05/28/08 - Sinister Returnin'

Lil Brizzle · 05-28-2008, 06:42 AM

The shadow in the ghetto, been around for 40 nights
Like a timebomb, gotta run before he strikes
Heart full of fear, stressed like the sweat's been showing flames
Experiencing a gradual terror, the fella's getting growing pains
Once that trigger snapped, to get away was never early
No one ever hurried.....and his corpse hasn't visualized the cemetery
Changing the ground, this murderer's mission was rebelling turfs
Putting graves on land like this was hell on earth
No earthquakes....but agony got us thinking whetha this land was playing
Sinister's plan is hating, and the message is: "This man is Satan!"

So the minister's determent why the sinister's returnin'......

Lil Brizzle · 05-29-2008, 01:22 AM

uppin this....

Lil Brizzle · 06-01-2008, 04:57 AM

^^ up...............

Lil Brizzle · 06-08-2008, 02:31 AM

i shit on project F2D anyday.....

Lil Brizzle · 06-08-2008, 07:01 AM

uppin.....

young trey · 06-08-2008, 10:54 AM

wonder y u aint get no feed????????

Haterz · 06-08-2008, 04:43 PM

was aight....kinda, short though

Lyrics Jr. · 06-08-2008, 05:14 PM

jea itz ii

RodKnee · 06-08-2008, 05:56 PM

shits tighter than my mommas ass. Shit

Blizzy · 06-08-2008, 08:12 PM

finally a desent read lmao...so much wackness on this site but i'm not hatin...flow was spot on...multi's were cool...deep as hell and a lil wordplay...8.3/10...keep it up...Peace

Lil Brizzle · 06-09-2008, 01:14 AM

thanks for all the feed man......appreciate it......

Projec F2D · 06-09-2008, 01:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lil Brizzle

i shit on project F2D anyday.....

Yep thats why my shit

got more feed

You had like 3 or 4 people feed this but these are people no one knows

Lil Brizzle · 06-09-2008, 02:03 AM

^^ lets get to the point faggot......u come to my thread....u feed this.......

and....about the ppl no one knows.....

haterz = youngsparks

blizzy = a punchline machine

stay hating on though if u wanna.....hate gives me energy.....

GuTTaViLLe VeT · 06-09-2008, 04:17 AM

decent....shit was more like a poem...

Lil Brizzle · 06-09-2008, 04:23 AM

^^ propz.....uppin.....

Lil Brizzle · 06-10-2008, 11:10 PM

uppin..........

Lil Brizzle · 06-13-2008, 06:47 AM

uppin one more time....

RodKnee · 06-13-2008, 06:53 AM

you need to follow this shit up with something soon you one hit wonder focker. Shit.

RodKnee · 06-13-2008, 06:54 AM

no one actually give a shit about yo ass before you start shitting on me. Fat.

Lil Brizzle · 06-15-2008, 01:06 AM

i don need to shit on ur face when its already that ugly lmao

Antidote · 06-15-2008, 02:53 AM

dat was str8, ima be real evfen tho u beefin wit my fam, u needa work on ya wordplay and Multis

it looks like u just thought of two words that sounded ok together and rhymed them for ya multis and structured ur bars round em, so work on dat

ANTIDOTE BITCH AZZZ NIGGA REMMEBER MY NAME IM RAW

Lil Brizzle · 06-15-2008, 05:01 AM

^^ thanks for feed.....uppin

RodKnee · 06-15-2008, 08:59 AM

triple fat bullshit all up in my ass. Nig

Shogun · 06-15-2008, 12:19 PM

Stick to your simple, simple scheme until you're able to combine rhymes with making sense.

And while there's a few questionable parts, I can definitely conclude that you don't know what "determent" means.

