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05/28/08 - The Proffesionals (KOMPLEX AND CHAOS COLLAB)
Whos the greatest?.......
Komplex: They can't comprehend the sciences behind this Think these rhymes is, products of osmosis, so mindless It's the deadly skilled rhymer who recklessly kills minors Doesn't matter if you flee, guarantee, I will find ya You draw....bad attention cause ya flow is too sketchy It's me schoolin these cats, how the fuck could you test me? This lyrical shit is natural, I make it look too easy Yet still, it ain't a novel idea to try and read me Yall can't test the don, I'm on a different echelon Most of this section's verses put me to sleep like methadone Don't work for UPS but know the route of my delivery from my rhymebook straight to your thoughts, got niggas fearin me Any plans of surpassin this man? better forget it Lyrics full of dark humor, trust that I'm sick wit it/witted Somethin to similar Kobe, all I do is shoot and steal Yall busy with warning shots, while I always shoot to kill Chaos: Plex and Chaos? That’s a team…yall the best? In your dreams I’ll put ya DNA on ya pants just to fuck up your Jeans/Genes Listen child, the flows vile, so imma spit this and smile Coz you could rhyme in a safari and ur style still wouldn’t be wild I spit the cruellest bars, destroying careers no matter who you are You aint gotta have a telescope to see that im a superstar Pride is where the males dwell, but look how the frail fell Haters cant escape my hot bars like an African jail cell Science cant explain my sickness, my condition is the first of its kind When I burst into rhyme, my lyrics straight disperse in your mind Staying submerged their for time until they inadvertently fry My verse is certainly tight, that’s why I stay murking these guys Burning their eyes with fiery flows that cant be touched kid Im not celibate but homie I just cant be fucked with Lyrically I’m a poet, spitting sweet symphonic sonnets That explodes like comets All you rappers are ironic….coz how can u claim the throne… …When I’m still sittin on it! |
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05-28-2008, 10:14 PM
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this was a good collabo
plex ya verse was ill 9/10 They can't comprehend the sciences behind this Think these rhymes is, products of osmosis, so mindless It's the deadly skilled rhymer who recklessly kills minors Doesn't matter if you flee, guarantee, I will find ya You draw....bad attention cause ya flow is too sketchy It's me schoolin these cats, how the fuck could you test me? fav pt freedom ya verse was good too 8.5/10 Plex and Chaos? That’s a team…yall the best? In your dreams I’ll put ya DNA on ya pants just to fuck up your Jeans/Genes fav pt overall 9/10 good drop leave me some feed
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05-29-2008, 12:22 AM
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Komplex-Good Rhyme Scheme, Wordplay, Vocab, Very Interesting Overall
It's the deadly skilled rhymer who recklessly kills minors Doesn't matter if you flee, guarantee, I will find ya You draw....bad attention cause ya flow is too sketchy It's me schoolin these cats, how the fuck could you test me? This lyrical shit is natural, I make it look too easy Yet still, it ain't a novel idea to try and read me Yall can't test the don, I'm on a different echelon Most of this section's verses put me to sleep like methadone-Fav Parts Fre3dom-Pretty Good Wordplay & Punches, Nice Flow, Vocab, This Too Was Interesting Plex and Chaos? That’s a team…yall the best? In your dreams I’ll put ya DNA on ya pants just to fuck up your Jeans/Genes Listen child, the flows vile, so imma spit this and smile Coz you could rhyme in a safari and ur style still wouldn’t be wild I spit the cruellest bars, destroying careers no matter who you are You aint gotta have a telescope to see that im a superstar-Fav Parts Overall VERY VERY Enjoyable Drop Stay Up Like Viagra
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05-29-2008, 07:12 PM
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iLL Collabo.
Plex-9/10. . Chaos-7.5/10-Some Forced Multies. .
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05-29-2008, 07:33 PM
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Whos the greatest?.......
Komplex: They can't comprehend the sciences behind this Think these rhymes is, products of osmosis, so mindless It's the deadly skilled rhymer who recklessly kills minors Doesn't matter if you flee, guarantee, I will find ya You draw....bad attention cause ya flow is too sketchy It's me schoolin these cats, how the fuck could you test me? This lyrical shit is natural, I make it look too easy Yet still, it ain't a novel idea to try and read me Yall can't test the don, I'm on a different echelon Most of this section's verses put me to sleep like methadone Don't work for UPS but know the route of my delivery from my rhymebook straight to your thoughts, got niggas fearin me Any plans of surpassin this man? better forget it Lyrics full of dark humor, trust that I'm sick wit it/witted Somethin to similar Kobe, all I do is shoot and steal Yall busy with warning shots, while I always shoot to kill just highlightin some of the double-entendres for people who might've missed em. good lookin out on the feedback so far.
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05-29-2008, 07:40 PM
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komplex was pretty good....improved ya multiesfrom da last time i seen ya...flowed well...had decent lines in der....u got better from da last drop i peeped
thugsy....hmmm u forceya multies couple times...flowed good i guess...sum played lines in der...u was iight tho...
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05-29-2008, 10:55 PM
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up........
