12/18/07 - A Window of thought (Lethal)

RapsEnemy · 12-18-2007, 01:33 PM

LA la... {sigh}.. la LA

Got problems? we all got em.. Ha Ha!

"It's just how you deal with them that makes the difference"

A tyrant in his own mind but never present in his own time...
Like every words appearing sublime even though my hearing is fine...
My seeing is blind while believing in rhymes...
Given every opportunity too shine but over shooting the sky...
Too fail is too try.. too succeed is the why..
So fighting for nothing is just a meaningless life...

right? ....

Words can hurt sight thats why they birthed the curse! write..
Ideas too beliefs? thats much worse than working the church life..
You'll pay the toll for unclean sole.. just hope gods working the turn pike...
Or you'll burn with the rest with no hope of a search light...

They can put the burden on your shoulders every morning like Foldiers ..
Too keep a steady flow in one direction for the corporate share holders..
A good life is a one way street.. with no fork when you meet(meat) boulders..
you can choose too eat by any means or fight some one else's beef.. a relief solider..

but you get older...

Just too see what you could have done..
was it really kill or be killed? or did you have the option too run?
opted for none.. no victim.. rather Attila the Hun..
used too be a shield for a sword.. than whats the reason for guns?
a global take over? No.. a peek of thought.. civilization undone...
Maybe if you listened a little closer than a stop of violence would come..

Or you can slip away and put the head phones on

Reptillian · 12-19-2007, 05:57 AM

This was pure wreakage pimpin....
Every verse was seperated well and had that dramatic feel to it.

You got some real talent with a pen. Hope to hear you audio this out one day.

Respect
Reptillian

12-18-2007, 01:33 PM	#1
RapsEnemy Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Queens Ny Posts: 100 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	12/18/07 - A Window of thought (Lethal) 12/18/07 - A Window of thought (Lethal) LA la... {sigh}.. la LA Got problems? we all got em.. Ha Ha! "It's just how you deal with them that makes the difference" A tyrant in his own mind but never present in his own time... Like every words appearing sublime even though my hearing is fine... My seeing is blind while believing in rhymes... Given every opportunity too shine but over shooting the sky... Too fail is too try.. too succeed is the why.. So fighting for nothing is just a meaningless life... right? .... Words can hurt sight thats why they birthed the curse! write.. Ideas too beliefs? thats much worse than working the church life.. You'll pay the toll for unclean sole.. just hope gods working the turn pike... Or you'll burn with the rest with no hope of a search light... They can put the burden on your shoulders every morning like Foldiers .. Too keep a steady flow in one direction for the corporate share holders.. A good life is a one way street.. with no fork when you meet(meat) boulders.. you can choose too eat by any means or fight some one else's beef.. a relief solider.. but you get older... Just too see what you could have done.. was it really kill or be killed? or did you have the option too run? opted for none.. no victim.. rather Attila the Hun.. used too be a shield for a sword.. than whats the reason for guns? a global take over? No.. a peek of thought.. civilization undone... Maybe if you listened a little closer than a stop of violence would come.. Or you can slip away and put the head phones on

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12-19-2007, 05:57 AM	#2
Reptillian Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Clearwater Posts: 59 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	This was pure wreakage pimpin.... Every verse was seperated well and had that dramatic feel to it. You got some real talent with a pen. Hope to hear you audio this out one day. Respect Reptillian