05/19/08 - Freestyle Pt. 1

mCKLEpTo05 · 05-19-2008, 03:14 AM

AS I walk through the valley of death and creed
I start to visualize that rap is my stepping seed
I'm back now and I'm equiped with 3 guns with 6 clips
And Im ripped off that piff, the dro got my throat narrow like a stick
Shit, I'm on now, and it takes more than a fat bitch to turn me off
I got more than a G, and 4 times A Key, so come holla at the boss
SImilar rap styles, My lyrics inflict damage on the weakest
Yes I'm the cleanest, and i wanna be a millionaire after regis
My eye contact give your girls the goose bumps
she knows that me looking into her eyes makes me feel like I got her
I want her, so I promised I would teach her to be creative alone like an author
my rhymes somthing like carters, because the picture my words paint is a boston slaughter
Be my woman tonight, mc klep got thing that got ya feeling ya self
with me baby, you won't need no help
why them pants on still u dont need no belt
u just sit there like bank's cd on the shelf
and I'm come inside your warm palace and make myself at home
Ill do what I please, and U Know I Please pussy so Ill keep doing it
u dont have a swag like mine if u tried to bite my style u would ruin it

Lil Brizzle · 05-19-2008, 05:48 AM

the first bar was good.....but it seemed to gradually fall apart as i went down each bar.....ur flow was good but u could have added extra multies as well and some parts didnt really make sense.....

but i see potential.....stay up.....

05-19-2008, 03:14 AM	#1
mCKLEpTo05 Banned Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Playa Posts: 9 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	05/19/08 - Freestyle Pt. 1 05/19/08 - Freestyle Pt. 1 AS I walk through the valley of death and creed I start to visualize that rap is my stepping seed I'm back now and I'm equiped with 3 guns with 6 clips And Im ripped off that piff, the dro got my throat narrow like a stick Shit, I'm on now, and it takes more than a fat bitch to turn me off I got more than a G, and 4 times A Key, so come holla at the boss SImilar rap styles, My lyrics inflict damage on the weakest Yes I'm the cleanest, and i wanna be a millionaire after regis My eye contact give your girls the goose bumps she knows that me looking into her eyes makes me feel like I got her I want her, so I promised I would teach her to be creative alone like an author my rhymes somthing like carters, because the picture my words paint is a boston slaughter Be my woman tonight, mc klep got thing that got ya feeling ya self with me baby, you won't need no help why them pants on still u dont need no belt u just sit there like bank's cd on the shelf and I'm come inside your warm palace and make myself at home Ill do what I please, and U Know I Please pussy so Ill keep doing it u dont have a swag like mine if u tried to bite my style u would ruin it

05-19-2008, 05:48 AM	#2
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 143 Times in 82 Posts	the first bar was good.....but it seemed to gradually fall apart as i went down each bar.....ur flow was good but u could have added extra multies as well and some parts didnt really make sense..... but i see potential.....stay up..... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

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