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02-29-2008, 01:30 PM
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Young J
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02/29/08 - The Format feat. Tha Truth
Tha Truth Truths weapons at large a lethal capability puttin niggas out of deposit like a quadriplegics agility verbs of attracted reflexions rhymin on magnitized mirrors provide.em with sleep demotion era the symbol of night terrors tested.by sharp thrives listen cause the grand finale approachin hit ya with pesticidle rhymage my nigga prov got em roachin framin my thoughts with pictured statements mind intentions incarcerated by time detentions travelin to lines of fine inventions im laced to inflitrate discussions thru vibes of chronic desruptions combine ya stomach with volcanic fluids for the internal eruption takin gymnastics at heart the way ya bloodline flippin chambers life is misdeveloped like cars driven throught airplane hangers me & prov commenin a formation of true visualized distributions its.like i penalize lames rhymes with statutory lyrical executions the way i do it u'd think i was categorized the top recruited cause in my own form ima remain undisputed J Prov
Mental Structure Functions Fluent With Facts Pursuing Tracks Under The Influence Of Crack With Proven Raps, Never Grams `Less Its Haze Settings Caged Full Of Rage, My Confession Faze Addressing Hate, Enemies Road And Locate Homes It Was Written Unforgiven In My Homemade Poems The No Safe Zone, Get Your Face Blown, Never Me Undisputed, Undefeated.. Heatin', That's Forever G Sympathy They Cryin For, Hip Hop I'm Dying For Beast Creatures Like Us Are Extinct Like Dinosaurs So When We Gone, Showcase Fossils As The History I'm Brand Tight Like Aeropostle, Check The Imagery Similies Are Mayweather Strikes, Smart And Quick Attitude's Acting Rude, Haymakers Carve Em Stiff Riding Learning Lessons, Just Driving For Perfection "Moms Had" Said "Fuck Hip Hop" And It Born A Legend |
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02-29-2008, 03:38 PM
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good shit my nigga ya verse was ill
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02-29-2008, 06:34 PM
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***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
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classic collab right here..
lyrics was good and it flowed well both of yall murdered that shit.. stay up.................
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02-29-2008, 07:47 PM
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J prov got at that shit maine
J5 got at that shit boi nigga you ripped that truth verse was nice also,but i felt like he tried to force to many big words and vocab into 1 bar and wasn't sounding that great,but he still did good
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02-29-2008, 07:58 PM
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props on tha feed my nigga ^^ and i know this wasn't my best verse i was mad tired when i did it
uppin
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03-01-2008, 12:52 AM
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Both came nice, But J shined on this collab, good transition of his bars, very good wording. Concept could've been better, Interesting nonetheless
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03-01-2008, 11:46 AM
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uppin...............
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03-01-2008, 04:35 PM
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my nigga Truth. Your shit was tite.
---And J-Prov. All i can say is wow my dude. Shit was incredible. On a whole nother level of dopeness that im not used to seeing. Excellent dude. It is hard to impress me but u definitely did. Great work. Both yawl stay upp.... and we three should collab on one track. would be ill
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03-02-2008, 12:31 PM
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good lookz dx uppin.....
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03-04-2008, 02:45 PM
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Young J
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Good looks on all tha feed so far...
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03-04-2008, 03:20 PM
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this was a good ckollab...some lines were weak...truth...you're lyrick/ism seemed forced...J...ya shit was aight...ckould have been worded better...ie. "Haymakers Carve Em Stiff"...itz like you're forcing things to make the mutliez....keep at it tho....6/10
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03-04-2008, 04:42 PM
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THE TRUTH = iT WAS SiCK KiD. iT WAS KiNDA FORCED BUT NOT THAT MUCH THE "BiG WORDS" U USED EM RiTE lOL SO THATS GUD THEY WERENT THERE JUST TO RHYME WHiCH i GiV U PROPS FOR AND U SAiD U WAS TiRED SO UNDERSTANDABLE U HAD SOME MULTiES iN THERE NOT TOO MANY, iF iT WUDA FLOWED JUST A liL BETTER iT WUDA BEEN A SiCK VERSE .. AND iTS NOT ALWAYS ABOUT THE COMPLEXiTY OF THE WORDS JUST SO U KNO, THEY MAKE A VERSE TiTE BUT WHEN U DO THAT U GOTTA GET THE OTHER SHiT DOWN TOO. BUT PROPS KiD
J KiD = Beast Creatures Like Us Are Extinct Like Dinosaurs lOL GOOD SHiT. UR VERSE WAS SiCK iT WAS THE OPPOSiTE OF TRUTHS, SiMPLE BUT TiTE EASY TO READ AND ENTERTAiNiNG THE LiNES WERE DOPE, MULTiES MADE iT FLOW BEAUTiFULLY, CREATiViTY WAS NiCE TOO ANYWAYS GOOD JOB AND STAY UP
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03-04-2008, 11:29 PM
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Young J
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Good looks on the extended feed... appreciate it
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03-07-2008, 01:45 AM
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Im Feeling This, This Is Was Good Both Nice Verses
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03-09-2008, 12:05 AM
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ayo good lookin
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03-12-2008, 07:19 PM
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puttin niggas out of deposit like a quadriplegics agility
verbs of attracted reflexions rhymin on magnitized mirrors provide.em with sleep demotion era the symbol of night terrors those lines made no sense at all life is misdeveloped like cars driven throught airplane hangers WTF DID THAT MEAN? cars arent developed properly becoz their driven through airplane hangers???? wtf...come on now be serious..even you know that makes no sense .....smh.....yall riding this kids dick and his rhymes dont even make any sense....im done feeding your shit its an absolute joke...lawl...you dont make sense...lawl...goodbye |
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