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It Seems The World Is Full Of Lies..Lullabies Of A Shooken Sky/
Viewin' The Plane That Harbors These Rooks And I/ All The Tooken Lives...That's Why I Spit It 1 Line At A Time/ Ghosts Form Lines At My Lines As I Deskribe Their Lives/ So This Mind Of Mind.....Gets A Glimpse Of Hope/ So I Put My Life On The Line With A Different Rope/ Different Strokes...Orphans Despise The Womb That Bore Them/ So I Distance My Soul From My Heart...Emotions Seem Foreign/ So I Ignore Em...Just The Tip Of The Iceberg/ Gotta Perfekt My Skill With The Passion Of Christ Words/ And No Im Not A Christian...My Mindstate Is Different/ Prayin 2 God..Im Jaded...The Krime Rate Is Liftin/ And With That Said...Im Sure I Wont Reach Him/ I'll Keep It Kozy In Hell..Hell's Flames Kan't Breach Him/ They May Breach Skin...Memory's Kold/ When I'm Deceased Then..I Will Reach Foes/ Approach Them With No Fear..No Air/ In My Lungs To Breathe...Just Ashes Of Deceased/ Still....While Im In The Physikal...I Visit Fools/ With Murderous Intentions..Sendin' Them To The Spiritual/ Forgive Me...Souljah Doesnt Know His Worth/ I Been Dead Since Birth...Let Me Live 1st/ |
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
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All The Tooken Lives...That's Why I Spit It 1 Line At A Time/
Ghosts Form Lines At My Lines As I Deskribe Their Lives/ So This Mind Of Mind.....Gets A Glimpse Of Hope/ So I Put My Life On The Line With A Different Rope/ ^This was creative..the way you incorporated 3 different meanings of "line". some were double Es too. good shit. the content of the piece overall was pretty vivid. you had a nice mix of flow, substance, and vocabulary. not too heavy on similies which makes it even better. good drop homie.
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Baltimore, Maryland
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thankz komp
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Join Date: Aug 2006
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yo this ill my nigga and i sent that verse if u still tryin to collabo
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Baltimore, Maryland
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red...lol if u aint noticed...i usually drop a few dropz @ once then take a break...(i only write when i get inspiration...plus my verse got deleted) but i got u..it'll drop soon!
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Wordsmith
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this was ill...8.5/10...deep content/multi's/flowed well...keep it up...stay up...Peace
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Location: Baltimore, Maryland
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thankz h20mie....apprec/iate it
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Location: Baltimore, Maryland
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uppin from the grave
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