Im gettin mentally scarred
Are your legs always open, tell me if ever entry is barred
You've fucked only your boyfriends, your not a whore
But you kissing everyone, dont know if i can take it any more
My concerns subside, when you let me inside
But when I slide back out, the same thoughts re-enter my mind
So where does it leave me now? I have no clue
She says I have so many things I can show you
Damn dont I feel special, parenthesis, sarcasm
Still I daydream about how I can make you orgasm
Maybe Im just horny, or maybe what we have is real
But the doubts seem to obscure how I really feel
Im gunna ignore the past, leave it, just let it be
And shift my attention to us being together presently
__________________
So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army
Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in
DXavier23 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-19-2009, 11:49 PM   #318
 
Threyev's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2006
Location: The Bronx
Posts: 553
Repped: 82
Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts
Neg Reps: 3
Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts
Threyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

Been strong for years, how you gonna start hurting me
My punchlines hit you like waking up during open heart surgery
You don't wanna start shit I'm heartless, flow retarded
Move lethargic then I'll light your apartment from the darkness
I'm crazy some said cuz I want all rivers to run read
Come at me - how you gonna kill the undead?
I'm an emcee with a gift, I creep through the mist
If you speaking some shit, you will cease to exist
My tongue spits spears from my lungs and you fear
That they'll puncture your ears, you stumble in tears
To your final destination, your final resting place in
The Forest of the Damned as a mindless mental patient
Feathers fall from my back, and burn to ashes
A blood red path is the only night passage
Through the dark forest with a chilling cold breeze
Where the wolves can't match the howls of old trees
Death lingers with the stench of stale corpses
Crows pick apart the bones of pale horses
Time stands still in the endless night
The sky is pitch black with no moon in sight
As you scream to the heavens with your greatest yell
Bony hands from below pull you straight to hell
Threyev is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-20-2009, 10:46 PM   #319
----------DX-------------
 
DXavier23's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
Repped: 192
Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post
DXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

Poetry, it flows through me, so soulfully
I hold the keys, just to feel the notes I see
Lyricism and dope beats, whenever the two combined
It results in chills running through my spine
Through my mind, are clever words
Give em something they never heard
Wisdom from experience made me a better pers-
Person, the curtains of life have just parted
And Im excited that the show has finally started
Fallen cowards, fall to powers, buried underneath the flowers
Come strong or get devoured, by the beast, I tower
Over opponents, but shower my family with gifts
Mama steps into the dealership, I say take your pick
Stay away from rifts, make friends with my nemesis
Blindside em to my intentions, turn em into Oedipus
I never miss opportunities that knock, i stay true to this hip hop
Time is money, tick tok, thus I gotta end this shit, not
Finished, my fun has only just begun my friend
But for now this free is done, the end
__________________
So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army
Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in
DXavier23 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-21-2009, 03:56 PM   #320
 
Threyev's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2006
Location: The Bronx
Posts: 553
Repped: 82
Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts
Neg Reps: 3
Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts
Threyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

Damn DX. Never-ending rhymes..

I don't ignore the others watching us with their high sky probes
My mind's a wide-open scope like blue-laser white diodes
The moment has come, I'm awakened in my fully violent phase
Sage in a rage engaged while puffing violet haze
Styles for days while spraying solar rays till polar shades fade
Your fate displayed when you fade away
Body disappeared like the so-called savior's cave
Spit in an ageless way, even if the page decay
Fuck moving Ghandi style, this ain't a calm thing
Niggas claim they hard, but I'm the one with the bomb rigged
There's no fucking way I'll lose the war so of course I'll win the fight
I easily bring light to darkness and shadow to the light
Stand tall while holding evil scriptures and pistol grips
As a baby I was bathed in the River Styx
Every rhyme I write is ridiculous meticulous
Limitless devilish energy strikes where my pencil hits
Feast on miscarriages, pick my teeth with bones
Last nigga to deny I'm all-powerful? He was stoned
Without using flames and weed, this motherfucker aimed to flee
But I swiftly maimed his feet and watched his ankles bleed
Then I strapped the blasphemous bastard to a cactus
That back-talking fucker was lynched backwards
Demonic divinity, I border on sublimity
Write on an asymptote as it approaches infinity
When I enter the room, it's your blackest of letters
Me and death go together, like traffic and weather
The witches predicted my approach, and those hags was not demented
My arrival signals the Ragnarok's commencement

I hope people are reading this shit lol
Threyev is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-23-2009, 05:45 PM   #321
----------DX-------------
 
DXavier23's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
Repped: 192
Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post
DXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

