02/22/08 - No Mercy!

Baller · 02-22-2008, 10:26 AM

My Hungers Runnin Thin
Like Ethiopians In Marathons
But Still I'ma Fuckin Win
Speed Past Competition Thats Suckin Wind And Pick It Up Again
Devour Mc's Till I'm Nothin Slim
Let Wack Faggots Know They Aint Touchin Him
Cuz Even When I'm Pullin Ya Leg Yu Go Out On A Fuckin Limb
And Enough With The Hard Immage
I Rip Apart Gimmicks
Throw Ya Lyrics In A Grave Incase Yu Try To Put Ya Heart In It
I'm Known For Back Stabbin Bitches
Its The Axe Shower Gel, Watch Me As My Powers Dwell
Give Ignorant Rappers Twenty Four Hour Hell
And Push Over The Center Of Attention Like Dwight Howard Fell
Fuck The Spot Light I'm About My Cash
Give A Fuck About A Critic Or A Cowards Ass
Cuz I'm Stuck In My Ways Like My Train Of Thought Was Outta Gas

Komplex · 02-22-2008, 02:36 PM

Cuz Even When I'm Pullin Ya Leg Yu Go Out On A Fuckin Limb
And Enough With The Hard Immage
I Rip Apart Gimmicks
Throw Ya Lyrics In A Grave Incase Yu Try To Put Ya Heart In It

Watch Me As My Powers Dwell
Give Ignorant Rappers Twenty Four Hour Hell

Excellent drop. I see you were experimenting with your structure and whatnot. Once I grasped the structure, I realized how tight the flow was. Good shit. The punchlines were strong too. Stay up fam.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 02-22-2008, 03:51 PM

This Was Hot...

Reading Through Got Me Hyped, You Seemed Mad As Fuck! Or Something, It Was Ill Tho..

My Hungers Runnin Thin
Like Ethiopians In Marathons
But Still I'ma Fuckin Win
Speed Past Competitions Thats Suckin Wind And Pick It Up Again
Devour Mc's Till I'm Nothin Slim
Let Wack Faggots Know They Aint Touchin Him
Cuz Even When I'm Pullin Ya Leg Yu Go Out On A Fuckin Limb

Baller · 02-22-2008, 03:54 PM

big props to both of yall

youngking187 · 02-22-2008, 04:10 PM

im feelin this drop right here
stay up fam

Tom Chambers · 02-22-2008, 06:49 PM

i iz digging it....pretty dope punchlines....

Baller · 02-22-2008, 11:40 PM

^^word fam...<3

pUnChLiNeZ89 · 02-23-2008, 05:36 PM

Im feelin dis drop on da real...nice drop

And Enough With The Hard Immage
I Rip Apart Gimmicks
Throw Ya Lyrics In A Grave Incase Yu Try To Put Ya Heart In It
I'm Known For Back Stabbin Bitches

Hyphy08 · 02-23-2008, 09:18 PM

this would of been koo......if most of your wordplay wasn't in fact played.....flow was nice tho

Tom Chambers · 02-23-2008, 11:01 PM

......^ but the way he connected wasn't played..

Baller · 02-23-2008, 11:25 PM

:/......i iz gettin better i think though

Aceis²FresH. · 02-24-2008, 02:15 AM

Weak Sauce

Hyphy08 · 02-24-2008, 01:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by T0M CH4MBERS

......^ but the way he connected wasn't played..

yu gotta be kidding me......just because he writes played concepts in a different style doesn't make them less played........ive used more than half the stuff he said in his free ages ago....maybe thats why it didn't impress me..

Tha Truth · 02-24-2008, 03:26 PM

good shit my nigga leave me some feed

Baller · 02-28-2008, 02:39 PM

.......................

YoungJ · 02-28-2008, 03:02 PM

Mad ill.. lovin the flow on this shit.

Baller · 03-15-2008, 11:33 AM

word............

J~Souljah · 03-15-2008, 12:58 PM

This was good....the punches acKtually surprised me.....your strucKture was a bit too unorthadox at times....pretty good though

DXavier23 · 03-15-2008, 05:38 PM

yo wattup baller. good shit right here. the piece flowed real nice and ur punches and multies were on point

Baller · 03-16-2008, 02:08 PM

word...life

Don Sheeba · 03-16-2008, 02:36 PM

and yu think yu cute

Baller · 03-16-2008, 02:54 PM

lmao..am i not?

Tom Chambers · 03-16-2008, 04:10 PM

Quote:

yu gotta be kidding me......just because he writes played concepts in a different style doesn't make them less played........ive used more than half the stuff he said in his free ages ago....maybe thats why it didn't impress me..

^lmfao........you ready hyphy........99% of the wordplay is played....the way you connect the wordplay to some sort of simile/metaphor is what makes it now a days....

Don Sheeba · 03-16-2008, 04:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by T0M CH4MBERS

^lmfao........you ready hyphy........99% of the wordplay is played....the way you connect the wordplay to some sort of simile/metaphor is what makes it now a days....

and thats the sad part...people don't use creativity anymore...

