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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Providence RI
Posts: 3,003
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Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts
Neg Reps: 5
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N. Streetz
Are You Ready 2 Die, Im Not Even Thinking About Death Competition Is Irrelavent, Taking They Last Breath Rest In Peices Until The Pimp Sees Who's The Undergroud King Lost For Word? This Aint Fiascogate I Dont Forget A Thing Full Of Energy As Time Goes By I'll Ride On My Enemies Reigning The Game Get Ya Umbrellas or Lost Identity Empty A Mag. Pardon My Ways, Bullets Put Parts In Ya Braids The Spirits In My Ancestry, Got The Heart Of A Slave Challenge Streetz, Im A Fighter With The Eye Of The Tiger I Survived Mayhem, Proving My Skill As A Writer The Games So Worn Out Reaching The Point Of No Return If I'm Teaching You Right, Whats Left For You To Learn? Listen To The Whispers, Ignorance Of A Grown Mans Bitters Can't Stop Because My Mom Never Raised Quitters If Your Shopping For A Deal, Im The Most Convenience Target Stuck In The Pavement, I'm Elavating Past Cement Artist J.ProV. I'm Like A Dealer Smokin Haze, Think High On My Cash Ways If We Clash Ways, I'll 'Onyx' Opponents.. Living They 'Last Dayz' Witnessing Bad Ways Makin' My Mind The New Root Of Evil Want Probs, Gimme A Route To Meet You.. I'll Slide Through And Heat You ..And Ride Through Illegal.. Too Much Pride Fool I'm Lethal Dudes I Beef Wit' Get Hit.. From Heaven They Sayin We Dyin To See You! Ask Streets, You Cant Fuck Wit My L.Y.R.I.C.S... Hang On, Here's Some Proof I Hardly Fuck With You G's Even Tho My Pistol Bang And I'm Tha Truth I'm All About Being Cool Like Lupe.. So If You Got New J's I'm Jackin Those Matchin' Clothes So I Can Walk By Laughin At Fashion Shows.....Cuzzzz My Kick Game Is Karate Like, Back To Life.. I Body Mics Action Fights, I'm Dodgin Rights, Murder Ink.. Irv Gotti Like Too Komplex, Mind Of An Outlaw.. Last Of A Dying Breed.. Bugging The Fuck Out.. Now Pass Me The Damn Weed Haters Cant Stand Me.. So Sit.. And Watch A Lyrical Stampede No Joke.. Last Dude I Battled Pm'ed Me Sayin "Gimme A Chance Please!!" |
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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 1,164
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Rest In Peices Until The Pimp Sees Who's The Undergroud King
The Games So Worn Out Reaching The Point Of No Return If I'm Teaching You "Right", Whats "Left" For You To Learn? solid wordplay and very solid flow. dope verse Streetz. Witnessing Bad Ways Makin' My Mind The New Root Of Evil Want Probs, Gimme A Route To Meet You.. I'll Slide Through And Heat You ..And Ride Through Illegal.. Too Much Pride Fool I'm Lethal Dudes I Beef Wit' Get Hit.. From Heaven They Sayin We Dyin To See You! I Hardly Fuck With You G's Even Tho My Pistol Bang And I'm Tha Truth My Kick Game Is Karate Like, Back To Life.. I Body Mics Action Fights, I'm Dodgin Rights, Murder Ink.. Irv Gotti Like Too Komplex, Mind Of An Outlaw.. Last Of A Dying Breed.. Bugging The Fuck Out.. Now Pass Me The Damn Weed Haters Cant Stand Me.. So Sit.. And Watch A Lyrical Stampede No Joke.. Last Dude I Battled Pm'ed Me "Gimme A Chance Please!!" God damn fam. You bodied the internal rhymes, multies, and transitional rhymes. I liked how you created wordplay with dudes names too. this verse was insane. Both of yall ripped it, 10/10.
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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I Was Born Elite
Join Date: May 2007
Location: In The Place Of Daydreams
Posts: 704
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Upping......
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Providence RI
Posts: 3,003
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Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts
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Nice Verse Fam.. Figured Id Let You Know
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myspace.com/ObeythePen
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: In ThA NotePaD
Posts: 4,907
Repped: 80
Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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Rest In Peices Until The Pimp Sees Who's The Undergroud King
Lost For Word? This Aint Fiascogate I Dont Forget A Thing Yo Streets...I Aint Gonna Say Anything....But You Know What U Did There....^^^ ![]() ![]() Ill Shit Prov....Let Them Pistols Bang My Niggaaa *.10
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito
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I Was Born Elite
Join Date: May 2007
Location: In The Place Of Daydreams
Posts: 704
Repped: 104
Repped 82 Times in 47 Posts
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I Knew Niggas Was Gon Blow That Outta Portportion
I'll Tell You Like I Told 3 Other Niggas I Didnt Know He Said It |
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myspace.com/ObeythePen
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: In ThA NotePaD
Posts: 4,907
Repped: 80
Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts
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Lupe Or Joe Budden....Cuz U bit Two Lines?
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito
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I Was Born Elite
Join Date: May 2007
Location: In The Place Of Daydreams
Posts: 704
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Pimps see the wings on the underground king
Rest In Peices Until The Pimp Sees Who's The Undergroud King Lost For Word? This Aint Fiascogate I Dont Forget A Thing “I’m looking in his casket like he had no face / I was at a loss for words like ‘Fiascogate.’” The Lines Are Similar But Damn Thats Not Close Enough For People To Start Bitchin |
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myspace.com/ObeythePen
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: In ThA NotePaD
Posts: 4,907
Repped: 80
Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts
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You Recycled Em....There Exactly Alike Yo.....
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Providence RI
Posts: 3,003
Repped: 203
Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts
Neg Reps: 5
Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts
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Propz on feed PB
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***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Washington D.C
Posts: 2,517
Repped: 305
Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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This Waz Good..
Both Of Yall Came Through...
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Providence RI
Posts: 3,003
Repped: 203
Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts
Neg Reps: 5
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Good Lookzzz
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Providence RI
Posts: 3,003
Repped: 203
Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts
Neg Reps: 5
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Uppin......
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Meanest S.O.B...BrOwArD
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Gunshine State
Posts: 1,437
Repped: 19
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nice verse from both,but my favorite part have to go to J Prov
I Hardly Fuck With You G's Even Tho My Pistol Bang And I'm Tha Truth I'm All About Being Cool Like Lupe.. So If You Got New J's I'm Jackin Those Matchin' Clothes So I Can Walk By Laughin At Fashion Shows.....Cuzzzz My Kick Game Is Karate Like, Back To Life.. I Body Mics Action Fights, I'm Dodgin Rights, Murder Ink.. Irv Gotti Like Too Komplex, Mind Of An Outlaw.. Last Of A Dying Breed.. Bugging The Fuck Out.. Now Pass Me The Damn Weed Haters Cant Stand Me.. So Sit.. And Watch A Lyrical Stampede No Joke.. Last Dude I Battled Pm'ed Me Sayin "Gimme A Chance Please!!" lots of food wordplay
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"Gangsta shit hereditary, got it from my dad Flow colder than February with extraordinary swag"-Cliff |
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Providence RI
Posts: 3,003
Repped: 203
Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts
Neg Reps: 5
Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts
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ight... nice shit too fam
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Banned
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: united states
Posts: 66
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u sent a subliminal at me when im not on here?
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Queens Ny
Posts: 100
Repped: 0
Repped 6 Times in 5 Posts
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he set up a battle n didnt show wat a bitch
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