I stay laying low, cause the boss they after
Then I covertly attack, and David Frost these rappers
Break em, make em say things they wanted to conceal
Unraveling facades, until I discover what is real
What I feel, is sympathy for a fierce adversary
Living in an idealized world, nothing short of imaginary
Then when I approach, with my sports coat and cough smoke
The opponent will secede, realizing hes lost hope
Back on the ropes, he keeps on taking uppercuts
I took a couple hits, but damn right, I sucked it up
Awarded with critical reception, my lyrical suggestion
Is that maybe there is some form of spiritual connection
As a form of repentance, the longest sentence i could write
Would be life, and that's how long this plight will affect him . Good night
__________________

This shit is a true free: 3 minutes on the clock: GO




I'm about to kick a free, watch it go back and forth
Life is a highway, tryna stay away from traffic court
I'll adopt rapping as my sport, check the history book
And look through the pages in the chapters,
I give away my jersey so they can raise it to the rafters
Grade A haze up in the whip, dont worry , I bought plenty
So we can treat everyday like it's 4-20
Life is a party, so keep pourin more henny
Im just gettin started, tell me if yawl ready
Call my benz Michael Jackson, cause it was once black
But now I turned it red, get more head than a dunce cap
Im bold and clever, I'mma g and Im cold as ever
So shootin me , is the only way to get an open letter
If it aint the benz, than im ridin in the El Camino
Put diamonds on my bitch that sparkle like Pellegrino
I'mma keep fucking this married chick, to hell if he know
Ill keep it a secret, I won't tell if she don't
No wonder she a freak, her and her parents dont even speak
But who cares, I get to beat, at least a couple times a week
I reek of marijuana haze, call me if u wanna blaze
The street calendar has no days off or hol-i-days
So I'm stay on the corner, 24/7
Sell coke to this guy who pretends he's a reverend
Shipment succesful, watch me lose weight like Star Jones
Than peace and cease to exist like car phones
__________________
So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army
Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

Last edited by DXavier23; 04-24-2009 at 12:30 AM.
DXavier23 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-24-2009, 12:29 AM   #322
----------DX-------------
 
DXavier23's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
Repped: 192
Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post
DXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

Not bound by low expectations, instead I aim high
But i realize that others are aiming for the same sky
So how do I separate from the rest of my peers
This is not a question, just me confessin my fears
I'll spend the rest of my years, tryna find the answer
For the depression and tears, derived from the malign cancer
That lies in my head, compare myself to others achievements
So I forget that I am the one, who I should believe in
And what if other people succeed in, the fields of their dreams n'
Thats fine, as long I find, whats real and the meaning
Behind our existence, it's gotta be more than assets
I think its love, cause when you die, thats all you have left
Cliche sentences transformed into scriptures that sound tight
Even the news lacks substance, all it is is pictures and soundbites
Is there meaning in anything, I'm not an existentialist
But I put things into question, when I'm with my pencil bitch
My mental capacity, surpasses thee, Harvard graduate
And I've only began my takeover, wait till I start to rap this shit
Result will either be an enormous bust or instant fame
I dont care what it does, as long as my words sink in your brain. Im out
__________________
So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army
Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in
DXavier23 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-24-2009, 04:01 PM   #323
 
Threyev's Avatar
 
Join Date: May 2006
Location: The Bronx
Posts: 553
Repped: 82
Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts
Neg Reps: 3
Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts
Threyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swaggerThreyev has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

Ok DX I gotta try a 'real' keystyle too to keep up with you and shit.

My whole squad nice, ain't no fucking with us
If we stuck in a rut, we just start puffing the dust
Wanna throw me under the bus? Ain't happening
People see me coming start screaming "K back again"
Haters - now there's half of them, I start to laugh at them
Cuz they scared stiffer than mannequins, imprisoned like Africans
Sit back, relax, smoke wet until I overdose
Go out smiling: high as a bitch while I'm comatose
Now it's like the smell of spray paint is heaven to me
I'll be smoking every day until I turn 73
My flow like Proactive the way it's popping your face
That shits super ugly like Kanye's girl rocking a cape
So when I walk down the street I see sniper's on rooftops
Surround the perimeter for two blocks, dots on me from hair to tube socks
I'm not afraid, I got my robot and he designed to destroy
So when I power it up I just recline and enjoy
Let's me sit back and start pondering, what are life's accomplishments?
When does a perceptual schematic gain consciousness
When does a difference engine become a search for truth
When does a human turn to a human with eternal youth
When does a personality simulator become a bitter mote
And my robot starts thinking before slitting throats
There's a new way that it's moving with the people it kicks aside
One look at the thing and I can tell it's alive
Eyes burning burgundy when it turns to me
The look in its eyes tells me that it's my turn to flee

