04/16/08 - cherry blossom

RodKnee · 04-16-2008, 12:50 PM

i'm an apple in tha fig tree
Aint no one gun' diss me
According to my grandaddy the only way out is the way i came in
But i aint fuckin ma moma no matter how many people flamin.
They hatin
Because i got cheese for the gratin
Hoes for tha matin,
Plastic for tha way in
I know tha bouncer know how to work an american express
Im walking in da club lookin for me a mess
A creampie she gun' get
Chedder's the man
He need a can surgically removed from his hand. Honkey

Truup · 04-16-2008, 06:24 PM

um iight ryme scheaming flow kinda basic but got potential keep at it spit longer one

Threyev · 04-17-2008, 05:17 PM

this is really like 6 or 7 lines... yu cut them all in half and start a new line. not only was it too short, but the rhyming was pretty basic and its on a subject ive heard a million trillion times befor and much better to. u seem to fit the description of a true ass ethug to me, but w-e.

keep spittin, but do somethin different with yur style.

RodKnee · 06-21-2008, 08:12 PM

cheers fo the feedback babes x

RodKnee · 08-17-2009, 04:20 PM

HEAT

04-16-2008, 12:50 PM	#1
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,133 Repped: 710 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	04/16/08 - cherry blossom 04/16/08 - cherry blossom i'm an apple in tha fig tree Aint no one gun' diss me According to my grandaddy the only way out is the way i came in But i aint fuckin ma moma no matter how many people flamin. They hatin Because i got cheese for the gratin Hoes for tha matin, Plastic for tha way in I know tha bouncer know how to work an american express Im walking in da club lookin for me a mess A creampie she gun' get Chedder's the man He need a can surgically removed from his hand. Honkey

08-17-2009, 04:20 PM	#5
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,133 Repped: 710 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	HEAT __________________ Put me in you

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04-16-2008, 06:24 PM	#2
Truup Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: BULL CITY Posts: 66 Repped: 0 Repped 4 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	um iight ryme scheaming flow kinda basic but got potential keep at it spit longer one

04-17-2008, 05:17 PM	#3
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	this is really like 6 or 7 lines... yu cut them all in half and start a new line. not only was it too short, but the rhyming was pretty basic and its on a subject ive heard a million trillion times befor and much better to. u seem to fit the description of a true ass ethug to me, but w-e. keep spittin, but do somethin different with yur style.

06-21-2008, 08:12 PM	#4
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,133 Repped: 710 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	cheers fo the feedback babes x