DrUnK-N-MuNkY

microphone checker,soul connector,earth protector
it's my pleasure,to spit weather,to knock off feathers
bird ass niggas you a rookie me a professor
i'm bout that action you just talk, lil bill collector
but i spit messages to bring the cheddar in
this shit aint hot, aight let me bring the beretta in
and a stick of that haze cause that be my medicine
no phony i'm O.G. a down souf veteran
and we get money but ya trap aint working
cant hang me brah ya trap aint working
i'm the matrix, so blaow 20 shots to ya anus
for selling out and making disrespectful statements
ya brainless,
but for thinking that way it makes ya a bit courageous
if ya not a real nigga we don't speak the same language
my eyes quite chunky look like i'm part asian
goon squad aroma yea we all can smell my fragrance
thats why i backlash and make a track fast
split a grape dutch fill it up and bake some fat grass
bring some gin n juice take the weed mix with that hash
we can keep getting high i got some more from the last stash


whao.............

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Reddi Ree

Good shit.....7-8/10

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Komplex

microphone checker,soul connector,earth protector
it's my pleasure,to spit weather,to knock off feathers
bird ass niggas you a rookie me a professor
i'm bout that action you just talk, lil bill collector
but i spit messages to bring the cheddar in
this shit aint hot, aight let me bring the beretta in
and a stick of that haze cause that be my medicine
no phony i'm O.G. a down souf veteran

^this part of the freestyle was dope. you were killin it with the delivery and word choice. towards the second half of the freestyle, the content got weaker and the rhymes got less complex. you was killin it at the beginnin, shit was dope....then it seems like you relaxed. definitely important for the freestyle to get better as you go along and to finish strongly.

solid drop though.

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Tha Truth

this shit was good 8/10

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