05/28/08 - The Greatest?

ThA ViiRu5 · 05-28-2008, 08:43 PM

Now he aint the best, but Weezy is crack, i'll make ya toss ya cookies..how bullimic is that?//
I'm the greatest, aint believin in that? my words a guillotine of attack-

I go Reddi Ree on the track...

with no means to get back..my rhymes too komplex, this baller's the sickness..//
I got this (w)rap shit on lock bitch..call me Egyptian..//
Stalin is livin..through the words on your screen, spit the verbs for the fiends//
just observin the scene, call it absurd and obscene, but i went one step longer and i furthered the dream//
nurtured the steam, and made niggas wish they was never born with immaculate grace//
my life's a fetish porn..the way niggas keep gettin cracks to the face..//
the last one to race...maybe i'm too open, or maybe im just too potent//
hopin the roaches & the focusless tokens know this isnt American Idol..

Bitch when you lose, you don't win..

Baller · 05-28-2008, 08:50 PM

was pretty decent....just the wrap line was a no no....good looks on da shoutout....liked da flow n multies....had some nice wordplay too

ThA ViiRu5 · 05-28-2008, 08:57 PM

haha just thought i'd drop something by.

don't take this shit seriously.

thanks for feeding anyway playa, whats good

Tha Truth · 05-28-2008, 10:16 PM

this was good 8/10
u should get active a lil more
leave me some feed back

Projec F2D · 05-29-2008, 12:26 AM

Welcome Back

Dope Drop Only Negative Feed I Would Comment On Air The Stretched Lines
But I've Learned To Love That About Your Style

Now he aint the best, but Weezy is crack, i'll make ya toss ya cookies..how bullimic is that?//
I'm the greatest, aint believin in that? my words a guillotine of attack

Nice bar right there

J~Souljah · 05-29-2008, 05:09 PM

ummm stretched bars...sum of ya shit is worded wrong.....or is just irrelevant...seemed u just had shit in there to ryhme...i'd give this a 5-6/10...keep workin though

ThA ViiRu5 · 05-29-2008, 06:58 PM

..i did say i was just fuckin around..i got a collab comin up with (im not gonna say who) and i'll guaruntee that yall will appreciate it.

thanks for showin interest in my thread.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 05-29-2008, 07:02 PM

Weezy Is Crack...???...All Reespect Is Lost For You.

Komplex · 05-29-2008, 07:26 PM

I'm the greatest, aint believin in that? my words a guillotine of attack

Stalin is livin..through the words on your screen, spit the verbs for the fiends//
just observin the scene, call it absurd and obscene, but i went one step longer and i furthered the dream//

not your best but still some dope lines in there. know you just gettin back warmed up and everything. appreciate the shoutout too my nig. F U.

ThA ViiRu5 · 05-29-2008, 09:19 PM

hahaha PB....weezy's game right now is crack..u gotta admit he gets his hustle on. but naw i aint fuckin with that best rapper alive bullshit.

Saigon, Lupe, Immortal Technique, Army of the Pharoahs..F.U.

s'where it's @

05-28-2008, 08:43 PM	#1
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	05/28/08 - The Greatest? 05/28/08 - The Greatest? Now he aint the best, but Weezy is crack, i'll make ya toss ya cookies..how bullimic is that?// I'm the greatest, aint believin in that? my words a guillotine of attack- I go Reddi Ree on the track... with no means to get back..my rhymes too komplex, this baller's the sickness..// I got this (w)rap shit on lock bitch..call me Egyptian..// Stalin is livin..through the words on your screen, spit the verbs for the fiends// just observin the scene, call it absurd and obscene, but i went one step longer and i furthered the dream// nurtured the steam, and made niggas wish they was never born with immaculate grace// my life's a fetish porn..the way niggas keep gettin cracks to the face..// the last one to race...maybe i'm too open, or maybe im just too potent// hopin the roaches & the focusless tokens know this isnt American Idol.. Bitch when you lose, you don't win.. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

05-28-2008, 08:50 PM	#2
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 243 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	was pretty decent....just the wrap line was a no no....good looks on da shoutout....liked da flow n multies....had some nice wordplay too __________________

05-28-2008, 08:57 PM	#3
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	haha just thought i'd drop something by. don't take this shit seriously. thanks for feeding anyway playa, whats good __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

05-28-2008, 10:16 PM	#4
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	this was good 8/10 u should get active a lil more leave me some feed back __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

05-29-2008, 12:26 AM	#5
Projec F2D TheTributeToUs.Blogspot.C Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: TheTributeToUs.Blogspot.Com my blog Posts: 674 Repped: 53 Repped 217 Times in 79 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Welcome Back Dope Drop Only Negative Feed I Would Comment On Air The Stretched Lines But I've Learned To Love That About Your Style Now he aint the best, but Weezy is crack, i'll make ya toss ya cookies..how bullimic is that?// I'm the greatest, aint believin in that? my words a guillotine of attack Nice bar right there __________________ The Team Is GT Only Niggas I'm Cool Wit On My XI Bred Jordan, Ya Know Original Bull Shit- ++BoRn++

05-29-2008, 05:09 PM	#6
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	ummm stretched bars...sum of ya shit is worded wrong.....or is just irrelevant...seemed u just had shit in there to ryhme...i'd give this a 5-6/10...keep workin though

05-29-2008, 06:58 PM	#7
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	..i did say i was just fuckin around..i got a collab comin up with (im not gonna say who) and i'll guaruntee that yall will appreciate it. thanks for showin interest in my thread. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

05-29-2008, 07:02 PM	#8
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Weezy Is Crack...???...All Reespect Is Lost For You. __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

05-29-2008, 07:26 PM	#9
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	I'm the greatest, aint believin in that? my words a guillotine of attack Stalin is livin..through the words on your screen, spit the verbs for the fiends// just observin the scene, call it absurd and obscene, but i went one step longer and i furthered the dream// not your best but still some dope lines in there. know you just gettin back warmed up and everything. appreciate the shoutout too my nig. F U. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

05-29-2008, 09:19 PM	#10
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	hahaha PB....weezy's game right now is crack..u gotta admit he gets his hustle on. but naw i aint fuckin with that best rapper alive bullshit. Saigon, Lupe, Immortal Technique, Army of the Pharoahs..F.U. s'where it's @ __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

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