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05-07-2008, 04:01 PM
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05/07/08 - +++Never Stop+++
3 years runnin and still got it locked....
Them other niggas is wack, to show some skill their reluctant Consider the lyrics "crack" cause every line contains substance Those who display nothin but garbage are subject to rough fates MCs be gassed up until they catch a tough break/brake You possess the potency of a much less dope MC Can't fuck with me, yet luckily, you study my flows for free Little niggas, you lack the skill to detest me openly Try to embody everything I represent to no degree I find alot of flaws in ya mindless monolouge I move with a fluent message, you just rhymin because Peeped ya game, a bunch of flex, no bars just all talk Silently waitin in the background for Plex to fall off But ask yaself, how much time is longer than forever? Fuck the illusions in ya thoughts, son you'll never be better Rhymers, I'm one of the best of them, this is my testament Givin yall niggas hell yet I'm initially heaven sent I flow religously, envison me, not claimin victory The day I drop a wack verse, that'll be some shit to see Lyricism and real wars both get handled the same Continue eggin me on, the "heat" will scramble ya brain
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05-07-2008, 04:48 PM
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pretty nice....yu'r rhyme schemes are pretty good...gettin better at them almost every drop....and the way yu wrote ya lyrics were complex....some ight wordplay in there too...8/10...stay up fam
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05-07-2008, 11:55 PM
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Komplex those were great, but check out my punchline thread. There's some pretty good ones by me.
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05-08-2008, 12:30 AM
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***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
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good drop..
lyrics and everything waz str8...stay..up like ya consistency...str8 up...////
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05-08-2008, 08:22 PM
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no doubt. good looks on the feed.
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05-09-2008, 02:31 AM
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damn komplex this was great.....ur better than most ppl on this forum.....ur rhyme structure is great and so was ur flow.....stay up....i enjoy ur shit man.....
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05-10-2008, 06:01 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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thanx man.
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05-12-2008, 06:38 AM
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Cum n Get mE!!!
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Damn ryt, this is Sick! keep it up!
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05-13-2008, 03:09 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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........no doubt.
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05-15-2008, 02:28 AM
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Poetic Swagger
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up.................
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05-18-2008, 06:52 PM
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05-18-2008, 07:34 PM
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05-19-2008, 03:01 PM
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nerd ass nigga?...i'll open up a keg of whoop ass on ya bitch ass....yu the one online ay day beefin with people on purpose to entertain yaself...yu the nerd...faggot
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05-20-2008, 06:25 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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up.........
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05-22-2008, 02:05 PM
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Great drop Komplex you know I enjoy these drops might have to make a big brother part 2 since the old one got lost lol
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05-23-2008, 05:47 PM
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lol, no doubt. thanx fam.
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05-23-2008, 07:18 PM
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my nigga plex this shit was ill 9/10
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05-25-2008, 06:00 PM
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that's what's up. good lookin out my nigga.
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05-25-2008, 06:50 PM
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Them other niggas is wack, to show some skill their reluctant
Consider the lyrics "crack" cause every line contains substance You possess the potency of a much less dope MC Can't fuck with me, yet luckily, you study my flows for free good shit Plex. Im sorry i didnt see this earlier. Great wordplay incorporated into a consistent and steady flow. Very good drop.
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05-26-2008, 07:41 PM
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Sorry For Sleeping On This.
It Woke Me Up. The Entire Verse Was Fire
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05-27-2008, 09:03 AM
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Poetic Swagger
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aite X, Pistol what's poppin?
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05-27-2008, 09:42 PM
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up.........
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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05-27-2008, 10:48 PM
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this was some hot shit...flow was off on a line or two...go shit...good inner rhyme skhemez...last line killed it...vokab was up there....subjekt matter kould have been better but u still killed it
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05-28-2008, 12:19 AM
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Showed me this on aim when I couldn't post.. you know what it is Plex. Told u it was hot once, wont hesistate again. You still doin' u fam.
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05-29-2008, 07:30 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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good looks Souljah & Prov.
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