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03-08-2008, 11:43 AM
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03/08/08 - Brain Damage (Verse 1)
First “Strike On The Mike”, blazing Volcanic Flow Flavor As my instincts go Active More Major in the Panic Zone Layer But if these “Molecular Substances” start breaking down and Denature It’s like I better “Turn Back To God” and rename him Traitor But god “Provided Me Style” with a couple Oozing Of Brains Alike the “7 Days Of Creation” I was who he was Choosing To Make It’s the obstacle courses “Forming Warm”, coming in Groups Of Variety “Orbit My Head” with confusion, stress over Loops Of Anxiety So I’m “Falling Back” With The Sheet, calling rap To The Street In this track I’m The Heat, so “Stay Relaxed” With My Beat (echo) That’s only if I could chill for Real “You Know The Deal” work harder or your knees will Kneel Rewards of “One’s Lifetime” could be handed without Love As there ain’t no “Wide Expansion” to the learning Curve Mankind’s supposedly aimed “For The Fittest” Not For Fun “Sweat Dripping” through agony like we beside the Hottest Sun So as I “Stare At My Table”, gazing as These Bacteria Books are “What It’s Made Off”, that’s why I at Least Track The Media |
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03-08-2008, 02:48 PM
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no multies half the time...n the other half they were forced out the ass....this was booty cake
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03-09-2008, 06:25 AM
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03-09-2008, 03:10 PM
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active more major...panic zone danger....that aint forced out the ass?...no yu aint better then me...and yes this was ass...you forced the fuck outta ya multies...yu eminem wannabe
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03-09-2008, 03:12 PM
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lmao.....Baller done became the Grim Reaper around this mufucka.
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03-09-2008, 07:44 PM
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What the fuck you saying?
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03-09-2008, 08:55 PM
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ur not really talkin bout nothin like im lost...but its iight...
holla atcha boi |
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03-10-2008, 07:02 AM
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Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD
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multies were forced
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03-10-2008, 07:50 AM
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lmao bout the multies being forced out the ass...they were clearly not...
they even made clear sense so how can they be forced... anyways heres a new line instead Talk bout my first time on paper, had my sweat dripping in fire Setting me a bickering cry with a ripping desire On the teaching supply shining them flickering lights And I was ignorant high as my works weren’t given in time I ain’t sublime for the time, I’m sublime for a rhyme Hear my chime every line that convey any mime Cause there can be many Brian with fantasy on my mind It’s meant to be for the blind not mentally for my kind All these pressure in the air, and pressure in the sky Make me stressing over there, I think there has to be a lie Nervous system crashing, too much work asking Could burn this wisdom, trash it for the never everlasting All the waste to the drains, all the taste to my brains But how many places have trains that trace you to fame? Before you ask look at me, more or less two or three Saw the test fooling me for my best usually Good signals have a point in life so just hear me! I don’t do what I don’t wanna, so flip the coin and strive clearly! Brian = My real name |
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03-10-2008, 09:51 AM
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Idk what they saying about you but I think your good. Your not the most complex but your rhymes get to the point nicely.
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03-10-2008, 04:10 PM
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this was ight could have been better 7/10
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03-10-2008, 04:25 PM
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who the fuck rates their own songs loser
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03-11-2008, 04:11 AM
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Cum n Get mE!!!
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nah, bro, u more than Good. Keep it up!
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03-11-2008, 06:25 AM
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^^propz and thanks for the feedback from most of yall
but just a question...which of my verses were u talking about? the first one i posted or the second one? |
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03-13-2008, 02:50 AM
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anymore feedback???
can u guys also give me a feedback on my second verse as well.... |
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03-13-2008, 12:34 PM
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***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
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this was iight...
but like truth said.. couldve been betta... comment my shit unfortunate soulja
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03-13-2008, 01:25 PM
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^^ which verse of mine u talking about btw...the first one i posted or the second one...
how could i improve them? |
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