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Old 12-14-2007, 06:55 AM   #1
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Old 12-14-2007, 07:16 AM   #2
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WTF???!!!!!....Lmao.....Naw....This Was Hot Nigga...Looks Like You Weren't Trying For Metaphors And All That....But This Was Enjoyable.

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Old 12-14-2007, 09:21 AM   #3
 
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Crazy shit...but yea...good internal rhymes.....so umm.....6 or 7/10

Mostly cuz it makez no sense
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Old 12-14-2007, 09:29 AM   #4
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Crazy shit...but yea...good internal rhymes.....so umm.....6 or 7/10

Mostly cuz it makez no sense
That's basically the concept and the style of this piece. none of the bars tie in with each other...on purpose.

But each bar has a story behind it. I might do a bar by bar breakdown of the individual stories later.
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Old 12-14-2007, 09:44 AM   #5
 
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That's basically the concept and the style of this piece. none of the bars tie in with each other...on purpose.

But each bar has a story behind it. I might do a bar by bar breakdown of the individual stories later.
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Old 12-14-2007, 01:36 PM   #6
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Old 12-14-2007, 03:29 PM   #7
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High off that purple haze, involved in the perfect daze
Fuck them blue midgets!, I wanna see The Smurfs decay

High times with Stewey Griffin....so fuck the bleeders
Here's a notice, he raped Lois and murdered Peter!!

^^fav lines...the smurf line was my shit lol...idk tho..ovral this hit was fuckin nuts some lines made me laugh and some made me say wtf...multies and internal rhymin was on point...flow was god but not as immaculate on some bars as on others...stay up ma niggs
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Old 12-14-2007, 06:03 PM   #8
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Acid. This My Dude Right Here.... Killin The Roof Like Michael Vick... Buggin The Fuck Out Is Some Dope Shit.. Creative And You Get That Trippin Feelin' When You Readin' It

The spanish chick who tried to damage shit, let me fuck
Tapped her behind, she purred like a feline, lovestruck

Scene.. then Description.. its Very Creative, You Just Need To Understand His Point My Newbies. Overall Dope. 9

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Old 12-14-2007, 06:24 PM   #9
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lol....made zero sense and was funny because of it...solid internal rhymes and multies...laughed at the cheeto line...was an ok drop
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ha wow...this remind me of some southern type rap but mor complex...cuhz it dont make sense..but i see where u was gettin at

decent drop

checc out my jawn... More than music bootleg remix n let me kno wtz gd
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Old 12-15-2007, 04:33 PM   #11
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good looks on the feedback niggas.

and Inanimation or w/e ya name is....fuck outta here faggot.
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Old 12-16-2007, 10:34 PM   #12
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uppin this scientific brillance, nadamean?
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Old 12-17-2007, 01:58 AM   #13
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this was good my nigga...
everything u drop be fire....
keep that shit comin..
and tell animation to keep it movin..get it..lol
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Old 12-17-2007, 04:43 PM   #14
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High times with Stewey Griffin....so fuck the bleeders
Here's a notice, he raped Lois and murdered Peter!!


This Drop Is Iight, My Fav Bar Above
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Old 12-18-2007, 08:35 AM   #15
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no doubt Streetz.
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Old 12-19-2007, 12:17 AM   #16
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up..........
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