05/25/08 - First time free - About My Job (feedback welcome)

adams4england · 05-25-2008, 11:24 PM

Now everyday i work in a job selling people shoes//
getting custormers telling there size and what style they choose//

im sick to death of getting spoke to like a piece of shit//
one day ima say fuck it and just throw a fit!//

i get people coming up to me trying to act hard//
i cant do anything back to these fucking retards//

they sit there and give me abuse cos we havent got the shoes//
thinking im lying so i tell them get out my face otherwise there lose//

but they still try and act hard but they will when there with there mates//
on there own there useless just shattered plates//

anyway i just try to forget them and carry on with my job//
but then i see a blue shirt and thats my manager, what a nob//

walks around doing nothing all day just telling us what to do//
bloke is a yes man really he aint got a clue//

anyway guess what im saying is i need a change of career//
ive tried so many times i wish one would appear//

thanks for taking the time to read, would love to know what you guys think cheers

Haterz · 05-25-2008, 11:42 PM

wow...first time i read sumthing like dat (besides tha fake ass drug dealer stories)...but everything just seemed basic, nothing really stood out

u need to step ya employment game up, lol

Projec F2D · 05-26-2008, 12:42 AM

Lol I can relate since i used to work for Finishline

As far as the drop it was basic but still better than some other rookies

I see alot of potential just study some of the Vets/Good Text Dudes

Such as Komplex, Pistol Banger,J Prov, JR One, Hyphy, Menace, Baller Etc.....

Edit: Whatever You Do Dont Bite Other Peoples Shit Thats A NO NO

adams4england · 05-26-2008, 06:27 AM

thanks guys. na dont worry im not a biter lol i defo will take a look at the vets rhymes

RodKnee · 05-26-2008, 07:58 AM

is this meant to me a diss aimed at me? I've done fuck all to you home boy. S'orn now

adams4england · 05-26-2008, 11:37 AM

i dunno how you think ive dissed you but nothing aint on cos i aint said shit to diss you lol

dunson23 · 07-16-2008, 11:26 AM

lol but nice drop............

Billie Ganz · 07-16-2008, 12:14 PM

this is definitely a rage piece...but the problem about it is that its not really a serious issue...so it kinda sounds a little more whiny than as powerful as you wanted it to come across...everybody hates their job and you didnt fuel us into making me think you had it any worse or could express it better than anyone else does...think about that...6.5/10

05-25-2008, 11:24 PM	#1
adams4england Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Southampton, England Posts: 136 Repped: 8 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	05/25/08 - First time free - About My Job (feedback welcome) 05/25/08 - First time free - About My Job (feedback welcome) Now everyday i work in a job selling people shoes// getting custormers telling there size and what style they choose// im sick to death of getting spoke to like a piece of shit// one day ima say fuck it and just throw a fit!// i get people coming up to me trying to act hard// i cant do anything back to these fucking retards// they sit there and give me abuse cos we havent got the shoes// thinking im lying so i tell them get out my face otherwise there lose// but they still try and act hard but they will when there with there mates// on there own there useless just shattered plates// anyway i just try to forget them and carry on with my job// but then i see a blue shirt and thats my manager, what a nob// walks around doing nothing all day just telling us what to do// bloke is a yes man really he aint got a clue// anyway guess what im saying is i need a change of career// ive tried so many times i wish one would appear// thanks for taking the time to read, would love to know what you guys think cheers __________________

05-26-2008, 12:42 AM	#3
Projec F2D TheTributeToUs.Blogspot.C Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: TheTributeToUs.Blogspot.Com my blog Posts: 674 Repped: 53 Repped 217 Times in 79 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Lol I can relate since i used to work for Finishline As far as the drop it was basic but still better than some other rookies I see alot of potential just study some of the Vets/Good Text Dudes Such as Komplex, Pistol Banger,J Prov, JR One, Hyphy, Menace, Baller Etc..... Edit: Whatever You Do Dont Bite Other Peoples Shit Thats A NO NO __________________ The Team Is GT Only Niggas I'm Cool Wit On My XI Bred Jordan, Ya Know Original Bull Shit- ++BoRn++

05-26-2008, 06:27 AM	#4
adams4england Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Southampton, England Posts: 136 Repped: 8 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks guys. na dont worry im not a biter lol i defo will take a look at the vets rhymes __________________

05-26-2008, 11:37 AM	#6
adams4england Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Southampton, England Posts: 136 Repped: 8 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i dunno how you think ive dissed you but nothing aint on cos i aint said shit to diss you lol __________________

07-16-2008, 12:14 PM	#8
Billie Ganz Aka Johnny The Baptist Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Chocolate City Posts: 18 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this is definitely a rage piece...but the problem about it is that its not really a serious issue...so it kinda sounds a little more whiny than as powerful as you wanted it to come across...everybody hates their job and you didnt fuel us into making me think you had it any worse or could express it better than anyone else does...think about that...6.5/10 __________________ "Becoming Your Favorite Rapper, One Rhyme At A Time"

05-25-2008, 11:42 PM	#2
Haterz Join Date: May 2007 Location: NY/NC Posts: 729 Repped: 24 Repped 68 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 11 Times in 10 Posts	wow...first time i read sumthing like dat (besides tha fake ass drug dealer stories)...but everything just seemed basic, nothing really stood out u need to step ya employment game up, lol

05-26-2008, 07:58 AM	#5
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,133 Repped: 710 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	is this meant to me a diss aimed at me? I've done fuck all to you home boy. S'orn now

07-16-2008, 11:26 AM	#7
dunson23 Hip-Hop We Won't Stop Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Hip-Hop Posts: 3,200 Repped: 741 Repped 1,144 Times in 168 Posts Neg Reps: 23 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	lol but nice drop............

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