02/24/08 - OO The Complexitu

Revolution.. · 02-24-2008, 04:12 PM

Here's something

Get Wrecked-Witta-Verse-Quick, So Don't..
Mess-With-The-'Wordsmith', The Rhymes'll-Dominate-With An 'Argumentative Observation',
Coz In "Court", I'm "Constantly Making Points" Like The Odom & Bryant-Combination! (24/7)
Revo, The Problem-Is-Back, A Saw-Will-Attach With Bullets Getting Cought-In-Your-Cap
'Swinging Arms'll-Attack', Giving You A "ozzy ozborne apatite" When You Swallow-My-Bat !!
I'm The Hallow-Of-Rap, Picture The Imagery, Rhymes-That-Viciously Stop A Lifes-Divinity,
'Dont Fuck With Me' Like-Virginity, If You ''Seen Similar Concepts'' Is Cuz I Rhyme-In-Trinitys !
God-Like-Abilities, If You're 'Art', I'll 'Post And Picture You Dead' With Lifeless-Smilies,
I'm-A-'Symphony', Cuz My ''Hands Direction'' Is Affinity To The Mimes-Thats-Feeling-Me !!
You'l Take These Words, Like I Speak-Spressure, You Cant Jock This With Geek-Gestures,
Put A Hold-To-Your-Breath, When I Make You A "Joker-Till-Death" Like Heathe-Ledger !!

Inputs are welcome

pUnChLiNeZ89 · 02-24-2008, 04:19 PM

i was kinda lost through the beggining but over all lyricism was on point

'Dont Fuck With Me' Like-Virginity, If You ''Seen Similar Concepts'' Is Cuz I Rhyme-In-Trinitys !
God-Like-Abilities, If You're 'Art', I'll 'Post And Picture You Dead' With Lifeless-Smilies,
I'm-A-'Symphony', Cuz My ''Hands Direction'' Is Affinity To The Mimes-Thats-Feeling-Me !!
You'l Take These Words, Like I Speak-Spressure, You Cant Jock This With Geek-Gestures,
Put A Hold-To-Your-Breath, When I Make You A "Joker-Till-Death" Like Heathe-Ledger !!

thos lines was really on point in it

Baller · 02-24-2008, 06:05 PM

ya lines are stretched as fuck

Revolution.. · 02-24-2008, 07:25 PM

Thanks, drop links so I can rtf

Revolution.. · 02-28-2008, 05:03 PM

Do it.. dammit

YoungJ · 02-28-2008, 05:08 PM

Pretty ill aside from the stretched lines

Revolution.. · 03-01-2008, 12:56 AM

Thanks Bro

`1

02-24-2008, 04:12 PM	#1
Revolution.. Motha****in’ Volmont.. Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 19 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	02/24/08 - OO The Complexitu 02/24/08 - OO The Complexitu Here's something Get Wrecked-Witta-Verse-Quick, So Don't.. Mess-With-The-'Wordsmith', The Rhymes'll-Dominate-With An 'Argumentative Observation', Coz In "Court", I'm "Constantly Making Points" Like The Odom & Bryant-Combination! (24/7) Revo, The Problem-Is-Back, A Saw-Will-Attach With Bullets Getting Cought-In-Your-Cap 'Swinging Arms'll-Attack', Giving You A "ozzy ozborne apatite" When You Swallow-My-Bat !! I'm The Hallow-Of-Rap, Picture The Imagery, Rhymes-That-Viciously Stop A Lifes-Divinity, 'Dont Fuck With Me' Like-Virginity, If You ''Seen Similar Concepts'' Is Cuz I Rhyme-In-Trinitys ! God-Like-Abilities, If You're 'Art', I'll 'Post And Picture You Dead' With Lifeless-Smilies, I'm-A-'Symphony', Cuz My ''Hands Direction'' Is Affinity To The Mimes-Thats-Feeling-Me !! You'l Take These Words, Like I Speak-Spressure, You Cant Jock This With Geek-Gestures, Put A Hold-To-Your-Breath, When I Make You A "Joker-Till-Death" Like Heathe-Ledger !! Inputs are welcome

02-24-2008, 06:05 PM	#3
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,087 Repped: 109 Repped 241 Times in 144 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	ya lines are stretched as fuck __________________

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02-24-2008, 04:19 PM	#2
pUnChLiNeZ89 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: da BRICKZ..JERz Posts: 820 Repped: 24 Repped 38 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	i was kinda lost through the beggining but over all lyricism was on point 'Dont Fuck With Me' Like-Virginity, If You ''Seen Similar Concepts'' Is Cuz I Rhyme-In-Trinitys ! God-Like-Abilities, If You're 'Art', I'll 'Post And Picture You Dead' With Lifeless-Smilies, I'm-A-'Symphony', Cuz My ''Hands Direction'' Is Affinity To The Mimes-Thats-Feeling-Me !! You'l Take These Words, Like I Speak-Spressure, You Cant Jock This With Geek-Gestures, Put A Hold-To-Your-Breath, When I Make You A "Joker-Till-Death" Like Heathe-Ledger !! thos lines was really on point in it

02-24-2008, 07:25 PM	#4
Revolution.. Motha****in’ Volmont.. Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 19 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks, drop links so I can rtf

02-28-2008, 05:03 PM	#5
Revolution.. Motha****in’ Volmont.. Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 19 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Do it.. dammit

02-28-2008, 05:08 PM	#6
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Pretty ill aside from the stretched lines

03-01-2008, 12:56 AM	#7
Revolution.. Motha****in’ Volmont.. Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 19 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks Bro `1