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02-16-2008, 04:26 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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02/16/08 - +++Start Over+++
Heart was heavy from inflicted pains as sharp as a machete
Awaiting better stages of life, new start, I'm ready Since my environment is deadly, I seek protection from above The Devil constantly tries to get me, using the ones I love Refuse to stay attached to somethin that's slowly killin me Growin old, forced to grow cold cause love is a liability Fuck friends, cause when my falls come I land on my own And when I face the Lord in judgement, I'll be standin alone Nuclear/new clear vision greatly prepares me for future battles In order to bypass tragedy, and emotional hassles "Do lines" like coke addicts so I can reveal pain... Elevate my focus, so, through it all I'm still sane
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-16-2008, 05:23 PM
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..:General Truth:...
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ill shit plex i was feelin this 8.8/10
leave me some feed
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02-17-2008, 02:31 AM
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2/10000000000000000000000
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02-17-2008, 07:59 AM
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Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD
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listening to a instrumental,and the flow of this drop go with the beat
solid drop maine
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02-17-2008, 11:21 AM
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Poetic Swagger
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good looks Truth and Drunk.
And fuck you Bhobbito. Tu es muy gordo. :)
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-17-2008, 03:40 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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up................
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-17-2008, 04:37 PM
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nice verse man. good flow throughout and no line is too stretched. we gotta collab tho
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02-18-2008, 03:00 AM
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myspace.com/ObeythePen
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On The Real, Ill Shit...
Heart was heavy from inflicted pains as sharp as a machete Awaiting better stages of life, new start, I'm ready Fuck friends, cause when my falls come I land on my own And when I face the Lord in judgement, I'll be standin alone 
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito 
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02-18-2008, 10:25 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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good looks DX, PB.
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-19-2008, 08:12 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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up...........
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-19-2008, 09:04 PM
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***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
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ill flow...lyrics incredible..
vocab was good.overall 9/10 solid drop..i like your consistency
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02-20-2008, 02:29 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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appreciate that young.
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-21-2008, 03:13 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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uppin this.........
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-21-2008, 04:13 PM
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AkA Sur-Vis-U-All
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ain't as good as lotus..........but still decent.......:-)...
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02-21-2008, 11:58 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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lmao. good looks Lotus.
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-22-2008, 10:15 AM
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Vulture
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was pretty decent fam....liked the concept a lot...yu stayed on topic well and connected every line pretty good...thought yu forced the nuclear/new clear wordplay though....nice shit
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02-22-2008, 09:51 PM
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The Beast
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good shit plex...feelin it...
"Do lines" like coke addicts so I can reveal pain... Elevate my focus, so, through it all I'm still sane ^^lol thats the line you was talkin about right? I give it 8/10 |
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02-23-2008, 01:07 AM
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Poetic Swagger
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^Lol. yeah, that's the one.
good lookz Tambo and Baller.
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-23-2008, 01:36 AM
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P.O.L.O/Attention:Deficit
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see what happens when i post in a thread you get everyone posting
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02-23-2008, 11:02 AM
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Poetic Swagger
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^lol, riiiight. None of my other drops have EVER gotten this much.
Don't give yourself too much credit Fatboy. 
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-24-2008, 04:32 AM
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Poetic Swagger
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up................
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-24-2008, 08:55 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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02-25-2008, 04:09 AM
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Blissful Poetry
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ur closer was my favorite part, the last 4 that is...
"Nuclear/new clear vision greatly prepares me for future battles In order to bypass tragedy, and emotional hassles "Do lines" like coke addicts so I can reveal pain... Elevate my focus, so, through it all I'm still sane" ^dope shit right there... the entire piece overall was very well composed and had an enjoyable flow...straight drop fam...1
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Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!!  Battle Record: 10-1 |
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02-26-2008, 02:13 PM
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Young J
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This was decent. Obviously not your best shit but it was cool.
Nice wordplay. Nice flow. Nice everything. Just nothing that stood out as you usually have. 8.5/10 |
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02-27-2008, 03:29 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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good looks Flex and Prov.
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