12/15/07 - ~~~DarK-MeNacE~~~ PT 3

Tha Truth · 12-15-2007, 06:28 PM

Truth the top cannidate selection runnin for the lyrical elections
putin lyrics to perfection catchin rhymable verbs like TD receptions
as im grownin it feels now my time is like currents just rapidly flowin
tryin to keep in knowin u cant fade the breeze whenthe winds blowin
listen dont be amazed that speakin on me can get u on the wrong faze
cause i'll leave ya head lookin as if a bullet graze had parted ya waves
reluctant vision my mind is trappin niggas thoughts like mental prisons
wonderin how i uprisen from the bottom now the top is my next mission
runin this shit proper containin keys elements opposite to empty lockers
put ya lames in a medical procedure cause strictly im an agravated doctor
movin four sides solid so u can say that im cinder blockin my life values
ya'll niggas aint movin shit like liquor corks stuck in ya bowels(no homo)
fuck skippin no weaponary but i feel like walkin on bullets im hollow tippin
diffusin through the hate tearin apart from the unworthy like cells splitin
speakin without permission similar to niggas poppin pills without perscriptions
burned past my friction now that the Dark Menace lays as my description
thought my money was sea level deep so i changed my name to Quarters Blue
then i seen niggas without amputated limbs still comin up short on a few
now its no lies told u could see im a slave to my name like sorjurner truth
they call me the inconsistent gardener cause im killin niggas from their roots
this is Tha Trap movement season so be prepared for severly cold winter
even the toughest niggas cry whenmy success gets stuck in ya like a splinter

Witty Qwan · 12-16-2007, 01:24 AM

Truth the top cannidate selection runnin for the lyrical elections
putin lyrics to perfection catchin rhymable verbs like TD receptions

listen dont be amazed that speakin on me can get u on the wrong faze
cause i'll leave ya head lookin as if a bullet graze had parted ya waves

fav line^^^^

shit was good, vocab was st8, had multies, punchez was their

8.5/10

stay ^

N. Streetz · 12-16-2007, 01:29 AM

Make Your Lines Shorter Fam
The Lines Are Stretched

Tha Truth · 12-16-2007, 02:51 AM

ight props on tha feed

The Franchise · 12-16-2007, 04:23 AM

shits hot man

6 Feet Unda 187 · 12-16-2007, 08:37 PM

Im Feelin Dat Shit Ni66a!!!

Tha Truth · 12-16-2007, 10:43 PM

props my niggas uppin'

youngking187 · 12-17-2007, 01:59 AM

good shit.....MY NIGG
is this the last dm...

U-G'ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ RIDE OR GET RODE ON....

Tha Truth · 12-17-2007, 03:49 PM

props my nigga this is the last one ^^

YoungJ · 12-17-2007, 06:18 PM

i do agree with Streetz.. your structure is hot with that line length in your sig. flow is choppy on the longer lines. But lyrics are hot.

Tha Truth · 12-18-2007, 04:21 PM

ight uppin..............

Tha Truth · 12-19-2007, 04:36 PM

..................

12-15-2007, 06:28 PM	#1
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	12/15/07 - ~~~DarK-MeNacE~~~ PT 3 12/15/07 - ~~~DarK-MeNacE~~~ PT 3 Truth the top cannidate selection runnin for the lyrical elections putin lyrics to perfection catchin rhymable verbs like TD receptions as im grownin it feels now my time is like currents just rapidly flowin tryin to keep in knowin u cant fade the breeze whenthe winds blowin listen dont be amazed that speakin on me can get u on the wrong faze cause i'll leave ya head lookin as if a bullet graze had parted ya waves reluctant vision my mind is trappin niggas thoughts like mental prisons wonderin how i uprisen from the bottom now the top is my next mission runin this shit proper containin keys elements opposite to empty lockers put ya lames in a medical procedure cause strictly im an agravated doctor movin four sides solid so u can say that im cinder blockin my life values ya'll niggas aint movin shit like liquor corks stuck in ya bowels(no homo) fuck skippin no weaponary but i feel like walkin on bullets im hollow tippin diffusin through the hate tearin apart from the unworthy like cells splitin speakin without permission similar to niggas poppin pills without perscriptions burned past my friction now that the Dark Menace lays as my description thought my money was sea level deep so i changed my name to Quarters Blue then i seen niggas without amputated limbs still comin up short on a few now its no lies told u could see im a slave to my name like sorjurner truth they call me the inconsistent gardener cause im killin niggas from their roots this is Tha Trap movement season so be prepared for severly cold winter even the toughest niggas cry whenmy success gets stuck in ya like a splinter __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

12-16-2007, 01:24 AM	#2
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,053 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	Truth the top cannidate selection runnin for the lyrical elections putin lyrics to perfection catchin rhymable verbs like TD receptions listen dont be amazed that speakin on me can get u on the wrong faze cause i'll leave ya head lookin as if a bullet graze had parted ya waves fav line^^^^ shit was good, vocab was st8, had multies, punchez was their 8.5/10 stay ^ __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

12-16-2007, 02:51 AM	#4
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	ight props on tha feed __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

12-16-2007, 04:23 AM	#5
The Franchise Undisputed Gangstas Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: New Jersey Posts: 1,302 Repped: 16 Repped 102 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	shits hot man __________________ ~Undisputed Gangstas~ Generals-Tha Truth, Airtokatlyan, Blue Diamonds, NWA(Deebo),The Franchise Souljas-Heat27, Crime~Dawg,, Silent Killah, Chocobo Killa, 5oX, NS Diplomat

12-16-2007, 10:43 PM	#7
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	props my niggas uppin' __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

12-16-2007, 01:29 AM	#3
N. Streetz I Was Born Elite Join Date: May 2007 Location: In The Place Of Daydreams Posts: 704 Repped: 104 Repped 82 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Make Your Lines Shorter Fam The Lines Are Stretched

12-16-2007, 08:37 PM	#6
6 Feet Unda 187 Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Tha Home Of Crooked Copz N Riotz (Cincinnati Muthafucka) Posts: 513 Repped: 141 Repped 34 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 11 Times in 10 Posts	Im Feelin Dat Shit Ni66a!!!

12-17-2007, 01:59 AM	#8
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	good shit.....MY NIGG is this the last dm... U-G'ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ RIDE OR GET RODE ON.... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

12-17-2007, 03:49 PM	#9
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	props my nigga this is the last one ^^ __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

12-17-2007, 06:18 PM	#10
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	i do agree with Streetz.. your structure is hot with that line length in your sig. flow is choppy on the longer lines. But lyrics are hot.

12-18-2007, 04:21 PM	#11
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	ight uppin.............. __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

12-19-2007, 04:36 PM	#12
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	.................. __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

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