05/27/08 - Highs And Lows (Only For True Mc's To View)

J~Souljah · 05-27-2008, 10:21 PM

Aight This Is A Little Experiment...A Little Hieracrhy...Stages Of "Rap" I Seen...I Know U Gon Hate It...But Lets Take It To The Klub

I Rock In The Klub With 5...Bottles Of Bubbly/
I'm Bound To Make It Rain Kuz The...Modelz Iz Lovely/
She Say She Wanna Ride...But She Say She Got A Hubby/
U~Turn...Den I Left Her On The Runway/

Th~The Runwayyy...Left Her On The Runwayyyy/
Made A U~Turn Then I Left Her On The Runwayyyy/

That Kould Be The Hook Or Some Dumb Ass Shit...U See Where Im Goin?...Hold Tight
I Kall This State Of Evolution...The Punchline Rapper

Im The Best~Around..Put Metal~Down And I Pop~Da~9/
Leave Niggas With No Defense Like When Kockran~Died/
And U'll Never Be Better So Just Stop~It~Yo/
I'll Get These Niggas Bagged Up Like I Kopped~A~O/
Or Koppin~A~Half U Get The 4-5~Or~Da~Mag/
N I'll Prolly Pop~The Choppa Till It Chop~U~In~Half/
ANd U Said What?...Said U Gon Blast~Whom/
Im Leavin Tops Off...Turn Ya Block Into Kankoon/

See It Gets Better...U Know Where Im Goin Now....Klub..Punchlines...Now For The Braggin' Rapperz....U Know What I Meant...Watch Me

I'm J~Souljah...Speedin In A Whole Different Lane/
Yall Know Thats My Name With The Flow Im Insane/
I Got Bitches In The Hood That'll Bust Ya Ass/
Suuwoop 2 Da Bloodz...I Dont Tuck The Rag/
My Flow Is Like An Iceberg..Praised Like Christs Words/
U Gettin Smoked In This Race..Ur Just Like Herbs/
A Live Veteran...Im Komin Through Your Area/
Souljah So Fly He Kan Break The Sound Barrier/

The Ego Got 2 U Yet? Aha...Move Up A Level...Social Kommentary Aka Topikalz...Aha....Gettin Betta?

This Is The...
Tale Of A Girl...Had A Kouple Of Dudes/
The Embodyment Of A Ho..She Was Nuthin but Food/
She Got...Ate All She Wanted She Was Lovin The Mood/
Until This Guy Appeared With No Gun Or No Tools/
He...Wanted To Change Her, He Just Wanted To Move/
Out Of The Line Of Fire From The "Tuckin' Tekz" Foolz/
Their Love Surely Grew...She Was Lovin' This Dude/
N Soon A...Kouple Of Kicks From A Motherless Womb/
The Next Day She Got Tested..She Kaught Something From Dudes/
She Had Nothing To Choose...She Had Nothing To Lose/
She Pulled A...Gun On Herself, Right Into Her Womb/
Fearing Her Baby's Life Would Be Officially Doomed/
Husband Found Them In Bath Tub...Where Previous Back Rubs/
Were Held....His House Bekame Nothin But Bad Blood/
I Tear Dropped to Her Stomach...Right Through To The Baby's Skin/
From That Day Forth...He Vowed To Never Pray Again/

Das Life

That's It For Now...Next Installment Soon

young trey · 05-27-2008, 10:34 PM

nice drop j

Tha Truth · 05-27-2008, 11:31 PM

this was creative fam u in my top 10 good drop 9/10

youngking187 · 05-27-2008, 11:36 PM

creative shit right here...
seen shit from all areas
in ya rapping skills
with this drop...
punches,multies,flow,klub shit..etc...
overall 9.2/10....stay up...........

J~Souljah · 05-28-2008, 12:37 AM

Thanks 2 All 3

Komplex · 05-28-2008, 06:03 AM

Leave Niggas With No Defense Like When Kockran~Died/

She Had Nothing To Choose...She Had Nothing To Lose/
She Pulled A...Gun On Herself, Right Into Her Womb/
Fearing Her Baby's Life Would Be Officially Doomed/
Husband Found Them In Bath Tub...Where Previous Back Rubs/
Were Held....His House Bekame Nothin But Bad Blood/
I Tear Dropped to Her Stomach...Right Through To The Baby's Skin/
From That Day Forth...He Vowed To Never Pray Again/

the creativity on this joint was dope. it kinda reminds you of a song like Ignorant Shit or Lupe Fiasco-Switch where the MC drastically switches content throughout or takes on different personas. great shit J. Holla.

C Gilbert · 05-28-2008, 12:34 PM

Good Shit J...I Dont Feed Much On Text But This Caught My Eye

Havent Seen This Type Of Drop On The Board Really..
Good Concept
Flow Was There..Nice Use Of Multies..Punches Were Alright...

DXavier23 · 05-28-2008, 02:46 PM

it was a solid piece man. The rhymes flowed well and you showed a lot of creativity.

