im almost certain of ya doom,wut comes wit curses is ya tomb
to fly for dis planet so dey define me as da searpent of da moon
i ace verses wit a boom,many ask whos god n face the mystery
got many defeats wit no Ls,im eatin so well i can taste da victory
im making history in a place of misery,i got a flow that keeps hot
its lik u tossin low priced liquor the way yall throwin cheap shots
flashing power doesnt prove strength it jus shows ya weak spots
i no foes who cheap talk,winnings a option and u no defeats not
flow wit heat drops,wrote a life story n evry page is so wreckless
on da right path n i keep choosing directions lik a maze wit no exit
got a mvp flow,my audience doesnt love me but dey envy me tho
cuz i got so much 'sweet sixteens' youd think i was da mtv show
defeat enemy foes,and im demolishing evry verse da flows blazing
n in combat with me,u got no 'chance' lik a church wit no praying
yall living legacys of cowards,while i possess weaponry of power
u pretend ya dope,but ill end ya hope n leav ya destiny devoured

Originally Posted by J~Souljah im almost certain of ya doom,wut comes wit curses is ya tomb multie seemed a bit forced but good opener to fly for dis planet so dey define me as da searpent of da moon u kant spell but good line...really unexpekted "fly" metaphor (in a good way) i ace verses wit a boom,many ask whos god n face the mystery decent line got many defeats wit no Ls,im eatin so well i can taste da victory good little play on words...but it's a bit average im making history in a place of misery,i got a flow that keeps hot the choice of the rhyming words is a bit kliche... its lik u tossin low priced liquor the way yall throwin cheap shots a played koncept...has a little twist on it but not enough to make it hot flashing power doesnt prove strength it jus shows ya weak spots simple multie....true line though i no foes who cheap talk,winnings a option and u no defeats not cheap talk/defeats not...that multie is too forced...the rest of the line is kinda strange...usually if losing is not an option...then winning is the only alternative...so it's not really an option...it's the only path u kant take flow wit heat drops,wrote a life story n evry page is so wreckless multie was decent....good line on da right path n i keep choosing directions lik a maze wit no exit this line is very weak...a little too self explanatory to try to make it into a metaphor got a mvp flow,my audience doesnt love me but dey envy me tho good multie but it's over~used...good transition into the next line cuz i got so much 'sweet sixteens' youd think i was da mtv show lol funny...but i've heard it before...lol good shit tho defeat enemy foes,and im demolishing evry verse da flows blazing "enemy foes"....nah that doesnt work....the rest of the line is decent n in combat with me,u got no 'chance' lik a church wit no praying what???????????? flow was off yall living legacys of cowards,while i possess weaponry of power ummm...try to use words more effektively..."weaponry of power" u pretend ya dope,but ill end ya hope n leav ya destiny devoured u kant really devour your destiny...kause your destiny will always be there....if u devour his destiny...then....i dont even wanna get into that...its on a different level This Was A Decent Drop...Alot Better Than Your Last...U Need Alot Of Work...Too Many Things Seem Forced

Originally Posted by BLOCKRUNNAZ if u got time to do all that u must hav no life