Lmao I'm pretty sure this makes no fucking sense.
Threyev is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-25-2009, 05:24 PM   #324
Everybody'z Favorite
 
Reddi Ree's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey
Posts: 1,000
Repped: 230
Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts
Neg Reps: 3
Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts
Reddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swaggerReddi Ree has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

Im Like
Aint I Reddi Ree, Aint I be da Board
Aint I Rockin somethin dat deez niggaz Cant Afford...Ayeeee

Im da Fireman, got em readin dat hot shit
Cant Get ya eyez open, got em smokin like da glock tip
Nigga Im Ill, On da Real...Im Not Sick
Get em mad like coachez do recievers when dey drop shit
Who Im on da Top Wit? no one but ma da dam self
I got Money on ma mind, all I do iz plan wealth
Gun on dis man belt, bottle in dis man hand
Head to da fuckin sky, you doin a hand stand
__________________
myspace.com/reeyaboy
Reddi Ree is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 04-26-2009, 02:42 AM   #325
----------DX-------------
 
DXavier23's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: NYC
Posts: 1,765
Repped: 192
Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post
DXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swaggerDXavier23 has untouchable platinum swagger
Default

People change, friendships fade into the nightfall
Despite all wrongs, I still think I made the right call
With the majority of choices I've made with my brain
Anybody I previously held with disdain, I forgave
But to cowardice I'm a slave, I behave
In a way, where my yesterdays are better than my todays
And my future gets dimmer, cause Im afraid of the light switch
How can I fight this? I might just, do nothing and type quick
Maybe my flow can dilute problems, that I can't solve myself
If I pick up the phone, and call for help
Than I'm admitting weakness, I speak with confidence at times
But other moments, my insecurities have dominance of my mind
I say she's still my bitch, but in reality i never had her
But I'll probably defer this problem, by saying it doesn't matter
That ain't the truth, who am I lying to man
It's like behind my back, is where I'm tying my hands
I'm still not really getting at what I am feeling
Lowering my potential, to the motherfucking ceiling
Present the reader, with personal dissatisfaction and confusion
Questioning everything, that's what happens when your losing
Being surpassed by almost everyone in every realm of life
I felt tonight, a feeling or a spell, wondering if this is what hell is like
I'll stop being obscure with my rhymes, and tell you what's going on
It goes way beyond, who I'm going with to prom
When multiple failures are combined, you feel that in your mind
That you might kneel to your demise
You hope that your fate is sealed with a surprise
That is the only thing that could possibly lift you
From the self-constructed abyss that you fell into
I wanta end this with a hopeful tone, but optimism is waning
Not enough action, just too much complaining
If it's raining, take out an umbrella or deal with it bitch
I love rap, its where I heal when I'm sick
Come back stronger, with more wisdom and strength
This a letter to myself, that was self-written and sent
Read it back at a later time, and think bout when I made this rhyme
I just can't hope that my problems will fade with time
I need to step up to the batter box, and take the pitch
Eventhough you might strikeout, you could also get a hit
Don't lay a bunt down, instead swing for the fences
Otherwise, when your old and wise, you'll feel the need for repentance
Let's look at the issue, which is actually upsetting me
I was lead on by this girl, who now is only a friend to me
I guess that was the end of thee, relationship
I take the hit, but still don't have the urge to scream out, I hate this bitch
If my fate is this, meaning not living up to my self-made potential
Complacent in real life, but when I take out my pencil
And put it to the page, my plans become grandiose
But when I step back in to reality, I forget what I wrote
In this gauntlet, I try to focus on positive by
Summoning hope, but when I see the ominous sky
The promises, I, once made, fade into the dark clouds
Silver lining disappears, dogs personify fears, which bark loud
Do I need a storm if, warnings are ineffective to me
Am I completely blind, or do I instead, select what I see
So therefore I can be in state of mind that I choose
Its like I control or dictate whether I win or lose
And tonight I lost, simply by coming to the realization
That I broke my promise that I wouldn't feel complacent
I thought she was my girl, how stupid am I
Before I help people with their problems, I must find a solution to mine
Confused in my mind, but I know I will see things clearly
If I dont adhere to the power of the coward within me
__________________
So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army
Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

Last edited by DXavier23; 04-26-2009 at 02:47 AM.
DXavier23 is offline   Reply With Quote
The Following User Repped to DXavier23 For This Useful Post:
Threyev (04-26-2009)
Reply

Lower Navigation
Go Back   Hip Hop Board > Rhymes > Freestyles

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:34 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0