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05-29-2008, 11:39 PM
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propz uppin....and my multies arent forced...its coz of my british accent...so it rhymes perfectly for me but prob not for u yanks lol
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05-31-2008, 03:27 PM
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feed this shit
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05-31-2008, 10:48 PM
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uppin uppinnnnnnnnnn
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06-01-2008, 04:24 PM
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plex good shit.........i'm waiting on a plex audio
.......nice vocab...ooohhhh...i see some1's using multi's now....thugsy.....i know you gone say this is hate BUT! 1) your multi's are STILL forced 2) every single punch is play'd.....you just reworded them different.....if your gonna do a punchline track.....don't use shit you know has been used since the 1980's |
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06-01-2008, 07:24 PM
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Komplex:
They can't comprehend the sciences behind this good opener Think these rhymes is, products of osmosis, so mindless another good line...good flow so far It's the deadly skilled rhymer who recklessly kills minors sick line....great internal multies Doesn't matter if you flee, guarantee, I will find ya good internal rhymes...well timed....good multie You draw....bad attention cause ya flow is too sketchy great double E right there....lol the attention part kompliments the E well It's me schoolin these cats, how the fuck could you test me? simple yet effektive wordplay This lyrical shit is natural, I make it look too easy good transition into the next line Yet still, it ain't a novel idea to try and read me omg i tried to predikt this as i read it and i was wrong..u had a more "sicker" use of the wordplay....nice double E...(novel idea) lol...sick Yall can't test the don, I'm on a different echelon nice line...most niggas dont know what that mean so i'll define it...komp means he's basikally on a different plane in a sense of rank/authority Most of this section's verses put me to sleep like methadone lmao so true Don't work for UPS but know the route of my delivery original use of wordplay from my rhymebook straight to your thoughts, got niggas fearin me flow was a bit off... Any plans of surpassin this man? better forget it good transition into the next line Lyrics full of dark humor, trust that I'm sick wit it/witted lmao nice shit Somethin to similar Kobe, all I do is shoot and steal a bit simple but decent nontheless Yall busy with warning shots, while I always shoot to kill nice kontinuation of the double E Chaos: Plex and Chaos? That’s a team…yall the best? In your dreams Decent Opener I Guess I’ll put ya DNA on ya pants just to fuck up your Jeans/Genes ....umm u kinda failed @ that one....it koulda been exkuted better...it's givin off the vibe that sumbody nuttin on demselves....sum dumb shit likt dat Listen child, the flows vile, so imma spit this and smile this is ok...a good multie there...u didnt elaborate on the "the flows vile"...u supposed explain why it's vile...u know Coz you could rhyme in a safari and ur style still wouldn’t be wild well...safari's are partly man made and are tourist attraktions...or organized game hunting.....so it's not really "wild"...but the line wasnt that well exekuted in the 1st place I spit the cruellest bars, destroying careers no matter who you are u kant spell but this line was a bit stretched....wasnt that bad tho...decent You aint gotta have a telescope to see that im a superstar wow this was some kiddie teen bop type wordplay.....dont even say that again Pride is where the males dwell, but look how the frail fell koulda worded that better...like "pride is where the minds of males dwell"...pretty good tho....simple multies Haters cant escape my hot bars like an African jail cell that word association is played "cell...bars" and u didnt use it in an original way Science cant explain my sickness, my condition is the first of its kind good line...kinda kliche When I burst into rhyme, my lyrics straight disperse in your mind good multies but it seems the word choice was too heavily influenced by making the multie rhyme well Staying submerged their for time until they inadvertently fry well it wouldnt be inadvertent since it's a direkt result of your "rhymes dispersing in their mind"......multie was off My verse is certainly tight, that’s why I stay murking these guys forced multies...bad line Burning their eyes with fiery flows that cant be touched kid decent line Im not celibate but homie I just cant be fucked with u kant be fucked with what?...a broom?....a smooth instrument?.....please word ya shit better...it sounds kinda homo...o yea n celibates do fuck i believe...when they get married...and i know u've said you're "married to the game" b4 so it's a tad bit kontradiktory Lyrically I’m a poet, spitting sweet symphonic sonnets ......but this is text..... That explodes like comets komets dont explode...or they arent normally known to All you rappers are ironic….coz how can u claim the throne… .......dont see the irony …When I’m still sittin on it! still dont see the irony At The End Of The Day...You Two Were Like Opposite Ends Of The Rhyming Spektrum...Khaos Was The Rookie End And Komp Was The Latter...Work On It |
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06-01-2008, 07:52 PM
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yo shit is gettin better ay time komplex....not sayin ya other shit is dope but yu just gettin better it seems....good vocab n multies....ya wordplay is decent...liked da warning shots line fo some reason lol.....
freedom or thugsy...i believe ya multies aint forced...but ya puns lacked....and that all ya verse was full off....
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06-02-2008, 05:53 PM
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honestly komp,
this is one of the better free's i've seen you spit. wordplay, punches, flow, and damn...even some multies thrown in there (i always told your dumbass to fuck around with multies lol). good shit son...you're improving as you go along.
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06-02-2008, 10:11 PM
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Lotus, Baller, J....much appreciation on the feedback.
Jugg, sup my nigga? lol, that's good lookin out.
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06-03-2008, 03:00 AM
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Up............
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06-03-2008, 07:45 PM
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06-03-2008, 09:01 PM
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track waz good..
ima get into detail later... both lyrics waz good... everydrop i see with u komplex u the mailman of the board cuz u diliver... i see why everyone says u number 1... check out broken silence the ug'z collabo..///
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06-05-2008, 03:35 PM
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no doubt. really appreciate that young.
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06-05-2008, 05:55 PM
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lol @ some people ignoring y verse or sayin some hatin shit its all good...im glad i get a reaction out of yall....anyway me and plex>>>> any1 on this board
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ppl just givin u honest feed and their opinon on it
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06-05-2008, 06:18 PM
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not if they outright ignore it...or say stupid shit like forced multies...when they not..its my english accent.....and when some1 said my whole verse was punches when only like 4 lines were...smh lol....its all good...i dont mind
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06-05-2008, 08:06 PM
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propz truth and that comment about the feed wasnt aimed at u jus so u know
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