J~Souljah · 05-30-2008, 01:28 AM

nice thankz..uppin

J~Souljah · 05-31-2008, 07:13 PM

bumppppppppppp

Blizzy · 05-31-2008, 09:51 PM

9/10 for creativity alone man...ill as hell...multi's and the punchline part was my favourite...stay up...Peace

J~Souljah · 05-31-2008, 10:25 PM

once again....thankz h20mie

05-27-2008, 10:21 PM	#1
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	05/27/08 - Highs And Lows (Only For True Mc's To View) 05/27/08 - Highs And Lows (Only For True Mc's To View) Aight This Is A Little Experiment...A Little Hieracrhy...Stages Of "Rap" I Seen...I Know U Gon Hate It...But Lets Take It To The Klub I Rock In The Klub With 5...Bottles Of Bubbly/ I'm Bound To Make It Rain Kuz The...Modelz Iz Lovely/ She Say She Wanna Ride...But She Say She Got A Hubby/ U~Turn...Den I Left Her On The Runway/ Th~The Runwayyy...Left Her On The Runwayyyy/ Made A U~Turn Then I Left Her On The Runwayyyy/ That Kould Be The Hook Or Some Dumb Ass Shit...U See Where Im Goin?...Hold Tight I Kall This State Of Evolution...The Punchline Rapper Im The Best~Around..Put Metal~Down And I Pop~Da~9/ Leave Niggas With No Defense Like When Kockran~Died/ And U'll Never Be Better So Just Stop~It~Yo/ I'll Get These Niggas Bagged Up Like I Kopped~A~O/ Or Koppin~A~Half U Get The 4-5~Or~Da~Mag/ N I'll Prolly Pop~The Choppa Till It Chop~U~In~Half/ ANd U Said What?...Said U Gon Blast~Whom/ Im Leavin Tops Off...Turn Ya Block Into Kankoon/ See It Gets Better...U Know Where Im Goin Now....Klub..Punchlines...Now For The Braggin' Rapperz....U Know What I Meant...Watch Me I'm J~Souljah...Speedin In A Whole Different Lane/ Yall Know Thats My Name With The Flow Im Insane/ I Got Bitches In The Hood That'll Bust Ya Ass/ Suuwoop 2 Da Bloodz...I Dont Tuck The Rag/ My Flow Is Like An Iceberg..Praised Like Christs Words/ U Gettin Smoked In This Race..Ur Just Like Herbs/ A Live Veteran...Im Komin Through Your Area/ Souljah So Fly He Kan Break The Sound Barrier/ The Ego Got 2 U Yet? Aha...Move Up A Level...Social Kommentary Aka Topikalz...Aha....Gettin Betta? This Is The... Tale Of A Girl...Had A Kouple Of Dudes/ The Embodyment Of A Ho..She Was Nuthin but Food/ She Got...Ate All She Wanted She Was Lovin The Mood/ Until This Guy Appeared With No Gun Or No Tools/ He...Wanted To Change Her, He Just Wanted To Move/ Out Of The Line Of Fire From The "Tuckin' Tekz" Foolz/ Their Love Surely Grew...She Was Lovin' This Dude/ N Soon A...Kouple Of Kicks From A Motherless Womb/ The Next Day She Got Tested..She Kaught Something From Dudes/ She Had Nothing To Choose...She Had Nothing To Lose/ She Pulled A...Gun On Herself, Right Into Her Womb/ Fearing Her Baby's Life Would Be Officially Doomed/ Husband Found Them In Bath Tub...Where Previous Back Rubs/ Were Held....His House Bekame Nothin But Bad Blood/ I Tear Dropped to Her Stomach...Right Through To The Baby's Skin/ From That Day Forth...He Vowed To Never Pray Again/ Das Life That's It For Now...Next Installment Soon

05-27-2008, 11:31 PM	#3
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	this was creative fam u in my top 10 good drop 9/10 __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

05-27-2008, 11:36 PM	#4
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	creative shit right here... seen shit from all areas in ya rapping skills with this drop... punches,multies,flow,klub shit..etc... overall 9.2/10....stay up........... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

05-28-2008, 06:03 AM	#6
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Leave Niggas With No Defense Like When Kockran~Died/ She Had Nothing To Choose...She Had Nothing To Lose/ She Pulled A...Gun On Herself, Right Into Her Womb/ Fearing Her Baby's Life Would Be Officially Doomed/ Husband Found Them In Bath Tub...Where Previous Back Rubs/ Were Held....His House Bekame Nothin But Bad Blood/ I Tear Dropped to Her Stomach...Right Through To The Baby's Skin/ From That Day Forth...He Vowed To Never Pray Again/ the creativity on this joint was dope. it kinda reminds you of a song like Ignorant Shit or Lupe Fiasco-Switch where the MC drastically switches content throughout or takes on different personas. great shit J. Holla. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

05-28-2008, 12:34 PM	#7
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Good Shit J...I Dont Feed Much On Text But This Caught My Eye Havent Seen This Type Of Drop On The Board Really.. Good Concept Flow Was There..Nice Use Of Multies..Punches Were Alright... __________________

05-27-2008, 10:34 PM	#2
young trey Banned Join Date: May 2008 Location: MIAMI Posts: 517 Repped: 1 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice drop j

05-28-2008, 12:37 AM	#5
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	Thanks 2 All 3

05-28-2008, 02:46 PM	#8
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	it was a solid piece man. The rhymes flowed well and you showed a lot of creativity. __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

05-30-2008, 01:28 AM	#9
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	nice thankz..uppin

05-31-2008, 07:13 PM	#10
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	bumppppppppppp

05-31-2008, 09:51 PM	#11
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	9/10 for creativity alone man...ill as hell...multi's and the punchline part was my favourite...stay up...Peace

05-31-2008, 10:25 PM	#12
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	once again....thankz h20mie

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