Baller · 03-22-2008, 01:48 PM

^^didnt yu tell me yu had a 'shells' wordplay?......thats a played wordplay hyphy.....yu basically said yu didnt like my verse cuz of shit like that...or some stuff yu used...and to be honest...the only one i have actually seen used is the train of thought but i thought i flipped it and put an extra wordplay in there...but its wutever...i'm gonna stay on my grind n keep gettin better...*looks back 4 months ago and sees how bad he was*

02-22-2008, 10:26 AM	#1
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 243 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	02/22/08 - No Mercy! 02/22/08 - No Mercy! My Hungers Runnin Thin Like Ethiopians In Marathons But Still I'ma Fuckin Win Speed Past Competition Thats Suckin Wind And Pick It Up Again Devour Mc's Till I'm Nothin Slim Let Wack Faggots Know They Aint Touchin Him Cuz Even When I'm Pullin Ya Leg Yu Go Out On A Fuckin Limb And Enough With The Hard Immage I Rip Apart Gimmicks Throw Ya Lyrics In A Grave Incase Yu Try To Put Ya Heart In It I'm Known For Back Stabbin Bitches Its The Axe Shower Gel, Watch Me As My Powers Dwell Give Ignorant Rappers Twenty Four Hour Hell And Push Over The Center Of Attention Like Dwight Howard Fell Fuck The Spot Light I'm About My Cash Give A Fuck About A Critic Or A Cowards Ass Cuz I'm Stuck In My Ways Like My Train Of Thought Was Outta Gas __________________

02-22-2008, 02:36 PM	#2
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Cuz Even When I'm Pullin Ya Leg Yu Go Out On A Fuckin Limb And Enough With The Hard Immage I Rip Apart Gimmicks Throw Ya Lyrics In A Grave Incase Yu Try To Put Ya Heart In It Watch Me As My Powers Dwell Give Ignorant Rappers Twenty Four Hour Hell Excellent drop. I see you were experimenting with your structure and whatnot. Once I grasped the structure, I realized how tight the flow was. Good shit. The punchlines were strong too. Stay up fam. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

02-22-2008, 03:51 PM	#3
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	This Was Hot... Reading Through Got Me Hyped, You Seemed Mad As Fuck! Or Something, It Was Ill Tho.. My Hungers Runnin Thin Like Ethiopians In Marathons But Still I'ma Fuckin Win Speed Past Competitions Thats Suckin Wind And Pick It Up Again Devour Mc's Till I'm Nothin Slim Let Wack Faggots Know They Aint Touchin Him Cuz Even When I'm Pullin Ya Leg Yu Go Out On A Fuckin Limb __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

02-22-2008, 03:54 PM	#4
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 243 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	big props to both of yall __________________

02-22-2008, 04:10 PM	#5
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	im feelin this drop right here stay up fam __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

02-22-2008, 06:49 PM	#6
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	i iz digging it....pretty dope punchlines....

02-22-2008, 11:40 PM	#7
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 243 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	^^word fam...<3 __________________

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pUnChLiNeZ89 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: da BRICKZ..JERz Posts: 820 Repped: 24 Repped 38 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Im feelin dis drop on da real...nice drop And Enough With The Hard Immage I Rip Apart Gimmicks Throw Ya Lyrics In A Grave Incase Yu Try To Put Ya Heart In It I'm Known For Back Stabbin Bitches

02-23-2008, 09:18 PM	#9
Hyphy08 Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: chicago Posts: 5 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this would of been koo......if most of your wordplay wasn't in fact played.....flow was nice tho

02-23-2008, 11:01 PM	#10
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	......^ but the way he connected wasn't played..

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Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 243 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	:/......i iz gettin better i think though __________________

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02-28-2008, 02:39 PM	#15
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YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Mad ill.. lovin the flow on this shit.

03-15-2008, 11:33 AM	#17
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 243 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	word............ __________________

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J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	This was good....the punches acKtually surprised me.....your strucKture was a bit too unorthadox at times....pretty good though

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DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	yo wattup baller. good shit right here. the piece flowed real nice and ur punches and multies were on point __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

03-16-2008, 02:08 PM	#20
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 243 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	word...life __________________

03-16-2008, 02:36 PM	#21
Don Sheeba I WILL Take Your B!tch Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: chicago Posts: 162 Repped: 26 Repped 21 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	and yu think yu cute __________________

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Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 243 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	lmao..am i not? __________________

03-22-2008, 01:48 PM	#25
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 243 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	^^didnt yu tell me yu had a 'shells' wordplay?......thats a played wordplay hyphy.....yu basically said yu didnt like my verse cuz of shit like that...or some stuff yu used...and to be honest...the only one i have actually seen used is the train of thought but i thought i flipped it and put an extra wordplay in there...but its wutever...i'm gonna stay on my grind n keep gettin better...looks back 4 months ago and sees how bad he was __________________

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