Baller · 06-15-2008, 03:21 PM

shogun....please criticize my drop <3

05-28-2008, 06:42 AM	#1
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	05/28/08 - Sinister Returnin' 05/28/08 - Sinister Returnin' The shadow in the ghetto, been around for 40 nights Like a timebomb, gotta run before he strikes Heart full of fear, stressed like the sweat's been showing flames Experiencing a gradual terror, the fella's getting growing pains Once that trigger snapped, to get away was never early No one ever hurried.....and his corpse hasn't visualized the cemetery Changing the ground, this murderer's mission was rebelling turfs Putting graves on land like this was hell on earth No earthquakes....but agony got us thinking whetha this land was playing Sinister's plan is hating, and the message is: "This man is Satan!" So the minister's determent why the sinister's returnin'...... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

05-29-2008, 01:22 AM	#2
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	uppin this.... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

06-01-2008, 04:57 AM	#3
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	^^ up............... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

06-08-2008, 02:31 AM	#4
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	i shit on project F2D anyday..... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

06-08-2008, 07:01 AM	#5
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	uppin..... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

06-08-2008, 10:54 AM	#6
young trey Banned Join Date: May 2008 Location: MIAMI Posts: 517 Repped: 1 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	wonder y u aint get no feed????????

06-08-2008, 04:43 PM	#7
Haterz Join Date: May 2007 Location: NY/NC Posts: 729 Repped: 24 Repped 68 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 11 Times in 10 Posts	was aight....kinda, short though

06-08-2008, 05:14 PM	#8
Lyrics Jr. Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: NY Posts: 95 Repped: 0 Repped 3 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	jea itz ii

06-08-2008, 05:56 PM	#9
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,133 Repped: 710 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	shits tighter than my mommas ass. Shit

06-08-2008, 08:12 PM	#10
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	finally a desent read lmao...so much wackness on this site but i'm not hatin...flow was spot on...multi's were cool...deep as hell and a lil wordplay...8.3/10...keep it up...Peace

06-09-2008, 01:14 AM	#11
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	thanks for all the feed man......appreciate it...... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

06-09-2008, 02:03 AM	#13
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	^^ lets get to the point faggot......u come to my thread....u feed this....... and....about the ppl no one knows..... haterz = youngsparks blizzy = a punchline machine stay hating on though if u wanna.....hate gives me energy..... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

06-09-2008, 04:17 AM	#14
GuTTaViLLe VeT Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 56 Repped: 19 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	decent....shit was more like a poem...

06-09-2008, 04:23 AM	#15
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	^^ propz.....uppin..... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

06-10-2008, 11:10 PM	#16
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	uppin.......... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

06-13-2008, 06:47 AM	#17
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	uppin one more time.... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

06-13-2008, 06:53 AM	#18
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,133 Repped: 710 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	you need to follow this shit up with something soon you one hit wonder focker. Shit.

06-13-2008, 06:54 AM	#19
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,133 Repped: 710 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	no one actually give a shit about yo ass before you start shitting on me. Fat.

06-15-2008, 01:06 AM	#20
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	i don need to shit on ur face when its already that ugly lmao __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

06-15-2008, 02:53 AM	#21
Antidote Beck Unit Don Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,263 Repped: 104 Repped 100 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	dat was str8, ima be real evfen tho u beefin wit my fam, u needa work on ya wordplay and Multis it looks like u just thought of two words that sounded ok together and rhymed them for ya multis and structured ur bars round em, so work on dat ANTIDOTE BITCH AZZZ NIGGA REMMEBER MY NAME IM RAW

06-15-2008, 05:01 AM	#22
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	^^ thanks for feed.....uppin __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

06-15-2008, 08:59 AM	#23
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,133 Repped: 710 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	triple fat bullshit all up in my ass. Nig

06-15-2008, 12:19 PM	#24
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Stick to your simple, simple scheme until you're able to combine rhymes with making sense. And while there's a few questionable parts, I can definitely conclude that you don't know what "determent" means.

06-15-2008, 03:21 PM	#25
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,097 Repped: 111 Repped 254 Times in 149 Posts Neg Reps: 95 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	shogun....please criticize my drop <3 __________________

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