02/29/08 - Follow Me (first verse for an audio)

Tom Chambers · 02-29-2008, 02:21 AM

i don't really do text...this is written in intent for audio...but i want some opinions on it....

feeling like co-signing the last bars of my life//
when i start getting nice...feel i'm too far from the type//
i ain't starvin or light...i ain't the bargaining type//
just an arson who writes...tracks ablaze....pardon the mic//
shape my lyrics over beats...i'm carvin with knifes//
metaphoric gorage orbits with the dark i provide//
my artforms my fight...i'm illustrating pain and torture//
fate is changing...sour grapes who raisin to a famous orchard//
with the aim on chorus to allow the flames to scorch ya//
and have the greaters warn ya to let all the hate support ya//
positive feedback?...there is none present on mics//
lyrically a sight for sore eyes...tracks make evidense right//
skill's evident right?...if you the tentative type//
rappers sendin them lies...don't live a residence lifes//
more like the president's rights...with a veteran rep//
yet these dope MC unsigned and way better then them//

let me know your opinions......good or bad....

BluntWrapz · 02-29-2008, 12:17 PM

that orchard line will sound dope

but lotus what u doing text for, stay recording n perfectin ur style

(btw im not beggin for friendship either i jus decided to be cool since we Gworld audio legends and all)

YoungJ · 02-29-2008, 01:58 PM

This was ill.
I'll be lookin out for the track

02-29-2008, 02:21 AM	#1
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	02/29/08 - Follow Me (first verse for an audio) 02/29/08 - Follow Me (first verse for an audio) i don't really do text...this is written in intent for audio...but i want some opinions on it.... feeling like co-signing the last bars of my life// when i start getting nice...feel i'm too far from the type// i ain't starvin or light...i ain't the bargaining type// just an arson who writes...tracks ablaze....pardon the mic// shape my lyrics over beats...i'm carvin with knifes// metaphoric gorage orbits with the dark i provide// my artforms my fight...i'm illustrating pain and torture// fate is changing...sour grapes who raisin to a famous orchard// with the aim on chorus to allow the flames to scorch ya// and have the greaters warn ya to let all the hate support ya// positive feedback?...there is none present on mics// lyrically a sight for sore eyes...tracks make evidense right// skill's evident right?...if you the tentative type// rappers sendin them lies...don't live a residence lifes// more like the president's rights...with a veteran rep// yet these dope MC unsigned and way better then them// let me know your opinions......good or bad....

02-29-2008, 12:17 PM	#2
BluntWrapz Cold Blooded♫ Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: FunkkyTown Posts: 597 Repped: 253 Repped 120 Times in 33 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	that orchard line will sound dope but lotus what u doing text for, stay recording n perfectin ur style (btw im not beggin for friendship either i jus decided to be cool since we Gworld audio legends and all) __________________ "I turn the ice-grills into rainwater puddles"

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02-29-2008, 01:58 PM	#3
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	This was ill. I'll be lookin out for the track