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Old 12-16-2007, 05:13 PM   #1
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this is for the niggas holdin' blocks toasting cops on the spot
I'm for the hood, Never talk to a pig unless I was robbed
Real G'z I stand with, your net worth not up to my bandwidth
Ill have you play the meat between fat bitches call you a sandwich
Ask ya momma and ya ant bitch, I got more cred to pull the antics
My words constantly flowing liek sewer systems
You didnt have to get hit but you were with him
Trust me, I know for facts bullets come fast when your whippin
straight dippen, red nova with black wheels like the jerzee of scott pippen
Homie Im not tripping, these cops given me time to pop snitches
I ain't even looking for em and they pop up like pimples
Put holes in their faces, permaNENT dimples, shit this board is simple
too much pussies here only care about their looks like nymphos
hoes, tricks, flips, pancake stacked bitch, these niggas dont flip unless they diving
They don't hit unless they driving, niggas faces look like wet clits when they crying
My iron hotter than africas lions, so imagine the shells burn, Nigga Im worse than Satan

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Old 12-16-2007, 05:27 PM   #2
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never talk to cops unlessed your robbed? so you snitching? real g'z dont do that foo...thats what yu sayin you is..pop u like pimples has been used a million times and wack as fuck...all ya punches sucked...too much gun talk...99 percent of gun related puches are played and no good...u put a few multies in..thats a step up..but u need to step ya game up more every where else also
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Old 12-16-2007, 09:25 PM   #3
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I dont talk to cops unless i gotta report a robbery U DUMB FUCK dopnt rate my shit if u not from the street nigga Ill kill u
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Old 12-16-2007, 10:01 PM   #4
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reporting a robbery=snitching you stupid piece of shit...and kill me? LMFAO
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never talk to cops unlessed your robbed? so you snitching? real g'z dont do that foo...thats what yu sayin you is..pop u like pimples has been used a million times and wack as fuck...all ya punches sucked...too much gun talk...99 percent of gun related puches are played and no good...u put a few multies in..thats a step up..but u need to step ya game up more every where else also
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Old 12-17-2007, 01:35 PM   #7
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^lmfao he must be cuz he just found out that reporting a robbery is considered snitching
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Old 12-19-2007, 12:38 AM   #9
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reporting a robbery from your own house? yeah...smart 1 not when you already have the information when u can beat their ass if u know who did it//what if u dont know who did it? u go out and look for them? what if their from another city? get off this site and stop listening to rappers who think they know what "snitching" is cuz obviously you're not from a hood ur from NM where there is notthing but latinos n white folk....
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Iight first things first I would rate this around 6/10

You should try to incorperate alot more vocab into your verses pimpin it makes for a better presentation. Also if you used an inner rhyme scheme some of your lines wouldn't have seemed as streched as they did. Also, what you have been told about the gun talk is right on that shit died awhile back. If your about using your gunz then you defenlty ain't about to come to a message board to write about it... so, in essence it seems kinda like your frontin. You could also stand to throw in some meta's here and there makes for a more complex verse that people will enjoy reading.. Iight well thats real talk.

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reporting a robbery from your own house? yeah...smart 1 not when you already have the information when u can beat their ass if u know who did it//what if u dont know who did it? u go out and look for them? what if their from another city? get off this site and stop listening to rappers who think they know what "snitching" is cuz obviously you're not from a hood ur from NM where there is notthing but latinos n white folk....
You dont get what i'm saying kid...anytime you "report", "call", or "contact" the police because of any kind of crime or anything involving a conflict your snitching...it doesn't matter if you cant find them its snitching...your using the polices assistance to help you catch someone...and I dont listen to wack rappers like g unit or game that talk about snitches and snitching in every song... lmfao @ latinos and white folk...theres black people too dip shit and there's ghettos here just like about every state in the US...and mentioning that is irrelevant any ways idiot.
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