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Old 05-18-2008, 11:41 PM   #1
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05/18/08 - DX - Self Destruction

Infatuated with failure, he couldnt cope with his sorrow
He only stayed alive from his hope for tomorrow
Wanted to go back, do things differently, escape misery
But he was limited by reality, he couldnt reshape history
As a result, chasing victory, was no longer his mission
Inferior position , shut up, cause no one would listen
But then he had a vision, shut off the television
And realized he could escape his self-created prison
He flees from the law, puts the key in the door
Runs out of the cell, he is freed from before
Yet, he wonders if its that easy to escape
Does he go back in time, just to make the same mistake
He has cancer in his brain, he needs an answer for his pain
Cause whatever he does, he's implanted in disdain
Hes always in court, you the see the worry in his eyes
Doing whatever he can, to convince the jury of his lies
He hurries his demise, believes hes not worthy of his life
Joy and pleasure came second to his fury and his strife
He worries up at night, dissatisfied and dismayed
Not about how to cure AIDS, but how he is portrayed
For days, he would contemplate an act of redemption
But he stayed quiet, afraid to attract some attention
He needed help, but you needed stealth to touch him
So he kept walking down the path of self-destruction
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Old 05-18-2008, 11:55 PM   #2
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this was good homie....good concept with good flows and multies.....i enjoyed this throughout the whole thing......

and stay up....ur one of the better ones on this site currently so it would be good to post some of ur shit as often as possible.....keep up the good work....
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Old 05-19-2008, 06:00 PM   #3
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Old 05-19-2008, 08:55 PM   #4
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shit waz fire dx....
stay on ya grind bro...
flowed well
lyrics waz decent
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Old 05-20-2008, 06:38 PM   #5
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appreciate that ^^^^6
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Old 05-20-2008, 09:16 PM   #6
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Old 05-21-2008, 09:11 PM   #7
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